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Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 33

Another great chapter. How old would all the kids be in this one, I'm curious. lol And yet another Carter baby! Landon! How cute! I liked the end of this, having Shelby hold him. Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Oh no...my math sucks. Okay here we go. If Shelby's sixteen that would make Brooke twelve. Kayleigh is right behind her. Noah's eleven. Peyton would be nine. Landon of course is two weeks old. Joe and Ally are about a year older than Dan...so eleven and ten respectively. I think that's everyone! :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 33

She needs to get used to it now. I think she will be a good mother because she has great role models. And I knew Nick and Liv would have more kids. I really want everything to work out for them. keep up thew wonderful work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Nick and Liv are guinea pigs...lol, just saying. Even though if they had kept going like they started out they would have like fifteen kids by then. So I've got to give them kudos for just four. :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 32

At least they are talking and not yelling. I think she will be a wonderful mom. It just takes time. I really want her and Mason to work it out and stay together. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 31

She is a good role model. With the kind of family she has normal is way out the window. I just hope they keep it and raise it together. She will have a lot of family support except for Kevin. Please keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Oh you never know...Kevin just may come around after all ::smile::

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 30

Awww shit. She lost one but at least she still has one left. And Mason has to feel bad about it. I just hope their parents let them make their own decisions about it. Please update soon and keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Oh Mason feels HORRIBLE about the whole thing. Glad to see you back Marguerite!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh I bet she is pregnant and had a miscarriage. Shit this will devastate her and Mason. I hope she is ok. Keep up thew excellent work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: Notsku Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 33

I know I comment rarely, but I decided to comment now :). This story is so good! I can't believe Shelby's pregnant.. Weirdddd..!
I just have to say I've missed Nick and Liv! I l really loved the stories with them! Please tell me you're gonna write new ones????

Anyway, you're a really good writer!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for commenting! You'll be seeing more of Nick and Liv in Brooke's story. I wouldn't have it any other way. The Carter clan will be making a spectacular re-emergence. It's just it will be from Brooke's POV. :)

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 33

Lol @ Shelby still calling Nick "Mr. Bob". I know Shelby and Mason are scared but things will fall in place eventually.

Author's Response: :) I love how there's three or four comments about Bob. We all love Nick so much!

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 33

awwwwww sory for the not review the last time but I am still flashed by the whole situation o.O i mean it's sooooo wow and they keep the lil one *sigh* ohhh and what will nick say ...... and baby no 4 wow carter and his supersperm lol
loooooove it can't wait for more

Author's Response: LoL Nick's supersperm will love on forever in Coaster infamy. :) Glad to see you've reappeared!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 33

Dang Carter! Slow your roll, as if three little Nicks weren't enough now there's Landon! I love how everyone's growing up though, I can't wait to hear more about Brooke and Kay. They seem like a trip. I also love that Shelby still calls Nick Mr. Bob, it just seems right. :)

Author's Response: LoL well Peyton is ::thinks about it:: 9 in this story. So the roll was slowed at least for awhile. :) The Halloween saga will be continued in the next chapter. And yay for Mr. Bob!

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 33

good prep course for parenthood

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 33

nice chapter oh Carter no four so sweet. lol love it she still call him Mr bob that kind of sweet.

Author's Response: LoL Yup always and forever Mr. (Sponge)bob

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 33

He's crying because he senses your tension Shel. RELAX!!!!!!! Jeez! Everyone knows babies are kinda like dogs - they sense EVERYTHING!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: Y'know it's so TRUE yet funny about the babies to dog analogy. Ah, I love getting off school and readin your words of wisdom!

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 33

I love coming home from putting my son on the bus and seeing a update. 1 time of the day i can read in the peace!

Wow baby 4? I cant image Nick and Aj with the most kids lol.Cool I wonder how the other bsb families are doing.
Nick speechless is just as rare as making AJ speechless.
Best get use to it Shel if your going to be stressed so is baby.

Author's Response: Ah, you got the first lesson right about stress...they're sensitive little creatures. :) Yeah it would be weird to see Nick and AJ have the 'litters' haha. But it's kind of cute because they're both such kid at heart. So happy you enjoyed today's 'bus stop' installment!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 33

I love this chapter but poor shelby needs to chill out.I know this is a scary thing but I think she will be fine and I love the way babies smell too lol.Oh and I can totally picture Noah and Nick and its too funny lol.

Author's Response: LoL chilling out is easier said than done...but we'll see :)