Date: 09/01/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 32
wow! cant wait to read more!
Date: 09/01/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 32
You'll learn patience Shel. Once you look into those little eyes, you'll be madly in love with a baby, Trust me. Only in my case, it's everyone else's babies! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I am SUCH a sucker for babies...I know exactly what you mean!
Date: 08/31/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 32
Now you see it Molly, AJ and Kevin. After the fact. Oh well what's done is done. I can't wait to see what happens with all this.
Coming home from work (with newborns no less lol) and seeing all these chapters makes me forget the long day at work. Thanks. :-)
Author's Response: Aw Rachel your welcome :) I'm highly enjoying my work on this story.
Date: 08/31/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 32
Amazing job can't wait to see how it all will play out. Loved it.
Author's Response: I can't wait to see how it plays out either! haha just kidding. :)
Date: 08/31/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 30
Wow! Poor Shelby to be pregnant and have a miscarriage at 16. I hope that her parents are supportive and realize that she's only human and made a mistake. I hope Kevin also realizes that. Plus God works in mysterious ways. Everything happens for a a reason, even if you don't realize it for many years.
Date: 08/31/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 32
I just looooooooove you Shameless plugs.... btw!
Man... *sighs* Mas got guts! He haven't fear of die!
Well, Santa was gracious about the house thing. Wow.. he thought about it all... if I were Shel I would freak out with all that.....
BREATH!
School, pregnant, live in Kentucky, marriage.... JESUS! LORD!
Hey.. the Party at Carters!!! And K!!! YAY!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, way too much stuff was thrown at her with that little bedroom conversation. Poor girl, her head's spinning. :S
Date: 08/31/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 32
Man, this is all happening so fast and there's so many decisions to be made. This is nuts. lol Great job and thanks for another chapter.
Author's Response: Nuts sums it up really well!
Date: 08/31/10 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
Its been a while since i reviewed!
Wow this story been amazing. you are so good at capturing those emotions.
I feel for Shel poor girl. But i know she can do it.
Mas seems overly postive for a 16year but am sure on the inside he is going crazy.
Author's Response: Yeah I think he's trying to keep like twelve paces ahead because the actual moment is too scary. Does that sound like a good psychological diagnosis? :)
Date: 08/31/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 32
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Have I mentioned how awesome you are? :-p
Three udates in one day gotta love that. As for Only In My Dreams lots of Carter action you say? YES! Sorry...teenybopper moment. lol.
Mason is so grown up he's already thinking ahead. If only all guys could be like him. I really hope things work out and I know they'll make great parents that definitely won't be a problem. And did Kevin admit he handled it wrong? Go Addy!
Your stories are just awesome and ai'm always checking for updates even at work. That's how hooked I am and if I get in trouble I'm blaming you. (just kidding) :-p
Author's Response: Addy had nothing to do with Kevin's apology...that goes to the ex-Mrs. Richardson. :) LoL trust me if I get in trouble at work I'm going to blame all you guys. I've been sneaking in a lot of writing. LoL.
Date: 08/31/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 32
Kevin finally came to his senses!! Dang Mas, we're getting a little ahead of ourselves here aren't we? The baby's not even born yet! But it's uber sweet. :)
Author's Response: LoL yup I daresay that Kristin ripped Kevin a new one over the phone. And yeah, Mason's getting WAY carried away. (but, psst, it is kinda sweet, lol)
Date: 08/31/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 32
Awww now i want to scoop Shelby up like a little puppy and cuddle her. She's so confused, and dare i say a little intimidated by Mason's future plans.
I kinda see myself in Shelby with her "taking things day by day" attitude. She had no idea whats gonna happen the next day, let alone when she leaves school, yet now she's second guessing it all because she's pregnant and Mason's got all these plans. It's almost like she wishes she had plans for her future.
And I'm glad Kevin admitted they had treated them wrong initially. Although... poooooor attempt at a apology. It's one word... SORRY. LOL
And why do i picture toddler Nick when she pictures a mini version of him? Damn Kev and Kris having a Nick spawn. HAHA
And for shelby's fears about her patience... i think she will realise when he babies born that having patience for siblings,and then patience for your own child is completely different.
All else fails... call Aunt Liv. She had the patience of a saint after caring for baby brooke when she was a screamer, HAHA.
I'm wondering now if this review is longer than my last... and hoping its indepth enough for you :) haha
Author's Response: LoL oh wow I'm about ready to scoop up your review and hug it like a puppy, haha. No, I really do feel sorry for Shelby. She's getting complicated to write because the whole situation is so complication. I mean, Mason's like six months younger than her and he sounds like he has it together. Either that or he's just a BIG dreamer. Kevin HATES to say sorry...i think that's the only apology they're going to get, lol. I picture a little Nick when Shelby pictured a mini-Mason. I have to admit that he is such a darn cute toddler. You also get kudos for your analogy about your own child vs. siblings. Haha about Aunt Liv. You're actually going to see her and the whole Carter clan next chapter. :)
Date: 08/31/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 32
HUGE question!
Date: 08/31/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 31
Mason is such a sweetie, not a lot of guys would be that supportive at their age. Hell not at a lot of ages.
Date: 08/31/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 31
Hey, everybody makes mistakes. Nobody's perfect.
(Nobody's perfect, I gotta work it. Again, & again until I get it right. You live & you learn it, even if I mess it up sometimes. Nobody's perfect)
Well, maybe Brian is......sort of.....lol. ;)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Why wouldn't I love Mason? He's sweet as pie! Lol.
Author's Response: Brian is close to perfect. I've got to admit that. :) And awww...Mason's swet as pie. I LIKE that!
Date: 08/31/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 31
So Mason wants to marry her? Aww how sweet that he's even thinking about that kind of future with her. I'm kinda hoping that she'll keep it and they'll raise the child together, they may be young but they both have a good head on their shoulders. They'll make it through I know they will.
Any chance for another chapter today or are you gonna keep us hanging? lol. I'm not good with waiting!
Author's Response: Ah, Mason is the kind of guy you want to snag fast. Also, I have to LoL because you're not the first person to ask about a third update (greedy people!). I have another chapter finished and ready to post so, yes, I am going to spoil ya'all with another chapter. Look for it in about three hours. :)
