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Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 29

oh god... please update soon!

Author's Response: Is tomorrow soon enough? 0-:)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 29

omg, omg, OMG! that can't be good!
And LMAO @ joe "Shelby's dead!" hehehehe....
UPDATE!

Author's Response: Well at least he didn't shove a filthy sock in her face...lol And I shall say it dramatically...'To be continued...tomorrow morning!'

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 29

Omg! Miscarriage right? Poor Shelby! Even though she is too young to be pregnant, to be 16 and have a miscarriage.. thats gut wrenching!

You do realised you have to update again tonight right? Cos... i need an update HAHAHA

Author's Response: That's why I kind of updated NOW. I have hours of homework to do tonight. Which means...no update until tomorrow morning! Plus the next chapter's only half written! Do you love me? LoL

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 28

Serves that asshole right!

And I've the sinking suspicion that Shelby is pregnant! Oye vey in a half shell. I bet Mason never got a chance to tell her what he needed to tell her either - prolly 'cause of Kevin & the McLean - blast it all to Hell!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I'd rather do other things to the Boys too - hehe. ;)

Author's Response: Perfect timing! I posted the next chapter right when I saw you reviewed. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 28

I actually really liked this chapter, it was sort of "normal" for Shelby and whatnot. That sucks about her sketchbook getting taken but it as awesome that she threw up on that jock! Take that asshole! :D

Author's Response: LoL yeah once summer is over Shelby gets more of a 'normal' teen thing going on. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 27

Aw, yay for a decent ending. Hopefully things will be looking up for awhile. On to the next one...

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 28

another gr8 chapter :)

I found this one of the show http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLis7QC-khE

Author's Response: I will SO have to watch that when I get home! I found tons of videos on YouTube this morning :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 28

Awwww Jen, God bless you!! Send my greetings!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh gosh I knew as soon as they got into the shower she was going to end up pregnant but I really hope she is just sick. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 28

Awww poor girl can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 28

Okay....... Alex is a WAY cooler dad than Kevin.. just saying. Oh and the ice creams, love those.
"I GOT HER UP!" he announced. I sooo can see this here at home, believe me.... AWFUL!
Morning sickness..... NO WAY, JEN!
Molls will get crazy with all these kids.... DRAMA!
NEXT!!!

Author's Response: I thought of you today Gabby. One of my professors (well, she's actually teaching two of my communication courses) is from Brazil. :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 28

uh oh... was that.. MORNING SICKNESS?

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh wow so glad you are back and had a good time at the concert! Though i have to say at least in a public school Shelby might find someone like her at least at a good chance and a teacher who understands her art. I do also love how kevin and AJ are coming to their sences please keep up the good work right now your story is getting me throuhg my first trimester lol

Author's Response: Well I'm glad I'm here to get you through! I agree, a public school has all walks of life. I think she probably WOULD like it more. But I won't say anything else right now. :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 28

Sigh. I really hope she is sick and not pregnant. She needs to live her life before having that huge responsibility on her shoulders. But it's not just her fault or Mason's. The parents are too blame for not recognizing the fact that she was planning to be sexually active. There is birth control people. Ugh, sorry this is a real sore subject for me especially when you live with it in real life. I don't think 16 is too young but there are ways to prevent this from happening.

Great job. I can't wait for what else you have planned. :-)

Author's Response: I agree with EVERYTHING you said. :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 28

Poor Shelby. She'll never live that down, time to move to Kentucky! lol Btw, if you find the youtube video of Nick on Brian please give me the link. lol I love me some Frick-n-Frack action. :)

Author's Response: I would never be able to live that down! They've begun to post videos of the Cincy concert. I'm going to upload them tonight and see if SOMEONE caught the piggy back ride. It happened on my side of the stage :)