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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh lord I think she is pregnant. Now that will really go over well. I hope she is ok. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 28

Aw poor Shelby! I have to say that I e xected AJ to act a lot worse when catching them. I guess he figured that the further away he kept them, the more rules they would break. Makes sense. I'm glad they're allowed to talk again. And damn, I smell a pregnancy scare coming for sure!

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 28

Uh ohhh... i smell morning sickness!

And those kids on the bus... totally deserved her barfing up on them! Ugh i so dont miss school days!

Author's Response: I don't miss school either...AT all. been there, done that!

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 27

Yay! AJ finally removed the needle from up his butt. Now, about that "pull out" slip up.....

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 27

YAHOO! She told him off but with respect. I never expected him to give in even a little bit. I guess he is human after all. I can see why he was like that. He doesn't want her to make the same mistakes he did. Now for her to remember that Mason came without a condom. Uh oh. I see trouble ahead. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: LoL yeah well AJ has that problem of trying to please everyone and so that gets him into trouble. And your right...he doesn't want her to turn into Shelby-No-Name or anything :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 27

Oh I'm so glad they realized they were overreacting on Shel and Mason! At least they can call and she got her laptop back. I'm glad AJ and Shel are eating ice cream again. I like him more now. (:

Glad they're over that drama. But I guess there's more drama to come. ;)

Author's Response: I like AJ more now too :)

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 27

I couldn't have been more shocked if Nick would pounced out of my computer screen naked at AJ's reaction. I just sat here with my mouth hanging open and staring...lol!! Glad that he saw the flaw in his punishment tho. Nice job!

Author's Response: Mason was >< this close to being plungered! lmao

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 27

At least neither one is dead, yet. Thank goodness AJ is starting to get it, the same can't be said for Kevin though.

Author's Response: Kevin's a tougher cookie to crack :S

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 27

great recovery.... i was starting to think... oh yeah aj just happened to forget something. but this... shelby and mason getting to talk.... that just made my day! GO TEAM SHELBY!

Author's Response: Yup! Got to love ice cream talks too :)

Reviewer: Basilia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 27

i really like the story so far, im glad that kevin and aj are starting to realize that the more they keep shelby and mason apar the more their gonna want to be with eachother....but shelby really does need to start listening.....cant wait till the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!!!
P.s.- aslo cant wait till the other girls get their stories going!!!

Author's Response: Glad you're reading along! I'm excited about Brooke's and I THINK I might start her story sometime this weekend. :) Right now Shelby's keeping me busy!

Reviewer: MimiCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

AMAZING Chapter!!

Love your pics! You had to of been sitting a couple rows in front of me at the show judging by your pics. It was a great show!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 27

God, can they just let Mason say what he hasta tell her already!? Or is he gonna tell her via phone and/or email??? I bet anything he wasn't wearing a condom & let his load off in her when A.J. spooked them - lol.

I'm glad Kevin & A.J. are backing off just a little. They were stressing ME out with all the pointy stick pacing/guarding I was having to do. I do NOT like to go all Ninja Turtle on ANY of my Boys.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. YAY FOR ICE CREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LoL AJ's backing off more than Kev. But still it's better than before. I didn't want to have to keep you up all night protecting Shelby and Mason. :) And yeah I wouldn't want to go 'turtle' on the guys either. I would SO have other plans. LoL

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 27

Amazing job. I sure. Hope she doesn't get pregnant. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 27

That girl still isn't listening but I think we'll have a pregnancy scare very soon. Keep those chapters coming, I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 27

Shelby has no idea huh? Mason tried to tell her but no,,,she's clueless now but oh boy in a couple of weeks/months, who knows? ;)

I'm glad 'the parents' from both sides are handeling the drama a bit better now.