Date: 08/27/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 24
im so glad you wrote in that she wouldnt use the not blood dad as an attack cause i kept fearing she would. she should have gotten the job made the money and used it to buy her own phone or something. ah cant wait for more! have fun at the concert!
Author's Response: I really can't have Shelby do that...he really is the only dad she's ever known. :)
Date: 08/27/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 24
sorry but AJ and Molly SUCKS !!!
loved it anyways but they are plain stupid acting like this.
have fun and please make some great pics :)
Author's Response: Ah but we loved J and Molls in Twelve Steps...maybe there's redemption to be had. We'll see what kind of pics I can get at the concert!
Date: 08/27/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 24
I wonder what would happen is Shelby did run away? Her parents are doing a little too much where are Mason is concerned. Have fun @ the concert! Wish I could be there!
Date: 08/27/10 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
I want more please! I really can't believe AJ he is a hypocrite. I really don't think that they understand that the best loves grow out of friendship. Though i have a feeling Shelby needs some not snobby friends in her school maybe an artist like her that gets her lol.
Author's Response: Yeah all she has is Ally...that's what happens when you're dad is rich and puts you in a snobby private school. :)
Date: 08/27/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG! LOL! Ok..first off...I love your stories...they are awesome and I love reading them...i scan the site daily multiple times to read what else you have added to each story. Okay..next...Where are you sitting at for the show in Cincinnati? I am going to be their tomorrow night as well! That would be so cool if we could meet up and enjoy the show together! I hope to hear back from you soon!
Author's Response: aww loves the story love! lets see...i know i'm sitting in section 102, row g seats 10-11. Which is left side about 16 rows back if I remember correctly too far for my own liking!). If you stop by and say hi, I've got to keep story talk on the down low. lol I haven't openly shared with my mom my insanity of writing backstreet fanfics. She already thinks I'm nuts, haha
Date: 08/27/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 24
I SAID A.J. would find out about Mason's number being programmed into the phone! I SO called it!
And just because they did shit as kids, doesn't mean Shelby is going to make THEIR frigin' mistakes. Assholes!
*sharpens my pointy sticks even more*
Shel, Mas, I'll come get y'all in the frigin' Turtle Van if I have too, & you can escape to the Turtle's lair, where NO ONE in Backstreet land will find you, unless you want to be found!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Have fun at your concert!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You were right Lenni! BUSTED! :) I can't wait for the next few chapters...unfortunately they DON'T include the Turtle Van!
Date: 08/27/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 24
Aw, I'm kinda hoping she'll blow up at AJ and play the "you're not my dad!" card just for the drama. You know how quickly teens change their minds... ;) That sucks about Shelby getting caught and having those privleges suspended longer. I think that's a bit harsh, I think one month is bad enough, but maybe she'll listen this time. lol Oh man, Shelby's getting ideas...can't wait for more! :D
My first BSB concert is tonight in Cleveland, I've been a fan since I was 6 in 1997 and my dream of seeing the Boys (minus Kevin :( ) live is finally coming true! :D :D Have a great time in Cincinnati!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I think the privilege suspension is going WAY overboard, but well...that's part of the drama. :) Have a BLAST at the concert! One of my friends offered me 7th row for Cleveland tonight but I just couldn't do both. You're going to absolutely be addicted after this one. :)
Date: 08/27/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 24
I hope be does come and sees her. Have fun at the concert. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't believe it's already here. :) My first road trip where I'm the driver. Everyone should be frightened. I make Nick's driving look good, lol
Date: 08/27/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 23
Haha, nice acting job by both Shelby and Ally, sneaky little things...on to the next chapter...
Date: 08/27/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 24
GAaaaah how am i gonna cope with no updates lmfao.. stupid backstreet boys (hahaha)
no seriously.. have a blast! i have a few friends going as well and i'm SO jealous im so bloody far away and cant go.
and onto the story... im totally feeling frustrated for Shelby. I know i would of already blown a fuse right now. Shelby has alot of patience. They are being waaaay to harsh. Like Shelby said.. they are states apart, at least if they were allowed to talk on the phone that would take some of the pain away.
Author's Response: LoL they might be stupid (sometimes) but OH how I love them! ::squeezes BSB...but not too hard::
Frustrated is a good word for it. :( I like writing happy SO much more but it's a necessary evil.
Date: 08/27/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 24
He has no right to take her paychecks away from he. He should remember what it is like being a teenager. Like he was a decent one. hell he wasn't even a decent adult. She will probably hide her paychecks and runaway.
Keep up the great work.
MArguerite
Author's Response: LoL oh we don't have the AJ love going on right now, do we?
Date: 08/27/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 23
I hope they can see each other soon. Can't wait for for more.
Date: 08/27/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aww yay she got to talk to Mas. Although i do have a feeling that will backfire on her at some point. Like someone else said in a review... Aj and Molly must pay the bill so they might see Ally has been calling long distance.
And the more Ally appears in this, the more i can't wait to read her story when she's 16!
Author's Response: That was the good part of Shelby's story...you get a sneak peek at Ally. :) Well, I think we're moving on to the next chapter!
Date: 08/27/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 23
She should've asked if A.J. gets the bill for this - lol. I mean, I am sure it's gonna show they called long distance & Ally's gonna end up losing her phone 'cause of you Shel.
I think they should run away together. Mason can drive so far in his truck, Shel can take a bus or something, & then when she meets up with Mason, they hop a plane off to somewhere. But somehow, they hafta do all this undetected - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I love how you are plotting two 16-year-olds escapes. very sneaky Lenni! And I agree--she should have asked if AJ got the bill but that would have made the lady suspicious and you know how evil those salesladies can get!
Date: 08/27/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 23
hello, just letting you know I am still reading this and OMG! Poor shel and Mason... I hope she can really pull the cell phone stint without AJ finding out. I am constantly checking for an update... love this.
Author's Response: Aw thanks :) I already wrote the next chapte and it took me a moment ro remember you guys haven't read it yet! LoL so I'll keep quiet for now :)
