Date: 08/27/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 23
This is going to get her into even more trouble right? Allys the best but i feel like the parents will not be pleased that she got dragged into this mess. Love it though cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Ah trouble....the girl's the poster child. :)
Date: 08/27/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 23
Hmmmm..I wonder if Shelby ever thought to google her dad? That would give her plenty of background info on just how hypocritical he can be. ;o) Still waiting on Molly to speak up though! I just hope this phone thing doesn't come back to bite her in the butt (which is probably will, cuz it always does)! God bless Ally. What a sweetie.
Author's Response: Oh Google can be a dangerous place :) But you're right...there's TONS of dirt!
Date: 08/27/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh Shelby I feel your pain. And Ally you must really love your sister to risk the wrath of AJ. I wonder when Shelby will snap & point out how many woman her dad had in the past and give him hell. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Ally loves everyone...she's too sweet for her own good. Which will cause trouble later on...MUCH later on.
Date: 08/27/10 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aw, they are too sweet. Shelby is devious, going behind AJ and Molly's backs like that.
Author's Response: Shelby's desperate....a desperate Shelby is NEVER good.
Date: 08/27/10 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
Awwwwww, I hope things blow over and they can be together. You know i wonder if Shelby will go down for Ice Cream anymore with AJ, i doubt it though. I love Ally i wish i had a sister like her, here in the states i am officiailly an only child but in Cuba i have two half brother i have never seen before. But you have me on the edge of my seat. I swear I keep checking for updates at about every 5 minutes lol.
Author's Response: I'm an only child too but I would LOVE to have a sister like Ally. :) Actually, the ice cream tradition will come up again. Trust me :)
Date: 08/27/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 23
So I was just checking out Youtube, I wanted to play Katy Perry's song: Teenage Dream (check it out)....and all of a sudden I thought, wow this song fits perfectly with Love Story. So I wanted to tell you that but to my surprise I saw you already posted a new update! Awesome. Shelby finally talked to Mason, yay.
Author's Response: LoL my husband is obsessed with that song, so yes I've heard it. I agree it is fitting! :) Actually I used Taylor Swift's 'Love Story' as the model for this story. Loosely, of course.
Date: 08/27/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 22
A cellphone....owh yeah! Go Ally!
Date: 08/27/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter 22
so sad :(
i think mason has something up his sleeve as well. cant wait to see what happens!
Date: 08/27/10 02:53 am Title: Chapter 22
Awww! Ally is so sweet! Glad I'm not Shelby right now cuz I would have given my parents the silent treatment for a looooooong time! She'll n Mason need to put a plan togeter so they can see each other without parents.
Author's Response: I would have given them the silent treatment too! Of course, that's kind of what she's doing. I think she's pretty much only talking to Ally---and yelling at all the boys. :)
Date: 08/27/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh I love Ally. Sneaky like her dad used to be. I just wonder why all of the parents are being such assholes? They did the same thing when they were young especially AJ & Kevin. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I love Ally too :) I guess AJ's thinking that a more stringent parenting style will be effective...he's SO delusional :)
Date: 08/27/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 21
Oh now it would have been deadly if she had knocked on her or his parents window. But at least they were finally together and used protection. Now to get around their parents which I know they will. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/27/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter 22
I love Ally now, yay for sweet little sisters. And Brayden and Tristan are little versions of Shelby. Oh lord, the things they'll do one day.
Date: 08/27/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 21
Aw, "Because I couldn't lvoe you any more if I tried." That's it, I'm cloning this Mason and taking him home with me, he's only two years younger anyway.
Author's Response: I could age him eight years and then I would take him home, lol
Date: 08/26/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 22
HOORAY FOR ALLY!! She reminds me a lot of my own sister, the only difference is that my own sister is Shelby's age lol. ;)
And I got tears in my eyes when they said goodbye. I was listening to 'Lionel Richie - Pastime' while reading it. I don't know if you like Lionel Richie but you should look up the song. I think the lyrics suit Shel's feelings for Mason (and viceversa).
One more thing, if Shel wouldn't have Ally, I think she'd just sneak out and do anything to go back to Kentucky even if that is taking another plane back LOL!
Author's Response: I love Lionel Rchie...that IS the perfect song :) I adore Ally...it's kind of laying the groundwork for her own story. :) I think Ally's the only thing saving AJ's butt right now!
Date: 08/26/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 22
Omg so can't wait to see what happens amazing job
