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Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 22

I honestly cried reading the airport thing!

Author's Response: :( yeah it bummed me out to write it!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 22

But dude, Mom & Dad PAY the cell phone bill & will prolly notice the long distance calls to Kentucky! Lol. Oh, Shelby. They are gonna screw you over big time.

But somehow, I had a feeling that Ally would help her out in the Mason department - lol. Yay for Ally!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I absolutely LOVED the ninja comment!!!!!! It made me smile! :)

Author's Response: Gleem for ninjas! :) And gleem for Ally!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 21

YAY!!! FINALLY THEY DID THE DEED!!!!!!

Okay, kinda bad to be cheering for 16yr-olds, but c'mon!!!! It's about damned time they got to do it! I just think it's funny that they ended up doing it on the roof of the house, right above the very people who're trying to keep them separated - lmao!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I know right? I thought doing it on the roof under all those bitchy people was sweet sweet redemption. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 22

:( Poor Shelby and Mason. But Ally's got a great idea... ;) I wonder how long it will take for Shelby to get caught...

Author's Response: Shelby? Get caught? Never!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 22

"Dan's complaints about noisy night squirrels on the roof." Oh now I remembered AJ's Teenage Wildlife video... ohhh yes! "ME WANT BANANA! ME WANT BANANA!" What's up with the Mclean's and monkeys? Anyways... Ally with a cellphone.. mm.. and they NEVER thought that Shel's tiny lill soldier (loved that!) wouldn't be there for her? Their friendship is so beautiful! Poor Mason.... NEXT!

Author's Response: Too bad they weren't noisy night squirrels :) LoL I know McLeans have a thing for monkeys, haha. :)

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

YES I build an ALLEY AND SHELBY FANCLUB :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 22

They weren't even going to let Mason go. Asshats. Keeping pushing them, they're going to push back harder.

I teared up. What a great little sister.

Author's Response: I love it! Asshats! :) Ally roxs

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

GO ALLY! I really wish Molly and AJ would lighten up and actually consider Shelby's feelings. I really do things work out in the end, you have me Hooked on this story i'm practically checking every five minutes for an update lol.

Author's Response: You'll find out why Molly's being such a ...***** but not until later. AJ is just, well, being a dad but not the 'cool' dad by far!

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 22

AAaaaah gotta love Ally. I totally can feel Shelby's pain, at least she has her little sister on her side.

moooore LOL

Author's Response: your more reminds me of a zombie for some reason I can just see like a hundred readers with their arms outstretched going 'mooooore' and me hiding under my bed, lol

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 21

YAY!! They finally did it! love this chapter, was so perfect for them even if it was on a roof. Although i do wonder if anyone heard them, i mean i can hear the birds walking around on my roof... so I'm sure there was some kind of movement heard... right? HAHA

Author's Response: LoL we just got a new roof and I can't hear ANYTHING anymore. So I'm thinking the new roof masked most of the sound. :) but we'll see...

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 21

*squeals* THAT WAS SO SWEET! I didn't expect this at all! I wonder if this was Mason's wish. ;)
She will probably be exhausted in the morning though lol!

Cuuuuute chapter. (:

Author's Response: Oh you can bet that was Mason's wish. :) I don't know about the whole roof part but...yeah. :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 21

Finally!!!
I feel bad for Shelby (and Mason) that she has to leave...

Author's Response: Me too :(

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 21

YES! SCORE! TOUCHDOWN! GOOOOOOOOOAL! HOME RUN! SLAM DUNK! :D :D Now...let's hope they don't get caught getting off of the roof...wait. THEY HAD SEX ON THE ROOF OF HIS HOUSE?!?!?!? Wow.

Author's Response: LoL you've got to remember those two are crazy impulsive kids. Somehow that works for them. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

YEAH! GO SHELBY AND MASON, CONSEQUENCES BE DAMNED! LMAO On to the next chapter...

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 21

Finally! Oh Mclean.. you can't hold on Shel... you know Molls.. your WIFE? Yep....
"Great minds think alike," he said softly. I nodded.
"Truthfully, his thoughts hadn't been far from mine since we were little." YEP... weird! heheh
And now... Lord... he haves a sneaky thing under his cowboy hat.. isn't?
NEXT!!!!!