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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

At least she got to enjoy a little freedom. And Kristen being on their side isn't surprising. She always was the more laid back one. I wonder if there will be a Kevin Kristen reunion. Now that would make an awesome story. As for Shelby and Mason I have no doubt that their parents will not be able to stop them. Please update soon. Awesome story.
Marguerite

Author's Response: A Kevin/Kristin reunion would be interesting but I SO can't do that to Addy. But I had to give her some 'awesome' points at the party. :)

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hoped! By the way... when the time comes... some of your fictions are SO getting nominated by be! I'm probably your biggest fan! When I get the e-mail that you have updated I do the 'obsessed teeny bopper sequel' that I do when I see something about BSB!

Author's Response: Aww...only one word sums up your comments....GLEEM! :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 20

Go Kristin! Lol, finally someone who understands.

Author's Response: LoL yup, but like Shelby said...too bad she's the Cali parent!

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 20

Little rebel McLean! I love it! Screw you AJ! Go team shelby!

Author's Response: Everyone KNEW she wasn't going to stay 'good' forever, right? LoL

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 20

They are so cute together!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, they are super duper cute :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad AT LEAST Kristin understands them! I mean, Yeesh! Kevin & A.J. are being such assholes about everything! Addy & Molly too. Jeez.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I now have four pointy sticks - Thanks TMNT for donating two! Lol.

Author's Response: Uh oh...your arsenal is growing! Yeah if the dad's weren't bad enough the mom's (er stepmom in Addy's case) are a big letdown too! :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh, I think I know what he's been wishing for too. (:
And Kristin! At least ONE parent who understands them!
When I read this chapter, I kept thinking about MTV's My Sweet 16 (I hate the girls in that programme lol).

Anyway, I really hope Shel can make his wish come true! *crosses fingers*

Author's Response: Yeah, I decided Kristin was going to be the cool parent since I had made her so 'witchy' in Nowhere to Go, lol. She deserved a 'web redemption.' I thought about My Super Sweet 16 too...Mason's party def. wasn't THAT bad but well, I know I didn't get to go clubbing on MY 16th!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter 19

This was a good chapter and i hope shelby gets her kiss.

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 19

You're so good....look at how riled you can get one group with the twitch of your finders! Love it!
I really hope that Mason get's that Birthday Kiss....life can't be that cruel can it?

Author's Response: Haha I love that everyones SO Team Mason and Shelby. It rocks. And as for life being that cruel....could it? Hmm... :)

Reviewer: luifis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 19

I think that Ally is going to help shelby to see mason in the party :)

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 19

OK now AJ is pissing me off. Seriously. What an asshole. I wish one the parents would at least understand where she is coming from but its like all of them are against them. It's us against the world for them. Well at least she has an ally (o.O) in Ally.

Author's Response: An ally in Ally...loves it!

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 19

o.o I can't believe this O.O AJ acts like this lol I sooooo can't believe this. For Kev it's okay but AJ ... I mean it's AJ you know what I mean AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAJ lol....
uhhhh if AJ reacts like this what will nick do if something similar happens to Brooke in her story o.O ohhhh what a fun.

I looooved it amazing job but the parents shouldn't act this that long. The kiddos in love and they should both remember how they were at their age ;) and at least they thougth of using a condom :D

please update :D loooove you story

Author's Response: So glad you're loving it! You'll actually get to see Nick later on in this story. :) I have a plan!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 19

Just a question for Kev and AJ, didn't they foresee this when Mason showed Shel his weiner at age 5?! lol dads...

Author's Response: LoL they should have! If Mason wanted to play doctor at age 5 then fast forward 11 years and use your brains guys!

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 19

Uh oh....If AJ insists on being such a smartass Dad (i.e. the ugly pink dress) he'll deserve whatever comes his way via Shelby! I don't understand why Molly is going along with all this. She needs to grow a pair & put the kabash to AJ's stupidity. All they have to do is have Shelby & Mason be in charge of an infant for a day (hell, only a couple hours would do it). :o) Or, talk to a real pair of teenage parents. That would scare them. LMAO

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 19

brothers can be annoy so happy that I got two sisters. The more the adults tell them no the more the kids will want to do it. R the other three boys coming in this story. Just I thought I wonder if Shelby still calls Nick bob lol anyway if both of them want to do it they will find away.

about going bk to the shop it could be worse the person that kicked them out could of bean still there.

Author's Response: I was going to have that saleslady wait on Shelby but I thought her life sucked enough by now so no need to give the parents MORE fuel. :)