Date: 08/25/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
The parents need to get over it. I mean nothing really happend. And if they keep acting like they do now (Kevin/AJ) Shelby and Mason will find a way to sneak away.
Date: 08/25/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aww i really feel for Shelby at the moment. Aj is definitely over reacting...hell so is Kevin. She's 16 and more than old enough to have a boyfriend. Keeping her and Mason apart is only going to make them want to rebel more.
And I'm actually surprised Shelby hasn't rebelled actually. Maybe she is maturer than the adults give her credit for.
Oooor maybe you have something up your sleeve? HAHA
Author's Response: Me? Have something up my sleeve? ::grin:: I plead the fifth.
Date: 08/25/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aw, this is so unfair. Shelby's 16, not 5. She shouldn't have to wear that. I'm 19-going-on-20 and my parents still think I'm 12 sometimes. But they're (AJ and Molly) just being parents and I'm sure it's hard to accept that your kid is ready to be sexually active and is curious and whatnot. I wonder how long this "Mason patrol" and stuff is going to go on? Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: It is unfair...but it's so fun to write unfair! My mom thought I was a kid even when I was 23. It was hell when I told her I was moving out. Got to love 'Mason patrol!'
Date: 08/25/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wow. This totally sucks. lol I feel so bad for Shelby and Mason. On to the next chapter...
Date: 08/25/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMG! Jesus... and I really can see AJ having those things. I think that he will be worst than that in real life, he KNOWS ALL the moves by far.... and those eyes with Kevin... WOW... the air could be cut! And Alex, you were low at some points.. just saying.
Well they are young, everything is so good and wild.
The ENTIRE Mclean set is there? WOW! Molls was right to do that with Shel.
And the brothers.... wow! Well, Al is a lovely sis!
Poor MAson... he will suffer more... Wow... NEXT!!!!
hahaha and the dress! haahaha OH ALEX! hahaha And the REAL bad thing: have to handle these brothers!
Date: 08/25/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 19
I was hoping for a big "You aren't my father" type explosion but shelby looks like on the brink of just ignoring everyone and runing away. Why can't AJ see that Mason is better than some strange boy he doesn't know.
Author's Response: LoL yeah she's just ignoring...she's her own little thunder cloud right now.
Date: 08/25/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aj is so mean. Trying to get Shelby to wear that ugly dress. Lol! I hope she gets to talk to Mason.
Date: 08/25/10 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
no shit.... god im addicted to evergreen stories! damn I am an addict! i am!
Date: 08/25/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 19
Noooooooooo! I knew they would get interrupted! But also by AJ? I understand Shel's POV, I don't like AJ atm either (maybe 'cause I'm just 2 years older than her ;) Man, bummer! I feel so sorry for both Shel and Mason. :( I really like Ally, she's cute. (: Awh I can't wait for the next chapter! (Now I'll go continue reading BATB)
Author's Response: LoL enjoy BATB! Yeah, the dads HAD to interrupt...so totally sucks. We'll see where THAT goes. :)
Date: 08/25/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
I loved this chapter. I really liked the part about Ally and her hearing devices.. I sometimes forget that she was born deaf so that was a great reminder. And I love how annoying Joe is. Lol
And LMFAO at AJ being an ass quack. And I forgot to mention another favorite part from the last chap. Addy making Mason do the newspaper article is just hilarious!
Author's Response: Yeah I think it's important because even I don't write a lot about Ally's hearing devices. Just a little reminder for those that are reading. :) I added the whole ass quack thing at the last minute but it sounds SO Shelby to me. :) Mason's going to get a lot of crap for that article...
Date: 08/25/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
I think aj is taking it a little too far. He's just going to make them want to do it more. Amazing job can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Of course AJ's taking it a little too far...he takes EVERYTHING too far...and not always in a good way. :(
Date: 08/25/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ugh what an awful experience, aj should be a little more sympathetic at least to his daughters memories. When they finally do the deed, it will be epic. Great work. I love the quick updates!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy the updates! Not sure if another one's coming tonight but we'll see :)
Date: 08/25/10 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 19
Something tells me Shelby and Mason are going to rebel and be together no matter what. And AJ better lay off or he will lose his daughter. He has no room to talk neither does Molly. He has slept with half of the known world and she slept with her boss. So they should back off. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Ah, I couldn't help but laugh because AJ probably HAS slept with half of the known world! Time will tell... :)
Date: 08/25/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
Now I wanna hit AJ and Molly! They cant honestly think that a girl her age just knows on her own that sex at her age is wrong! My god this is more their fault then hers! i just wanna scream "i hate you." for Shelby lol!
Author's Response: Shelby would probably appreciate that right now! LoL
Date: 08/25/10 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
The adults are being jackasses! They're even starting to piss ME off & that is NEVER a good thing!!!!
*sharpens my pointy sticks some more* I think I'm going to need an extra two of these, since 4 of you deserve to have them rammed up your asses.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Uh oh...the TMNT might have to come and have a talk with all the parentals! LoL
