Date: 08/25/10 01:46 am Title: Chapter 17
omg omg that was way too funny. hehe. first he had to deal with one daughter starting her periode and now the other one was about to have sex hehe poor aj. cant wait for more amazing job.
Author's Response: Yeah AJ's had a rough couple of weeks. Daughters are really rough on old dad. LoL
Date: 08/25/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww great chapter and lol @ Dan catching them and getting money out of Mason to keep his secret,wonder how long that will last. Wonder also if Addy is suspicious at all.
Date: 08/25/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 17
I KNEW IT! LMAO! That scene was far too perfect! I knew it! Damn!!!!!!! They are SO in for it!!!!!! Wow! Can't wait for more!!!!!!
Author's Response: They were SO close...yet so far. And now they are SO screwed. lol
Date: 08/25/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter 17
I knew something was going to happen. I'm so glad I live by myself. I actually yelled, NOOO! That is so messed up! Man he is so hauling her ass back to Florida. Poor things. and in a pickup. That's so country. LOL
Great job.
Author's Response: LoL at your 'country' comment...you are SO right. :) I'm glad I'm home alone tonight because I was typing faster and faster as I got closer to the end ... I was getting all riled up for this chappy end lol
Date: 08/25/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 17
Holy crap! I would DIE if my dad walked in on me!!! Not just one dad either but BOTH! They're sooooo dead.
Author's Response: Oh yeah one dad is bad enough but having AJ AND Kevin...oh god that's like the worst nightmare in the world.
Date: 08/25/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 17
oh crap, busted. Kevin must have known something was up, how else would they have known where they were? AJ is gonna murder that boy for sure. Teenage love you gotta love it!
Author's Response: You SO have to love it! LoL you'll find out how they found out next chappy. :)
Date: 08/25/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 16
Somehow I can picture Kevin blowing up a plane altough it's more of a Nick thing to do. I can't wait to see if they get caught 'doing it'. I have a feeling Kevin is going to find out quick.
Author's Response: LoL yeah it is a Nick thing to do :)
Date: 08/24/10 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ooooo they are so cute together. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks! to anyone waiting for the next chap I am without internet tonight. Im on my mobile. Will post at work tomorrow!
Date: 08/24/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Omg! What a great chapter. I love how dramatic Shelby is. My favorite part was when she was talking to herself in the mirror. Lol. And I wonder how long they'll be able to keep their secret with Mason knowing...
Author's Response: she's a drama queen...it's why I like writing her so much. I had to laugh at her whole mirror convo...that would be something I would do!
Date: 08/24/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH LORD! Here they go! What a nice present, young Mr Richardson... GO RED!
Author's Response: lol yeah that's not a cheap-ol birthday present right there. ::GRIN::
Date: 08/24/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOL at the plane exploding and Mason paying off Daniel to "forget" what he saw. Holy crap, they're gonna "do it"...can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I loved the plane exploding...poor Kev...his toy got ruined, haha. I can't WAIT to get home tonight and write up the next chapter. Tons of ideas flying through my brain today!
Date: 08/24/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love the way you describe the way Shelby feels about this, I think that's the way every 16 year old think. Like it's gonna change your life, but then you wake up the next day and everything is still the same.. lol :)
And all the hickys, nothing is more ugly, yet more cool whe you're 16 :)
Author's Response: She is like THE classic 16-year old. I'm glad you think I write her well. :) I agree about the hickeys...TOTALLY ugly! LOL
Date: 08/24/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oye vey in a half shell. This part of it makes me think of my story 'Happy Birthday, Sweet 16' - lol.
Gotta love them young, teenage hormones. Though, when I was their age, I never even came close to this. Never even had a boyfriend. No one wanted me. Jerks.
Hope they don't get caught! Again....lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I was in the same boat as you Lenni. My now husband was one of those jerks, haha. :)
Date: 08/24/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh my godddddddddddd i cant wait to read the next part!!! is dan gunna blab? or ask for more hush money? this could become very costly. i secretly want kevin to find out, the phone call to AJ would probably be priceless. this is so great, keep up the great work and ... update soon!!
Author's Response: da da dunnnnnnnnnnnn :) I will keep my lips nice and sealed right now!
Date: 08/24/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmyyyyyyyy.......
I knew Daniel would find out...LOL at least he's good at keeping secrets for a fee! LOL
Author's Response: LoL the kids not dumb...good thing Mason got a job!
