Date: 08/24/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOL at Dan busting them. Ah blackmail at its best.
Uh oh. Why do I have a feeling something bad is about to happen? If they do go for it they better use protection. Maybe they should be going to Wal-Mart. Ha Ha.
Great job can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: ::rotflmao:: I had a blonde moment and I was like--why should they go to Wal-mart? And then I backtracked...and now I'm sitting at work laughing.
Ah, good times. :)
Date: 08/24/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
I literally slapped my hand against my mouth when I read Dan busted them, as if Shel was sitting in front of me telling it and that would be my reaction lol!
Lines that made me laugh my ass off:
"I saw you sucking Shelby's face off!"
Dan began to inhale like a human vaccum cleaner. - I could just imagine him doing that!
I'm nearly bouncing on my chair for the next chapter!!! (I think everybody is)
And I just figured I haven't even finished reading Babies and the Band and Twelve Steps. :O No wonder I was surprised to read in this one that AJ and Molly were married AND had kids! Too bad there are other things I HAVE to do now. I don't even know what was the last chapter I read of those two stories. Oh lord...
I will review in those two too! (: (that will make up for all the chaps I didn't review hehe)
Author's Response: Ah, gotta love Dan catching them. I blame Mason. You don't go into your bro's treehouse. Rule #1!!! LoL yeah if you haven't finished BATB and 12 Steps you're going to be really surprised! There's another Carter floating around too! And a Dorough and---I'll just let you read :)
Date: 08/24/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh lord I hope they know what they are doing. And that they use protection. Awesome update. Keep them coming.
Marguerite
Author's Response: LoL two teenagers? Knowing what they're DOING? hahahahahahah
Date: 08/24/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
*mouth hangs open*
Date: 08/24/10 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
Mason + Shelby = Trouble
Author's Response: I'd say that equation works out absolutely RIGHT. :)
Date: 08/24/10 08:37 am Title: Chapter 15
Lol, Mason can't win from Shel. ;) (referring to the dinner scene)
'I was braless and now he wanted me to try on dental floss.' - that's probably the perfect description about how I think about those things LOL!
Shel came up with a quick and good excuse when Kevin noticed the Victoria's Secret bag. You go girl! (:
(See, I told you I would review more)
Author's Response: LoL I never doubted you! the dinner scene amused me just writing...girls have more leverage with footsie than guys do! And I agree, dental floss was THE perfect desription. :)
Date: 08/24/10 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it....I want a partner in Crime like Mason.......life would be oh so much more interesting! I too look forward to my email updates! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Oh a partner in crime like him is dangerous...kind of like Livvy's Nick...of course...that's the GOOD kind of danger!
Date: 08/24/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 15
OH LORD! This was my fave chapter till now! This sneaky Richardson is good.... I can see his grin and attitude all over the place. What was that dinne??? WOW! Shel is a young Molls.. I can see more, WAY more moves coming.. poor Mclean.... he have NO idea... hahhahaha
Now my beloved Victoria's Secret... awww.... it was... HOT HOT HOT! WOW! No comments.... just.. HOT!
"There? Your dad lets you shop there?"
I smiled. "My dad's AJ McLean." She LOVED have to say that... hahahah...
Oh Dan.. you are PERFECT! Mas calculated every step that his dad and brother would do! Now THAT is HOW to be a Richardson!
These parents should be more aware of their kids... judge THEIR actions! The next generation is WAY more improved, guys! AJ + Molls taking care of Shel.... Kevin + Kristin + Addy+ Sneaky full of abilities Mas! Shel + Mas = HOT CRAZY RED MESS!
NEXT!
P.S.: The Mcleans will have SOOOOOOO MUCH to worry about... all those boys in action.. *shaking head* Well... those fathers will... oh.. you guys got my point!
NEXT˛!
Author's Response: It's funny but I can almost see Mason looking up a map of the mall on his computer and plotting strategically where to go buy clothes in order to get her to VS lol. So sneaky and I LOVES it!
Date: 08/24/10 03:54 am Title: Chapter 15
They are getting a little reckless but I love it!
Girl there is going to come a time when you regret looking older. Ha ha.
I freaking (heart) this story. I look forward to the emails saying it was updated. Keep them coming. :-p
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you look forward to the updates! And you are SO right about the 'old' compliment...it SO catches up with you!
Date: 08/24/10 03:09 am Title: Chapter 15
wow, i cant wait to see what kind of "crimes" get committed this summer with these two. i love this so much!
Author's Response: LoL oh their 'crimes' are so much fun :)
Date: 08/24/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 15
Roflmao!!!! I just KNEW Mason was going to come into the dressing room & that they'd get caught!!!!! Too freakin' funny!!!!!!! Mason is such a rebel! A fucking hot rebel! Can I be 10yrs younger? Please? Just for this? Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I will SO totally join you on the 10 years younger bandwagon! Mason is ranking right up there with Nick in terms of wild rollercoaster hormones! And the rebel-ness...oh yes the rebel-ness...
Date: 08/24/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 15
"My dad's AJ McLean." :) The girl has a point. I love all the little sexy moments between them but I'm pretty sure Kev knows something is up.
Author's Response: LoL i loved that line. Almost didn't put it in there. :)
Date: 08/24/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 15
Your dad maybe Aj Mclean but he doesn't allow you to shop there. He would freak out! Lol! Mason and Shelby are getting too careless. They will be caught soon. I hope they get to go all the way before that happens though.
Author's Response: Do you sense a catch scene coming up? HMMM... :)
Date: 08/24/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 14
Poor Ally! And AJ! That is such a scary thing the first time, I don't know what I would've done without my mom.
Author's Response: I know ... I wouldn't have wanted to handle that without mom. Molly picked a HORRIBLE day for a doctor's appt!
Date: 08/24/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 14
Poor Ally, getting her period and only dad is around. AJ had to be freaking out. That would have been funny to see. Shelby is such a good sister.
Author's Response: Only dad...and Joe. The WORST combination IMAGINABLE! LoL it makes for a really funny mental image though!
