Date: 08/24/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh Shelby you may be playing with fire. I can see having feelings for Mason but you live a few states apart. And going that far changes things. Excellent update. I like how you really capture teenage feelings.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Oh Shelby is DEF. playing with fire. The idea of living a few states apart is really appealing to me...but that comes later :)
Date: 08/24/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 15
"...just centimeters from my hoo-ha."
I actually cracked up when i read that haha!
loved this chapter. Mason is definitely a dare devil and does exactly what he wants. And LMAO at them getting caught. I had a feeling that might happen.
I was so sure by the begining of the chapter that Kev and Addy had them sussed... maybe not? Or maybe they have and they are testing them... hmmm. Next chapter please? HAHA
Author's Response: At least they just got caught my a salesclerk! :) Addy and Kevin aren't stupid but Mason's not dumb. Dan was a great decoy wasn't he? :)
Date: 08/24/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow. lol They got kicked out of Victoria's Secret. LMAO Great job.
Author's Response: LoL yeah it takes a lot of skankiness to get kicked out of VS!
Date: 08/24/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 15
oh my oh my hehe getting caught in the dressing room bad bad hehe. cant wait for more.
Date: 08/24/10 12:30 am Title: Chapter 15
I love this line: "My dad is AJ Mclean." HAHA. Somehow I don't think Mr. Mclean would be too pleased with his daughter in that dress. The part where Mason spit coke out everywhere was hilarious. I'm dying to see how the parents are gonna react.
Author's Response: LoL well you look at AJ and it's REALLY hard to argue with that line! But I agree...AJ would NOT be pleased.
Date: 08/23/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ok I feel really awful and guilty and stupid because I just realised I barely ever review while you sooooo deserve it!!!!
So, first, as we're talking about periods.. mine was at 11 I think (but I'm 18 so..) But I was lucky, it happened in the shower but oh lord, i was freaking out too just like Ally (: (we're all girls here, so i shouldn't feel weird talking about this but still i do lol)
Anyway, I think Addy is being the first to find out sooner or later but I gotta feeling she won't mind. (: The phone scene was hilarious though, I can already hear AJ screaming and freaking out in my head lmfao!
I will promise to review more from now on! (I still feel awful even after this review)
Author's Response: Aw thank you for reviewing! I'm just glad that you're enjoying what you're reading! I had this mental image of AJ freaking out too...all tattooed up and flipping over his daughter starting, haha. Joe was my favorite thing to write--only a brother would make it a million times worse!
Date: 08/23/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 14
LMAO at that phone convo!!!!! Great scene! Something tells me that Shelby and Mason won't be able to hide their relationship for long...can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: LOL everyone's banking on this relationship cover to be blown. I LOVE IT!
Date: 08/23/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love reading aj-as-dad! i cant wait to see what happens when kevin/addy/aj find out about this love affair! so good!
Author's Response: I love AJ as a dad...he's such a goon. And overwhelmed. That will teach him to have five kids! :)
Date: 08/23/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oooh I have a feeling Addy is on to Shelby and Mason. She definetly strikes me as someone who can spot something a mile off!
And with Shelby and Mason... i have a feeling it won't be long before they give in to each other, unless Addy gets between them, which i have a feeling she will.
Update sooon!!!
Author's Response: LoL yeah Addy's a smart cookie. :)
Date: 08/23/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hehe too funny poor aj hehe can't wait for more
Author's Response: AJ got so totally lucky when he met Molly...otherwise the future of Ally and Joe would have scared me. :)
Date: 08/23/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh lord Shelby had to play mom to her sister. Aj was so funny for all of the experience he has with woman this freaked him out. And I think Shelby was right. Addy knew what was going on. I hope if there is a next time that they both use protection. Neither of them is ready to be a parent. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/23/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well *sighs* let's say that Joe couldn't fight his genes.. plus his momma wasn't THAT angel too.. soooo...
Now thinking: when Molls back at home she will see ALL those activities... hahahah tho, she is used to it by now.
Author's Response: LoL no Ro had her devilish side...Joe's one big ball of all of that attitude!
Date: 08/23/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yes.. chap 13 was HOT! Poor Ally... she is so young... why do you think I'm tiny?? Same age!
Date: 08/23/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh Lord, Addie and Kevin are the perfect couple.. that is a way to wake up kids? hahahaah
And I feel she knows..... sneaky! A Fam thing..
Mas is immune to the cold water... poor Shel not so. Imagine yourself at her place? I don't know swim! I would thing I was drowning!
Anyways... awwww Ally Bug is a lady now. Poor thing! With those crazy brothers and a dad that is worst than her! Thank God for the phone and sister!
Seams that Shel is older than you Alex!!! ALL those girls in life and nothing? Jesus!
"Hey Shel, Ally's bleeding out of her va-jay-jay."
LORD! hahaha
"JOE GET OFF THE PHONE!" Dad screamed.
Now, knowing Alex's OMGezzle voice... LORD, THIS SCREAM! I would run and hide! And be deaf.
Oh poor Mclean... of you only knew.... one girl is a lady now... the other almost a woman..... you wouldn't be able to have Bayers fast enough! Just saying...
Author's Response: LoL poor AJ...if he had hair he would be losing it fast with all those kids! It's hilarious that Joe's just like him...big trouble ahead once HE hits the teenage years!
Date: 08/23/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
hmm....gonna end up being a firecracker in bed like her momma. I can feel it.
Author's Response: ::whistles innocently::
