Date: 08/23/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Joe!!!!! I was cracking up and everyone at work was looking at me. Everyone needs a brother like him! LOL Seriously! Great Job!
Author's Response: I don't think Ally would agree with you...but I TOTALLY would. I added that line at the spur of the moment this morning. God Bless Joe, lol
Date: 08/23/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved the last couple of updates.
Chapter 13 was hot! But I'm glad they waited because well would they use protection? haha we don't want Shelby ends up pregnant lol.
Poor Ally....She's 10? that's pretty young, or I was late at 14 hehe (Why am I telling this?) ;)
Author's Response: Ally's on the young end...it's like 10-14.. :) I think it's unanimous that everone thought ch. 13 was hot. Go me! LoL
Date: 08/23/10 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
ROFLMAO! Oh, poor Ally! I was 11 - a month shy of my 12th b-day. I still remember it to this day - we were bowling - lol.
A.J. God man! She's a girl, what'd you expect?
Lmao. Oh, Mason. They sure do have some ways to torture you into waking up. Jeez!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I can totally see Addy chasing AC with a shot-gun now in the other fic, to blow off HIS good for nothing balls!
Author's Response: LoL AJ doesn't take the whole 'growing up' thing well, can you tell? The worst part of the whole thing is Ally's stuck with nothing but males around. Every woman HAS to pity her. :) But, I think that it's total retribution giving AJ daughters, haha. Teaches him to be such a ladies man! As for your P.S. - yes I SO can see 'Addy' Oakley going after AC!
Date: 08/23/10 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 14
Tonight?!?! Why's ya gotta make me wait so long, huh? i'm dyin' here... :)
:::checks site for update:::
Date: 08/23/10 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
hahahaha! Ice water! Oh Hellz!
Ooooh... light his feet on fire! Wakey, wakey Mas! :)
OMG, poor Ally! To be stuck in a house fulla boys on *that* day :(
Awesome chap... waiting ever so patiently for more...
:::bats eye innocently as i'm repeatedly checking for updates:::
Author's Response: I would NOT want to be Ally either, lol. btw, I love the innocent batting of eyes...unfortunately there's going to be a wait for the next chappy...later tonight! :)
Date: 08/23/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter 13
They are so sweet together!!
Another great story!
Author's Response: I think they're pretty sweet together too :) Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 08/23/10 06:47 am Title: Chapter 13
I just love Shelbys mind, it sure isn't easy to be 16 :) And Mason takes after his dad, I remember Kevin talking about going skinny dipping in an old mtv interview ;)
Author's Response: I remember that interview! I think we all forget that Kev was a crazy teen...Nick and AJ just do crazy so much better...and so often that it's easy to skip over Kev's antics lol
Date: 08/23/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow. But I'm really glad she came to her senses. They were going to fast. And she realized she was in love. This story is so sweet. Can't wait for more.
It is such a contrast going from Seven Days to this but I love it. Great work!
Author's Response: Yeah SD and LS are total opposites. I love working on them simultaneously. Glad you're enjoying! :)
Date: 08/23/10 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man this is soooo good!
Date: 08/23/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter 13
Holly wow!
Author's Response: LoL
Date: 08/23/10 03:07 am Title: Chapter 13
Awwwww. Sweet, yet I was still waiting for Kevin or Addy to show up with shot guns! Lmao!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Addy with a shotgun is so eerily normal in my mind, lmao!
Date: 08/23/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 13
Awwww, Mason is so sweet. He probably was reasdy but the second she stopped he did too. :) I wish all guys were like Mason.
Author's Response: Guys are ALWAYS ready...but I agree. I wish ALL boys were like Mason too :)
Date: 08/22/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
Daaaaamn that was hot! I'm glad they didn't go all the way though, but i have a feeling they won't be able to wait much longer.
And hahaha i can't wait for Kevin and AJ to find out. AJ will most like have steam coming out of every crevice and Kevin... well probably the same. AJ will probably kill Kevin haha
Although i do think Shelby is quite responsible and mature. She's got a good head on her shoulders.
And awww at her realising she's in love with Mason. Honey you've been in love with him since you were five don't deny it. HAHA
Author's Response: I think 'hot' and 'wow'' summed up this chapter's reviews, lol! Ah, the dads....we shall see :)
Date: 08/22/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oppppp there it was again...the Bayer moment! LOVE IT!
Date: 08/22/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow that was HOT and Glad she stopped them and Mason ever the Gentlemen agreed very Nice. Love this Couple.
LMAO @ are there any snakes in this lake.haha More Please
Author's Response: I love teenage Mason...I loved five year old Mason too...hell I just love Mason :)
