Date: 08/22/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Lmao! Shelby asked if there were any snakes in the lake! So funny. I wonder if they will fall asleep like dat...outside. update soon plz cuz I have to know! Lol
Date: 08/22/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great chap!! The part about he snake is hilarious! And I'm glad that things are going well for them but I'm also glad that she stopped them. They were moving too fast! Lol. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I agree they were moving too fast...damn teenage hormones!
Date: 08/22/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
Such an amazing job can't wait for more.
Date: 08/22/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
WOW!!!...just...WOW!!! THAT was HOT!!! Good thing they decided to wait tho....
WOW!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I love my Shelster lol
Date: 08/22/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow. WOW. That was hot...and they're teenagers. But that was still hot. LMAO Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know..teenagers shouldn't be hot, but....:)
Date: 08/22/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
*thud* ALRIGHT! Lill Richardson def have the gees of the Fam! WOW!
"I was feeing a little self-conscious. And excited. I had a feeling this would be on my dad's list of things that Shelby was never supposed to do.But what daddy didn't know..." Thank God dad isn't aware!
"Oh god, I was a moaner." I know someone that is a moaner too.
"That's not a snake, Shel." I would laugh.. but I won't!
WOW!
Mason's such a gentleman! Kevin, you teach him nicely!
Awww they love each other!
Now they will have to face this further moment.... *sighs*
Author's Response: LoL I think everyone enjoyed that snake line! haha
Date: 08/22/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Now that is the beginning of real love. When you can stop and know it is ok. I can see these two being together for a very long time. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I COMPLETELY agree...very mature decision :)
Date: 08/22/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
WOW!!!! They hormones are really flying. Thank goodness no one has caught them yet. I hope they don't move to fast.
Author's Response: ah, getting caught...mwhaha :)
Date: 08/22/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
awww soul mates too cute. and HOT.
Date: 08/22/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
aw... how sweet! But I am glad that Shel was able to come back to Earth long enough to realize she wasn't ready.
Author's Response: Yeah, I HAD to have Shel come back to Earth :) I'm glad everyone was happy about that decision, lol
Date: 08/22/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ohhh YAY!!! That's the Richardson side I like the most! *grin* Oh poor Shelby, she isn't THAT crazy as many ppl could think off... her mom, on the other side, YES!
Poor Mclean, HE would have a heart attack knowing all these extra activities of his older one.....
Def Shel, let's make it interesting! *winks*
Oh Lord... Mas naked..... and the night got hotter than ever.... NEXT!
Author's Response: LoL it's the Richardson side I like the most too! AJ needs bayer if he has a heart attack...j/k!
Date: 08/22/10 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh! Two naked teenagers in a lake...alone. trouble is coming.
Author's Response: Trouble? Two naked teenagers? ::grin::
Date: 08/22/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG!! How is he Kevin's son?! They're skinny dipping!! o.O I love how she compared Mason to 'stupid naked little brothers'.
Author's Response: In the words of the immortal Britney Spears...Kevin ain't that innocent! LoL yeah stupid little brothers don't hold a candle...
Date: 08/22/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh my oh my hehe. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: LoL I'm looking forward to writing this next chapter!
Date: 08/22/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh yes she is defiantly AJ's daughter. Yes Shelby my dear you are crossing an invisible boundary in life. It's called going farther. Just hope no one catches you. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yeah, AJ would NEVER turn down skinny dipping!
