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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 11

Aw these two are so sweet together. I agree with Mason about keeping it quite for awhile. Because although AJ likes Mason no one will ever be good enough for his baby girl. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

I bet you anything Kevin somehow manages to fidn them or someone else spots them ?& they get in a shit load of trouble! Roflmao!!!!!! Leave it to Mason to suggest skinny dipping!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

 



Author's Response: LoL ::lips sealed::

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wow, I definitely wasn't expecting that ending. lol You might wanna fix all that italics. lol Great job. :)

Author's Response: Fixed the italics...that's what I get when I post a chapter when I'm hung over lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 12

Interesting..oh hunny, you are about to make life VERY interesting!!! lol  Awww, they are gonna go skinny dipping! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh boy........



Author's Response: LoL just all innocent fun, right? ::grin::

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

This is too cute. And I love Mason! He's a sneaky little one :) Cant wait to read more about them and very interested to see how the dads will find out about them.

Author's Response: The sneaky ones are always cute :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh Mas.... you are such a Richardson... *grin*.
Dan you are great! hahah

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

Awww. Mason's son. Lol. She's getting all gushy on us now - lmao.

God, Mason cracks me up! He reminds me that Kevin once had a fun, loving, wild side to him too. I mean, I know he wasn't the perfect child - he won the Spanking Award in kindergarten - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: I forgot he won the Spanking Award! That makes me feel even better about Mason, lol. :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 11

who wouldn't clam up with a kiss if you hadn't brushed!!!! Shelby is a RIOT!!!

Author's Response: I know right? Shelby's mind NEVER turns off!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 11

they are so damn cute together. amazing job cant wait for more.

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 11

awww they are too much! loove it

Author's Response: LoL :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 11

Awww her 'Mason' sun. :) They are so cute!

Author's Response: Yeah I get a cavity just writing it, LoL!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

Another great chapter. :)

Reviewer: BiancaRJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 10

aaawwww I'm loving Shelby's love story!! aawww I'm glad the Coaster Series will go on through the coaster guuurls LOL! and btw who is who in the Coaster Girls banner? We know who's shelyby now ;-)

Author's Response: Oh! If you go here---http://absolutechaos.net/fictalk/index.php/topic,2167.0.html You can see each girl's individual banner and read the synopsis for each story. I'm thinking there might be two more as well but I'm going to start off with these four first. :) Let me know what you think!

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 08:12 am Title: Chapter 10

awwwwwwwwwwwww sweeeeeeeeeet :)
btw I we get somthing like this to read in brooke's story, I would love to see Carter's reaction hehe sorry this was out of topic ;)

awsome chapter and soooo damn cute and the misunderstanding hilarious :)
can't wait for more :) this story is so relaxing instead of seven days :) and both are so addictive :)

Author's Response: LoL yeah they are totally different stories! This one I get to put some of my humor into...Seven Days, that's a little hard to do... btw, I'm working out Brooke's story in my head right now...it's going to be fun. :)

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 06:19 am Title: Chapter 10

Awee... but bad mason making her go first...lol. I wonder how the dad's are going to take this.. hehe great chapter can't wait for an update..

PS I'm trying on not being a McLurkerson. lol.

Author's Response: LoL no worries summer...haha I just love the word McLurkerson! Working on an update for later today!