Date: 08/20/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Whoo! Go Mason! And why would she think he was gay? lol. I mean seriously, but he finally made his move. Like father like son :)
Author's Response: she jumps to a lot of conclusions...she's never been the type of kid to stay focused on one thing long...that transfers over to a little bit of irrationality in the teen mind :)
Date: 08/20/10 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh yes finally they told each other. Now for the parents to find out. Kevin might be ok with it but AJ will freak out. I hope they enjoy their first love. I have a feeling it is way more than puppy love. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: First love is ALWAYS fun! Glad you're enjoying :)
Date: 08/20/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awwww your hubby was your friend!!! AWWWWW GOD BLESS!!!
Date: 08/20/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
''I had turned him gay at five years old.
The hot ones were always gay.
And yes, Mason was hot.''
Good Lord.... lots to think, isn't Red! But seriously, she now, FINALLY, accepted the fact that MAs was hot. Now they must talk...
NEXT!
What a city!!!
Author's Response: Lots of great teenage drama, no?
Date: 08/20/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
(not that I studied it, or anything)... nah... not at ALL! Loved the parents convo, I was starting o think that. AJ never calling her.. it wasn't him!
Crazy Fam... love Molls!!! Natives, just her to handle that mess. Poor Ally!!!
Now the hot Mas.... you are trouble lill man! You are a mix of Nick and AJ.. that ISN'T GOOD!
Author's Response: Mason's a mix of Kev...Kev has a wild side...which would actually make an interesting story...but I already have too many stories in the works! :) I love Shelby's little ( ) comments, haha. Yeah, I think Molly told AJ not to hound Shelby EVERY day but don't worry he will pop up often. He can't STAY away!
Date: 08/20/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
keeping in mind that she is only 16, im really liking that she misses the obivious!! This chapter was really good
Author's Response: it kind of reminds me of myself when my high school crush actually started liking me BACK. No clue, haha. :) Now we've been married four years. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 08/20/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Mason loves Shelby, aww how cute! Can't wait to see where this story goes :)
Author's Response: LoL it is cute isn't it? haha
Date: 08/20/10 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
lol Mason can't be gay. He's a Richardson, those men are manly men! :)
Author's Response: I think that's the best reasoning I've heard all day!
Date: 08/20/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
just say GIRLS lol
awsome :)
Author's Response: LoL :)
Date: 08/20/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh my hehe amazing job.
Date: 08/20/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow. This is so funny!! First off, lol about the state-fruit pairing comment. When I read what he said, I was like...wait, that's not right! Haha. And the whole part about herturning him gay. Hilarious! Great job!
Oh and to reply to your reply about my last review, I know what you mean. It's not that Kevin doesn't know what's going on but more like he's just letting him do his thing and trusting him. And I totally agree about being more protective of girls.
Author's Response: LoL yeah...had to have the 'dumb' football player stereotype make the state-fruit comment :) Now if he was talking to Kayleigh that would have been the right fruit! Yeah Kevin trusts his boys...I will not say whether that is a smart move or not at this point in time...
Date: 08/20/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow, talk about awkward...is Mason gay? I don't think he is, that would defeat the whole purpose of this story. lol He's not interested in those other girls because he's interested in Shelby. Great job. :)
Author's Response: Yes, but it would make for such an odd twist along with defeating the whole purpose!
Date: 08/20/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Another awesome chapter. Shelby's character seems so real and reading her throughts is great too, it feels like I'm inside her head. lol On to the next one...
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew going into this one that Shelby's was going to be very scattered and almost diary-like...
Date: 08/20/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aww bless her. Those girls need a slap too HAHA. Its clear Mason likes her. Oh to be 16 again HAHA
Author's Response: If I knew now what I knew at 16 I probably could have just relaxed and had fun! :)
