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Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 9

Awwwww Shelby his father is HOT and not gay....no worries darlin'~~~
Love it!!!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh lord this is funny. Mason is not gay. He is in love with Shelby but she can't see it. She thinks she turned him gay. Nope. Just very selective about who he goes out with. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: LoL Shelby tends to jump to conclusions...she's still a crazy impulsive little girl. :) I told people that plane ride would come back to haunt them! haha

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 8

I knew Larry's folks wouldn't be there! Lmao! Mason is such a rebel - lol. A nice rebel though - hehe. I love him! Now, if only I were 10yrs younger - lmao!

I like how she tries to weasel A.J. into letting her drive-lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Shelby's got AJ wrapped around her finger...you just got to love it. Mason is a rebel but I wouldn't want him any other way than nice. He's a cute country boy, haha. Now to have him wear a cowboy hat...

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love the twins, I really do. AJ and Kev are in trouble with these two though, sneaking out to unsupervised parties. *shakes head at Mason and Shelby*

Author's Response: AJ's twins? Yeah they're freakin' cute...male Shelby's, but two of them. LoL 'trouble' seems to be the word of the day!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh Molly can sense the young love. I just hope AJ doesn't yet. Shelby is his baby girl. Daddys are very protective over them. I can see trouble ahead at this party with no parents there. I just hope those two end up ok. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Mom's know those kind of things...yeah it's probably best if AJ doesn't know yet...he's probably steal Lenni's pointy stick!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ugh, I wish people would stop interrupting him! Mason has to tell Shelby he likes her! I know that's what it is.

Author's Response: haha I really enjoy writing people interrupting him!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oooo Mason!! Teenage hormones running wild in Sadieville.

Author's Response: LoL...got to love the teen years!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter lol Mason is sneaky

Author's Response: Yeah, but it's a lovable sneaky!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 8

they are so cute together. cant wait for more

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

love her struggle with "fine". Can't wait to see what is coming up!!!

Author's Response: lol yeah only Shelby could make the word 'fine' into a dramatic piece of work :)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 8

Uh ohhh. I'm sensing two very sneaking teenagers are going to get into a little bit of trouble at this party... cant wait HAHA!

I love how fatherly AJ is to Shelby. Of course he's her father, but still... its clear he loves her like his own and thats so cute. I want a dad like that LOL.



Author's Response: Sneaking teenagers? WHOEVER do you mean? ::sarcasm:: LoL yeah it doesn't matter that she isn't his biological child...she's still one of his babies. :) That's what happens to bad boys that have daughters! haha

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love how sneaky Mason is...lol. And Kevin is so naive. And poor Shelby. I can totally see AJ being overprotective! Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Sneaky? Mason? Yeah, pretty much! I don't know that Kevin's naive...but I think he remembers being that age. Dads are usually more lax with sons than daughters...as we know from AJ being overprotective!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

Love it!
I have a feeling something might happen during this party....;)

Author's Response: What ever might happen during an unsupervised party? LoL!

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 8

I smell trouble and I like trouble! Lol.

Author's Response: I like trouble too! LoL

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 07:18 am Title: Chapter 7

Guilty on the whole McLurkersons...lol

I am loving this and I really want to know what Mason has to tell her. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: :) that's for de-lurking...you'll find out soon!