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Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ms. McLurkerson here. LOL

I'm loving this story though. Awkward young love. Mason needs to spit it out already.

Walmart to do lists. Ha ha. A friend of mine used to hit shopping carts with his car for the hellauv it.

Author's Response: I would never hit a shopping cart with my car! Probably because my car would dent more than the cart :) I hate cheaply made cars. Glad you unlurked! Mason will spit it out soon enough, lol

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 7

ahhh mason just spit it out!!! lol so cute! i love it. and i want to do some of that stuff to do at walmart list!

Author's Response: I love those 'stuff to do at Wal-mart' lists. I've done the alarm clock one ... not recently, but yeah high school was fun! :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

this story is fabulous!!! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks April!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

Haha, oh the awkwardness...and Walmart. LOL Of course Daniel had to ruin the moment. Great update, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Bless small towns and their worship of Walmart, LoL

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh Jen, C'mon! What it is just 1 son corrupted by a Mclean... NOTHING! AND Mas wasn't corrupted! He just choose to live in another way to see life. That's all.

Author's Response: LoL, very true.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

The girly girl will pay some visit sooner than you think Shel.... Mason wincing.... mmm wondering what he really wanted to do..... someone take a guess? Poor Mason, Shel haven't idea of her power over him!
Dan is so cute but boyish. He and Joe would have some fun together.
NEXT!

Author's Response: ::lol-ing:: Ah, Gabby I love your reviews :) I think Joe would corrupt Dan...haha. Kevin's already got one corrupted child because of McLean!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

awwww they are going on a little date. so cute cant wait for more.



Author's Response: LoL yup, to Wal-mart. Can't get any more exciting than THAT!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

I remember being like this with my crush. Very fond memories. I can see these two lasting a very long time. Please update soon and keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: It's so cute to write awkward, haha

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 6

God, I wouldn't even get IN the truck if he'd a snake in his hands! *shudders*

I KNEW Mason was trying to ask her out! Lmao!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL well Shel's not totally girly girl so a snake in the hand, okay....but a renegade snake...haha SNAKES IN A TRUCK! ::snort:: That should be Nick's next independent film. :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh she will realize soon why she is now nervous around Mason. I think he feels the same way too. It's cute. ANd I can picture AJ being that way when his little girl wants to drive. Protective daddy. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Thanks Marguerite! I love the nervous energy. :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 5

awesome two chapters cant wait for more.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 06:10 am Title: Chapter 5

Haha A.J. and Kevin are in trouble.

Author's Response: LoL ya think?

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 5

Kevin? Breaking the rules? I don't believe it! AJ's gonna kill him once he finds out, he def. doesn't want his little girl driving. lol

Author's Response: LoL well, Kev's going by 'country' rules...doubt Mason would be allowed to drive anywhere else :) But you're right, AJ DOESN'T want Shelby driving!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 04:42 am Title: Chapter 5

Btw, another update tonight!! *thumbs up*

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 04:40 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh sugar, dad will hear MORE, WAY more than that.... poor Mclean.....
Ohhhh she is starting to feel the young, crazy and desperate young love *breaths dramatically*
Ohh Mason, you won't help, isn't? I miss ALEX!!! I MISS MY MAN!!! I MISS!!!

Author's Response: LoL You haven't seen the last of AJ! Trust me... :)