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Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter 5

aw poor aj probably still freaked about ro's accident. im loving this!

Author's Response: Ah, I was waiting for someone to mention that....you COULD be right :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter 5

Roflmao!!!! It's 'cause you're a GIRL Shelby. Dad's have issues with letting their little girls grow up. ;)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I SAID they were in love & don't know it! Lol.



Author's Response: Yeah if she still has unicorn tags on her luggage that's a big sign of why AJ hasn't let her drive yet -- and LoL again at your P.S.!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 04:03 am Title: Chapter 4

Hehe. They are sooooo in love & don't even know it yet!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. LOL at Shelby mentioning Mason's chest that she was NOT looking at. ;) The scene of the two of them up in the loft sharing Pop Tarts was cute. And l like the ending, I'm sure AJ's a protective father over his daughters or he's not ready to let Shelby gain some independence with driving. lol It's nice to read that she's going through normal teenage things. Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: With all the pop tarts those two ate on plane rides you can bet that they still love em. And can you blame AJ? Shelby on the road is a scary thought!

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 12:27 am Title: Chapter 4

Aww, they went from scheming five year olds to flirting sixteen year olds. Mason and Shelby are so cute. :)

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: MrsCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love this story its good way to go girl I love them together

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

Btw, the horses... just like Kevin and Addie: what a poetic way to make a tradition there!

Author's Response: I thought that was a cute throwback :)

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ok first I have to say I love this story and I think Mason and Shelby are too cute.Kevin and Addy are gonna have their hands full with that lol...Oh and I love chicken and dumplings lol.

Author's Response: I LOVE chicken and dumplings and haven't had any in like five years. That's what I get when I write a story when I'm hungry. LoL

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loving this! Their chemistry together is perfect! Their awkwardness is cute. lol :)

Author's Response: ah young awkward love...it's my favorite :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ah young love. These two are trying so hard to deny what they feel for each other. Eventually it will come out. I think AJ will have a heart attach if she tells him she is in love with Mason. Awesome update. Please keep them coming.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Well I don't want J to have a heart attack! LoL I love sexual tension :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ohh and the 'thing' is up!!!!!!! Go Richardson!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lmao. Mason is soooo into Shelby. I bet her partially bulked up for her - haha.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: would the spawn of a BSB do that? ::thinks:: yeah, they probably would!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter,I'm sad "santa" is gone but I can wait to read more :).

Author's Response: Yeah I'm sad 'Santa' is gone too but...everything happens for a reason :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

i knew mason wasnt going to be this skinny kid anymore. amazing job



Author's Response: Of course not...I wanted him 'mop up a puddle of drool' hot :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter! Lol at the unicorn tags. Silly AJ. And it's cute to see her and Mason be friends with Kevin around too. I bet he's hot with a little gray :) lol. Can't wait to see how the visit will go.

Author's Response: Kevin would be a hot no matter what!