Date: 10/10/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
Finally she told her assfaced brother off. And she is right she does have the brains not him. Midget jerk. As for Brian that was a shocker. Never expected that. I hope he can move past it though. Her & Nick belong together. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I loved when she told AJ off. She has the McLean temper. The Brian issue was a shocker to me. As I rewrote this story...the idea kept popping up....so I went with it. He better get over her since he's married. I bet his wifey wouldn't like it.
Date: 09/19/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
At least they talked and agreed to be friends. That is a good start. I hope they do end up back together. Her mom and AJ need to realize it is between them and no one else. I think the woman he is interested in is her but he is afraid of being hurt again. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I think Nick, is smart taking it slow. Friends first, maybe more later. Wait until she talks to AJ. I think she is sick of their attitudes. She will only take so much.
Date: 09/14/10 03:22 am Title: Chapter 11
im glad nick let her explain, i hope they work it out!
Date: 09/05/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh I am so glad they are going to talk. Hopefully they can clear the air and move on. As for the asshole midget squad called Aj & Brian. They can fall under the bus. I realize she hurt their friend but she is Aj's sister and was Brian's friend. They along with bitchzilla Brenna need to stay out of it and let them work it out amongst themselves. Please keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/04/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oooh. I so wanted to slap Brenna. She knows nothing about Nick or Rachel so she needs to keep her damn mouth should. And YAHOO to Nick for defending her. I would have slapped the nasty judgmental ho. Awesome update keep them coming.
Marguerite
Date: 09/01/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ok Nick pull your head out of your ass and stop acting like AJ & Brian. Sheesh like none of them ever made mistakes. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Guys are so stupid. Hopefully it will work out for Rachel and she gets Nick back.
Date: 09/01/10 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh those two are so sneaky. At least they care. Not the the asstwats Brian and AJ. And Nick defended her. Good for him. Personally I think they need to replace asstwat Aj and fucknut Brian.
Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I love you nicknames for AJ and Brian. That made my horrible day better. Thank you.
Date: 09/01/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 8
how awkward. poor girl,no one will hear her out. im interested to see how this plays out
Author's Response: I feel bad for her. Things have to get better.
Date: 08/30/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this story:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/30/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh so he still loves her. Good. Now for them to talk things out. Hopefully everyone will mind their own business. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: No one in the backstreet family minds their own business. AJ and Brian will especially be involved in causing trouble. LOL!!!
Date: 08/30/10 12:46 am Title: Chapter 5
At least there is one Carter that likes her. And I love her and Nick's first meeting. Very sweet. I still think her brother is a dick. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I kind of have fun making the guys be annoying and jerky toward their siblings. AJ really takes the cake in this story.
Date: 08/29/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well at least a kiss is a good start. She really needed to get out. And her family sucks ass. Brian is a judgmental prick, so is her so called brother. And her own mother sheesh. I hope her and Nick can work things out. And if I was her I would tell everyone else to kiss my ass. Keep up thew great work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/28/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
SO Howie is the only one with compassion. I can see them being mad but they need to grow the f**k up. People make mistakes. Lord knows they have made enough of them. Please keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Howie is a sweetheart. He is trying to be fair to Rachel and Nick.
Date: 08/28/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ease up Alex sometimes people do things that we don't understand. Keep up the good work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yes, Alex stop holding a grudge.
Date: 08/28/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man I like this on. Then I like all of your stories. I hope they work things out. I want o know more about why she left. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thank you. More chapters will be posted this weekend.
