Date: 10/03/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 39
Hehe. I look forward to this concert!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: :) as you should!
Date: 10/03/10 12:51 am Title: Chapter 40
lol ohh Noah did wrote the song :) hehe she was diff surpise then lol.
Trevor love him already he just a star in his own away so hope he sort things out with his fam :)
Pey what can u say about her hehe so lookin forward for her story
Author's Response: Pey is fun. I'm looking forward to her story too. Trevor is awesome...I haven't forgotten about his family troubles..don't worry!
Date: 10/03/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 40
LMAOROFL at this chapter! Brooke hitting Noah onstage. Awwww at Brooke and Trevor's first real kiss!
Author's Response: I love fun chapters like this! I can so see little Miss Blondey going off on her stupid Nick-look-alike brother. And then the kiss...::sigh:: what a nice kiss!
Date: 10/02/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 39
Ooh, Brooke's not a good public speaker? It's similar to public singing. LMAO Cute Brooke/Trevor moments. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LoL I know some entertainers that SUCK when they give award speeches but can tear up a stage otherwise. Nick's not the best speaker actually, lol.
Date: 10/02/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 40
--I laughed. I could just see me singing my thank you speech. It would be like I was on an episode of Sesame Street or something.-- strangely (or, maybe not-so-strangely) i could see her singing it, too :)
-- fave part EVER-- What I did next will probably go down in the history books under 'stupid things artists do in front of an audience.'
I took my plaque and started hitting him in the arm.--
--"That was awesome," Peyton said the moment I walked backstage. "I want to beat up Noah."-- hahah! Luv Pey!
--"Great show. Is it always so entertaining?"
I whirled around. Trevor was standing behind me smiling.
I had completely forgotten that he had witnessed the whole event.
"Oh," I said. My face flamed.
"She doesn't usually beat anyone up," Peyton said. Dad wrapped an arm around her shoulders.
"Let's go this way Pey," he said.
"But---!"
He led her away whistling. Trevor and I were, for the most part, alone.-- Again, Luv Pey! And I luv that Nick was inconspicuously trying to give BooBoo a lil privacy :)
-- "Good night, sweet prince."
I whirled around. Noah was peeking around the corner.-- God, Noah can be such a... a... boy. I swear
-- second fave part-- He was going to be sorry when I caught up with him. First, I would thank him for writing an awesome song. Secondly, I was going to hit him again for not telling me sooner. And last, I was going to kill him for ruining my nice moment with Trevor.
Noah Gene Carter was going to be lucky if he lived long enough to write a second hit.
And if he did, it sure as hell better be another hit for me.
Author's Response: Your favorite parts were my favorite parts too. :) I love that she used her award as a weapon! And you also listed another one of my warm fuzzy moments...Nick suavely leading Peyton away to give his daughter some alone time. What an AWESOME dad!
Date: 10/02/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 40
NoNo wrote the song!! How cool!!! Nice to see 2 of the Carter Clan got some of his "genes"..:p GO NoNo!! Run!!! lmao!! Great chapter! I loved it!
Author's Response: Nick's genes are living strong...blame the super sperm, haha.
Date: 10/02/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 40
awwww noah hehe i loved it, so happy that he was the one that wrote that song. amazing job i so cant wait for more and yay yay they kissed hehe. cant wait for the wedding.
Author's Response: I'm trying to orchestrate the wedding so Kay and Brooke's stories line back up! We'll see what happens...
Date: 10/02/10 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 40
Oh Noah is a sneaky one but Liv should have told them. Brooke had a right to know. I can see her killing Noah for interrupting her and Trevor. Ah love. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Noah's a total sneak. Naw, Liv shouldn't have told them---it made a great surprise! She's all bark but no bite. Except maybe where Trevor is concerned...
Date: 10/02/10 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 39
first of all: Woohoo! You're back!
Okay, on to the review:
hehehe, i luvs NoNo-- "Hey BooBoo, guess who's here?" he asked. He held up his phone. Wind Beneath My Wings started playing. I would have smacked him, but I didn't because I was distracted by the realization that the song meant Trevor had arrived.--
--"Hey mom, I kind of invited Trevor to Baylee's wedding," I said. The corners of mom's mouth twitched.-- i luv how she just kinda tossed that out there :)
Luvs this line-- "Daddy says I can't show mommy," Landon whispered.--
--"Have you ever driven a golf cart before?" Trevor asked.
"How hard could it be?" I asked.-- famous last words! Hahaha
Author's Response: Glad to be back! Did I mention I love NoNo? :) And then of course there's Landon. I can't imagine anything cuter than a three year old Nick. And Brooke and the golf cart--sometimes I don't think Carters should be allowed to operate equipment!
Date: 10/02/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 39
Landon cute and little trouble maker love him.
Trevor everytime u write about him more i love him, he takes time do with the other carters
i think it is better idea getting Liv to talk to Nick lol
Author's Response: I think it's a better idea if Liv talks to Nick too...she's good at sweet-talking that Carter. :)
Date: 10/02/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 39
Awwwww they are so cute. Landon is way too cute and way too funny. Amazing job. Hope u'll update more today
Author's Response: I plan on updating again later today! I really enjoyed writing the next chapter. :)
Date: 10/02/10 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 39
Yay Aww love this chapter,Trevor and her make a great couple,hopefully she takes it slow and Landon is to cute for words.lol
Author's Response: Knowing my Brooke, she's going to take it slow. :) I love Landon with his snaaaakeey!
Date: 10/02/10 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 39
Ah so Trevor will be her date. Good. They need time together. I wonder why her mom said she needed their permission to have Trevor as her date? She is 16 not 5. PLus why the big deal over her outfit. Nick wore & did much worse back in the day. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Just thought you might want to know when i clicked on the email update AC came up but the page was blank., I had to open another page & ipen my favorite to get to it.
Author's Response: Well, Liv was teasing her about permission because the wedding's in Atlanta. That means that Trevor's going to be their responsibility during the flight and subsequent hotel stay. That's a little more major than just a little date, right? I don't know that NICK wore much worse back in the day...AJ in his booty shorts, hell yeah. :) Thanks for the heads up on your problem - with all the other problems going on with the site, I really don't know what to tell you. :(
Date: 10/02/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 39
hey you're back!
Brooke and Trevor are such a sweet well I can't say 'couple' yet but yeah there's def something going on with them. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I'm baaaaa-aaaack. :) They're not a couple yet, but I have a feeling Brooke's beginning to think towards those lines. :)
Date: 09/30/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 38
:( two days without ur updates hope u back on Sat.
Liv knows what Noah paycheck its about and Nick did not (u see even this in Brooke Pov you so tell Nick not happy he does not know)
how Peyton kiss a boy Nick gonna go crazy b/c two of his girls starting to hehe that more guns he needs j/k
Landon he diff Nick kids yep cute outside and little trouble maker inside
Author's Response: I'm back! It was a long couple of days for me. But I've worked a LITTLE bit ahead on chapters..I did a lot of goofin' off :) Liv so totally knows what Noah's doing. Of course Noah is such a momma's boy :)
