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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 31

Poor Trevor! Wonder if he'll open up to her. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 07:28 am Title: Chapter 30

Aw, very cute chap. LOL at the AJ knockoff! And loved how you have Landon repeating Nick's obsession with boobs. That's hilarious! I feel bad for Trevor :(

Author's Response: I love Landon he's my new favorite mini-me to write about. :) I feel bad for Trevor too...I'm always so hard on the good guys :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 31

“I need to learn some of those moves,” mom said on the way home. “I need to get rid of this bubble butt.”
I laughed. “Mom you don’t have a bubble butt.”
“I do. And that’s why you’re not getting any more brothers and sisters.”
I laughed. Mom had gained a ton of weight when she was pregnant with Landon. Almost four years later, she still hadn't been able to lose it all, but I still thought she was the most beautiful woman in the world." Poor Livvy, Jen!!!

“You’re that...that Carter.”
Dad bristled. “I’m Nick Carter, yes.” He's seriously playing with fire... just saying!

"Grenadine was hard at work. All the guys were getting sprayed down with water. I hovered in the corner.
I hadn’t noticed it earlier, but Trevor looked extremely hot shirtless. He ran a hand through his hair as stagehands trained a hose on him. His jeans were soaked and hanging low on his hips." QUIT PLAYING GAMES WITH MY HEART... MY HEART...

"Why couldn’t I ever do anything half-way?'' Because with Carters it's all or nothing, now or never...


Poor Trevor, he's trying to save Brooke and himself in the process...

Author's Response: LoL Yup poor Livvy....I blame Nick...and chocolate...and Doritos, haha :) I love that you mentioned Quit Playing Games because I was SO thinking about that video when I was writing that scene. :) And as everyone's said, with the Carters it IS all or nothing!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 31

Poor Brooke. Trevor is just acting that way because of his stupid father. It sucks, but realize that Trevor really isn't a jerk. He's trying to protect you from his dad and his attitude. Things will hopefully get better.

Author's Response: You're right...that's EXACTLY what he's doing. I hope things get better too lol :)

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 30

Trevor sounds like a sweetheart. I think Brooke has found a good match. I feel bad that he has such a screwed up family. I think he will be a nice fit in the Carter family.

Author's Response: LoL the Carters tend to gravitate towards screwed up people :) Maybe because they're a little screwed up (but in a GOOD way!)

Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter 31

Aww Looking forward to reading more,great chapter. Hopefully Trevor and her work it out.

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Poor Trevor sounds like he's growing up Nick's life........

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 31

ugh trevor totally needs a nice girl like brooke and... a manager like nick? maybe? something like that?

Author's Response: LoL you guys are so hopeful...we'll have to see what happens!

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 30

"A second later regurgitated cake was all over Trevor’s face. Landon burst into hysterical tears. Noah farted. Peyton spilled her soda. Dad yelled at Noah. I handed Trevor a napkin." i literally LOL-ed

i think trevor would make a great addition to the family.

Author's Response: LoL that's what Brooke gets for thinking about how awesome dinner went before it's even over! LoL at your LoL, btw. :) got to love text speak, haha

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 29

oh my goodness, i just read the first chapter of kays story and saw your note and rushed over here! i must catch up!

Author's Response: I'm glad you found my S.o.S. Enjoy your catch-up chapters!

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 31

Wow! I missed about 6 chapters! I just thought that you haven't updated in a while. I saw your message of having problems while I was reading Kayleigh's story. I already have you as one of my fav authors but haven't checked my e mail in a while.
Anywho...great 6 chapters! Lol. Trevor's dad is an ass. Seems like he should be the next person on the list to receive an ass whoopn

Author's Response: Glad you found me! I figured there were a few of you guys who hadn't figured out I was having issues. :) I'll be updating at least one if not twice a day, so just keep checking back! Glad you enjoyed the chapters. :) I think everyone agrees that Trevor's dad is the next 'target' for a pointy stick or two

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 31

Ooooo something big is going to happen with his dad can't wait for more. Loved it amazing job

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

hey...now I see what you mean with your stories not showing up in the most recent updates. I've missed a couple, gonna read them asap!

Author's Response: I'm glad you found me! I haven't deserted you guys :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 31

Liv and Nick complaining about outfits is too cute. They were made to be parents. :)
I feel soo bad for Trevor. :( I wanna kick his dad's ass. You leave him alone!

Author's Response: LoL I love that Nick's trying to cover her up...I think back to what he packed for Livvy on his surprise trips...haha. It comes back to haunt dads :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 31

I liked this one a lot. Nick saw what Trevor goes through and maybe he could be Trevor's manager. He certainly has the experience. Please tell me Trevor and his family get away from him. He needs to be where Garrett is except the adult version. Especially if he beats his family. Reminds me of Jane. And Brooke doesn't do anything half way because she is a Carter. They never do. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite