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Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 26

When in doubt, call the ex-FBI agent.
"They put Noah in jail?"

Mom nodded. "I guess he tracked Garrett to a hotel party. He got into a fight with half the guys there and caused a couple thousand dollars in property damage. Oh, and he slit the tires on Garret's car."

My mouth dropped open. My brother? Little NoNo?
I felt horrible. Noah had his first mugshot because of me. I knew dad already had one from ages ago, but now I had added to his record too.

And then there was Trevor.

His dad didn't look happy about having to come down to the police station. I didn't want Trevor to get on his badside. I grabbed at my seatbelt.

I wished there were redo's in life like there were in all the videogames we played.

Because tonight, I needed one badly.


LORD! What a night.. even NoNo now... well, he IS a Carter after all. Kay wasn't aware of that part of Noah's life.
Poor Trevor....
Brooke.. LORD!

Author's Response: LoL yup Noah's now a rebel...got to love it! Lots of drama :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter 28

I'm glad that those girls stepped forward and Garrett got his. I'm also glad that all of those good things happened. I wonder what's going to happen with Brooke and Trevor? Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Garrett did get his. The media finally did something right by pushing the story hard. Unfortunately most girls IRL don't have the power of the press to get justice. :(

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 28

owhh la la, brooke and trevor sitting in a tree....

Author's Response: Hey! Don't get ahead of yourself! LoL

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 28

see told ya all that eveyone was like Garrett is a gr8 and Trevor better not start trouble but I was only one in Trevor side :) you see you never judge a book by it clover :)

anyway so happy that Garrett is right where he belongs and also happy the girls come forward. I am not surpise that the school never suspended him.

I am also happy that She phone my Trevor :) something tells me he will need friend soon :( b/c still getting feeling about his dad

Author's Response: Yup you were right about Trevor! :)

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 28

A happy chapter!
Good for those girls to come forward putting Garrett where he belonged. I only hope they keep an eye on him after he gets out. Once an offender is always one in my book.
Brooke calling Trevor was great they would be great for each other. To think we all werent big fans of him at first! :)
Cant wait for more updates! :)

Author's Response: LoL yup everyone was anti-Trevor. Fool on you! :) It's time to get some nice light-hearted chapters going...after all Brooke is a Carter. :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 27

I love that Landon thinks it's cool.
Only Noah would think juvie is a reward, that child is without a doubt Nick's.
:( Peyton, poor baby. She is beautiful, she's a Carter for crying out loud!
OMG Backstreet Olympics?! I must see this! *runs to Nick's twitter*

Author's Response: Landon's like three (and a half)...he thinks EVERYTHING's cool. And yeah if looking like Nick didn't cement his status as a Carter, getting excited about juvie did. I love Nick a million times more for calling his Jib Jab BSB Olympics. :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 27

oh my goodness i love this story! also i saw that jib jab video last night soooooo funny!

Author's Response: LoL ah Nick makes me laugh :)

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 26

Ugh, those boys. I really didn't want them in jail. They need to get a grip on their testosterone and fast. (That looks like it's spelled wrong, lol.)
And I feel so bad for Trevor, I don't want him hurt for trying to help Brooke. :(

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 27

Didn't you mention Backstreet Olympics in one of your fics? Lol.

Oye vey. Nick & Noah better not get the brunt of the punishment just because they've famous family members. Garret deserves to ROT in Hell for what he did!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I did! Babies and the Band when they jumped off the couch onto the trampoline thingy. LoL. And Garrett does deserve to rot. Jib-Jab. LoL

Reviewer: CarterFanUs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 27

That good that both of them are out of jail. Just hope ppl are nice and believe Brooke what Garrett did do her but dont think Garrett's clone will believe her. To Brooke n Noah (well all of the carters for that matters) it is times like these you know how your true friends are, I think esp Brooke and Noah going to find that out. Media started the whole thing they better make up to Brooke mmm yeah right if that gonna happen

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 27

I am glad they are out of jail and that slimefuck Garrett is (hopefully) in jail. He deserves to rot in there. Noah & Nick were funny. And Mike shaking his head behind Liv was hilarious. Guys do stick together. I think Kayleigh should tell her parents what happened to her. I hope Brooke isn't crucified in the press and that she gets some support at school. Keep up the excellent work. Any chance of another update today?? What I can hope.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I don't know...I want to do another update on OIMD...AC is really acting up for me today. I'm also working on redoing Kayleigh's banner and some other stuff for the upcoming stories. As for the chapter - I love that the guys stick together. :) You guys will get most of the aftermath of this whole thing in the next chapter.

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 27

That gr8 Nick n Noah are bkwhere they belong outside of jail and Garrett is where he belongs. yep Nick and Noah do not feel bad at all I so do not blame him. oh Little Landon he does know the whole story but take it he knows little bit he little cutie.

oh Pey she is beautiful no one better not tell her any different. So guys better not mass with Pey then lol

Author's Response: LoL Landon's such a comic relief. Pey's just being a normal tween.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 27

they lock him up and throw away the key. amazing job glad nick and noah are out of jail. cant wait for more.

that video was way too funny hehe. i could not stop laughing.

Author's Response: LoL Nick is an idiot...a loveable idiot, but...if he was getting back at AJ, why did he put himself in the video? ::shakes head::

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Peyton sounds like a level headed girl...I'm glad she's going to get a story! Interested in seeing what happens to Goober Garrett......Can't wait to see Trevor come back in too.....
How things are going to go at school Monday...
Thank goodness for Mike!!! What a great Grandpa!

Author's Response: Peyton is level headed. Both Carter girls are really..it's the boys you got to watch out for! :) Mike is an awesome grandpa...he's one of my favorite random characters I put in without a real purpose but he's come in handy, let me tell ya!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad that Nick and Noah are out of jail. I liked that Liv talked to Peyton about what happened, she's about 14 (?) and deserves to know. I think we got a glimpse of her - she's a bit insecure it seems, attention being given to Brooke and Landon all the time. I can't wait for her story.

Author's Response: She's thirteen right now...NoNo's turned fifteen in February. She's a little insecure (and suffering moody hormonal growing up moments, lol). But Brooke and Landon do tend to draw attention to themselves :)