Date: 09/18/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Omg that fucking jackass.
Date: 09/18/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 23
ahhhhhhhhhh that was intense. soo good. cant wait for more!
Date: 09/18/10 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 23
See I know MY Trevor will save the day, that my boy I was right about from the start :).
Garrett is going to get it Nick is NOT going to be a happy daddy bear. Trevor is so getting brownie points from Nick
Author's Response: Well you believed in Trevor all along, I must say!
Date: 09/18/10 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aha! Me thinks when Nick finds out what kind of environment Trevor comes from he will feel differently about the kid. Might even feel bad for calling him a "wannabe". That'll hit close to home. Still can't wait to read his reaction to what Garrett did to his princess. Hell hath no fury like a pissed off Dad!
Author's Response: LoL I love the 'hell' quote. So very true...if Nick hunted down his own brother you can imagine how he'd feel about some non-related idiot teenager
Date: 09/18/10 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 23
Thank god for Trevor..omg I wouldn't want to know what would happen if he wasn't there...
Nick is going to freak out when he hears this.
Date: 09/18/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 23
Thank GOD for Trevor!!!!!!!!!! Nick is TOTALLY going Garret hunting & am I TOTALLY helping him!!!!!!!!!!
*lets out a high-pitched shriek & attacks Garret even more* YOU LITTLE FUCKING SONOFABITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I knew my sticks needed sharpening.....though, I was wishing this time I'd be wrong......
Author's Response: You weren't wrong...you were actually dead on. Not that I could come out and say it. I just had to bite my tongue...which really hurt. LoL
Date: 09/18/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 22
I *KNEW* IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU FUCKING LITTLE BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*comes angrily charging @ Garret with my extra sharp n pointy sticks* YOU BACK THE FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 09/18/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 23
Well well well. Turns out the "pretty boy' is more of a man than assfuck Garrett. Oh I can't wait to see Nick's reaction to what happened to his baby girl. Rage won't even begin to describe it. I just hope he doesn't think Trevor did it. He was her savior. Please tell me Garrett doesn't get away with it. Like he goes to jail or gets beat nearly to death. I am eagerly awaiting Nick's reaction. keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Ah, you'll find out the pretty boy isn't so charmed as everyone thinks he is. And then of course we have Nick's response. If I wasn't working today I would SO be on a writing rampage. LoL I don't know that Garrett's going to get beat to death, but we'll see.
Date: 09/18/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 23
Wow...Trevor saved the day!! And OMG...Nick is gonna go APESHIT!!!! Garrett is just gonna...DIE! At least he would if it were MY daughter! And poor Kay. She's gonna be pissed Brooke didn't believe her. What a mess. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Nick responds!
Author's Response: That he did. :) Nick is...well, I can't say, but I WILL say it will be a very interesting chapter to write. Kay and Brooke's friendship is definitely in for an assessment, don't you think?
Date: 09/18/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aw, Trevor is a good guy! I'm so glad that she's ok. Well, physically at least. I love how during the attack, you mixed in some of her feelings from her kidnapping. Poor girl. I can't wait to see how her parents are going to react! I seriously think Nick is gonna go nuts. Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Yup Trevor's a pretty darn good guy. :) There's no way she couldn't be in that situation and not have some flashbacks...and yeah, be prepared for Nick!
Date: 09/18/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 22
I KNEW that that lill stupid 'trying to be the shit rat' was a ******!! See Kay, when you pull a mask for so long, ppl tend to follow what you show up first. Take the chance to change.
Now the Pablo guy, it was sweet to see Brazil again! But Pablos arent that used here, we say Paulo, just saying.
MORE!!
Oh poor BooBoo!! Carter WILL hunt this lill shit DOWN with Noah now!
Author's Response: Thanks Gabby! I will change that...I was going to email you about that. :) btw, you're right about Kay. She's like the boy who cried wolf in a sense
Date: 09/18/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 22
Holy shit!! I had a feeling something like that was going to happen. Poor Brooke. I really hope she can find someone to help her. Nick is gonna FLIP OUT. What a stupid child to do something like that to someone who's famous. Not that it's ok to do it to anyone, but you know what I mean?
I hope Kayleigh is ok as well. Can't wait for an update!
Date: 09/18/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 22
Poor Brookey.. Good thing she got out of the car =/
She must be so hurt now, the boy she liked turned out to be a lying bastard.. He needs his ass kicked ASAP!
And i'm starting to feel sorry for Kayleigh, i mean.. her behavior in the past made Brooke thing she was lying.. If she does wild things to get noticed by her parents, thats sad. I think i remember BJ talking about being that way growing up on House of Carters.. Sad =(
Author's Response: Yeah BJ and Kayleigh actually have a lot in common, except I think Brian and Leighanne's priorities are just shifted right now...Bob and Jane is a whole different story. Don't worry - prom chapters are far from over! LoL
Date: 09/18/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 22
ugh i just had to come back and say, what an effing-ing creep! and kay was right in this chapter and the last about not taking his shit. gah! i hope he suffers.
Author's Response: Slimeball, creep...all good descriptions of him. :S
Date: 09/18/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 22
uh oh
thank god she got out of that
updates!! nick is gunna freak!!