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Reviewer: luifis Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

omg so much information

Author's Response: Does your brain hurt yet? LoL

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Omg! What a great chapter. First, that party sounds really awesome. I love all the cameos in there. I like the name Brenna and I can picture her being a complete wildchild. And lol at kayleigh checking out James. I can imagine how beautiful he's going to be with his two parents. And LMFAO at JAM and he Barracudas.

Author's Response: Oh Jonah...he's such a special boy. A total odd-ball. :) I still love him, haha. I can so picture James being really really cute/hot when he's all grown up. It's that Puerto Rican/Italian combination....

Reviewer: FricksBabyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

Haha, Brenna. Those guys must have their hands full with that little whirlwind. She's a tiny Shelby. :)
I sure wish Nick was my dad, Brooke's party is awesome!
But someone needs to get a handle on Kayleigh, she's a wild child.

Author's Response: LoL yup Brenna's a mini-Shelby. Her legacy lives on! Oh Kayleigh's a 'Wild Angel' for sure!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loving Brooke's story.....not loving Kaylee much.....she's a terror.....is she getting her own story?

Author's Response: Kayleigh's getting her own story. Wild Angel. She doesn't turn sixteen until about 3 1/2 4 months after Brooke so you're just getting a 'preview' of her right now!

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 08:45 am Title: Chapter 3

I love it!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 3

I really like Brooke :) She seems like a down to earth, great girl. I was reading your reviews and review responses...first, it appears that Kayleigh is not very likable. Lol. I don't think I know enough about her but I love that she's the opposite of Brooke. And it sounds like shes kind of the black sheep of the family. I can't wait to read about her. I like that Baylee is getting married! That's so crazy to think of that. Thanks for another update :)

PS-I love how she called all the guys "uncle" :)

Author's Response: I love my Carter kidlets! :) Brooke grew away from the stubborn little toddler she was but she kept her, well, what I call 'pep.' Yeah Kayleigh's losing her fanclub, but I too like that she's a black sheep. It's different and I strive for different. And it's CRAZY to think of Baylee getting married but well that's what makes the whole thing fun. :) P.S. - I love that she calls the guys 'uncle' too!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3

Roflmao!!! I'd LOVE just to be able to RIDE in a limo! Lol.

Lmao @ Kay!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I know! I'd love to ride in a limo and boogie down in the sunroof :)

Reviewer: sofdlovesbsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

WOW Baylee getting Married How old are the boys in this?lol
LOL @ Kayleigh not thinking her mom and dad would come,she sure wants to live it up and be wild without them there. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Ack okay...our BSB boys? Let's see...Mr. Carter is 47. Mr. McLean is 49. Mr. Littrell is 52. Mr. Dorough is 53/54. And Mr. Richardson is 55/56. Kayleigh LOVES being away from mom and dad. Baylee's kind of the 'prodigcal son' so to speak...

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

:) Cute chapter. LOL at Kayleigh being all dramatic when she found out that her parents were coming to the party and her dress "alterations". Ooh, and poor Noah with Kayleigh teasing him. I caught that note of safety being important to Brooke, can't ever blame her for that. Amazing job, absolutely loving this. :D

PS: Baylee would be 25/26 around this time I think, him getting married and all? And about what year is this? 2025/26? lol

Author's Response: Kayleigh is a DRAMA queen and way too damn pretty for her own good. Glad someone caught the 'safety' thing. It's 2027 because Brooke was born in March 2011. So Baylee's 25. James is 17, not quite yet 18. Mason and Shelby are 19/20.

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Is Nick gonna be like what Robbie Ray does for Miley/hannah. I think he gonna be worse then AJ when it comes to boys

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

It's GOOD to be a Carter!
'Mom was always thinking ahead.' As THE mom Carter.. she HAS to!
Nick, what he's doing? Just taking care of Brooke's sing?
I have to tell ya.. I don't like Kay... I LOVE her parents... and Bay will get married!!! YAY! I can see Leighanne going INSANE!
Oh NEXT!
P.S.: poor NoNo.. he is THE Carter and just want his girl.... Landon's the crazy Nick and Lill P is a mix... that's what you get when you have lots of kids! A BIG mix!

Author's Response: I KNEW Kayleigh wasn't going to have a big fan club, lol. Nick does more than just overseeing Brooke's career. As you will see :) NoNo is my favorite...I'm like Liv, I'm SO partial to him!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

I have a feeling Kayleigh is gonna annoy me, don't like the way she is teasing and playing with Noah :) But i do love that you made Brians daughter a rebel and Nicks daughter the mature and responsible one, Brooke sounds like a genuine and kind teenager with a big heart! And i love how she still calls her brother NoNo, I still call my now 17 year old little brother his kid-nickname.. He just loves me for that :)

Author's Response: We are very protective of our Carter kids aren't we? But I agree, I think Kayleigh MIGHT annoy some other people too. Everyone's got the warm fuzzies today over Noah's nickname living on!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

oh im sorry but Landon beats the boy McLean male twins in the cute factor now, lov him he so cutie Wonder what its gonna happen in the party :). I now its like three chapter in but Brooke seams nicer to her younger bros then Shelby at that age lol

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Looks like imma have to do double reviews on this story too haha!! Been so busy today and loved all the update emails on my phone when i checked it haha!!

So something ain't sitting right with me with Kayleigh. Have no idea why. To me it sometimes comes across that she's friends with Brooke because she's famous. Maybe I'm reading waaaay into it, especially since she and Brooke have been bff's since they were kids.

And poor Noah. He definitely has the hots for Kayleigh and she's just brushing him off like he's nothing. Might be a good thing that she IS brushing him off. She's waay outta his league.

Brooke is very sensible. She comes across much older than her years and i love that. I'm guessing what she went through when she was younger helped that.

Landon is adorable! Can i keep him? haha!

Author's Response: Oh, I do love double reviews! Unfortunately I can't comment too much because that would ruin the purpose of some subsequent chapters. I also feel sorry for Noah. I'm very protective of him as my first 'story' boy-child. LoL And you've pegged Brooke right. She is mature and part of that had to do with what she went through all those years ago. That was heavy trauma + a couple years of therapy combined. Landon rocks, I would have to fight you for 'keepsies'

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hehe amazing job love this story and can't wait for more.