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Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 46

Ding Dong the witch is gone! i'm glad they saw how evil Claw-dia really is. I hope everything works out ok from here on out though i think from the last chapter Kay needs a reality check on a baby scenario. She might be excited but she is defineatly not ready and mature enough to handle it.



Author's Response: Kayleigh needs a reality check for sure! I think if I un-exile myself that I'm going to focus on finishing Kay's story first :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 46

omg she is such a crazy ass bitch. so glad that marcie was there, she so has passed the kayleigh test. cant wait for more. awesome job.



Author's Response: She is a crazy bitch lol. If Marcie wasn't there we'd probably be scraping Kayleigh off the stairs (actually, that was my original plan - aren't I evil?)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 45

I knew it wasn't his baby. That &%%$#@!**&%$$#@!()&*^%%$# lying, crusty ho bag. Oh I want to see her face when they tell her the news. Please keep up the excellent work. YES a Steffie story.
Marguerite

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 45

oh yeah welcome to the crazy world of twitter :) i am now following you im scottishthistle

Reviewer: CarterFanUs Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/10 01:31 am Title: Chapter 45

I following you :) yeah for Stefie story,

Do not think the Shelby talking did her good she still in Kay's world she so gonna be shock maybe she should looking after Landon for a day by herself so she can see that its not all gonna all be cutness and dress up, that why she hoping for a girl so she can do that. I trying to think why she thinks its gonna be all fun and games maybe bc she the youngest, Noah knows its gonna be hard :) well he did grow up watching his mom with Landon lol and of couse Pey.

Claudia wow she one nasty person she may be the most hated person since Aaron lol. Cant wait to find out what happens when she finds out that Baylee knows loves it :) Claudia the old saying what goes around comes around

PS I hav to say it again I LOVE LANDON hehe BABIES lol

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 45

Shelby did not sink in to Kay. That girl is in for such a shock. She needs more sessions with Marice and join some sort of group for teen parents.

Yay a stefie story! :)
Good luck with your school work!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 45

Yay for a new story!

But aww for no more updates! I'm glad I caught this one before gonig away for the weekend! Now, I need to go finish getting ready-lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I SAID Claw-dia had cheated!



Author's Response: have a good weekend! :)

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 07:23 am Title: Chapter 45

I know it's bad, but the way Kayleigh acts about this babysituation is starting to annoy me. It's like she thinks having a baby is like playing house or something.. She is in for a major surprise, just hope she is strong enough to handle it.. And I'm not even getting started on Clawdia, that is the lowest thing a person can do.. Period! Feel so bad for Baylee..!

As for the Carter twins I'm thinking a boy and a girl.. They say that the "worst" kinda twins you can get is two girls.. :)

Good luck on your schoolwork! I'm leaving for New York today, christmas shopping in my favorite city.. Can't wait! :)



Author's Response: Oh I would SO love to shop in NYC...::sigh:: I'm surprised you're the first one to say that Kayleigh's creeping back into her 'annoying' ways (I kinda think so too!) And then for Clawdia..well the end is near for the *!*%#%@@ (which sums it up perfectly, I think).

Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 06:26 am Title: Chapter 45

poor Baylee. =(

 

Yay! story for Steffie!



Author's Response: Well I'm glad that more than a few of you are excited about a Stefie story! :)

Reviewer: BiancaRJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 05:33 am Title: Chapter 45

omfg I hate Claudia and YAY for a Stefie story! good luck with schoowork!

Author's Response: Thanks! My group abandoned me for my group project so I have a whole magazine to design, photos to shoot, and a seven page paper plus another paper for another class..all due in three weeks and I haven't started a thing! If I could turn in fanfiction for a grade I'd be gravy, lol

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter 45

''Hangovers were a bitch.''
--You tell me about it...


''Our baby was an eater. I licked the salt from the bacon off my fingers and leaned back in my chair.
Besides the good food, there was no lack of entertainment at our table. At one point, Landon stuck his glass of orange juice to Liv's round stomach. It was hard to believe that I would be looking like her soon.''
---Let's just say that now as a Carter mom you will see that a LOT!


"When are you due again Kay?" Liv asked me.
"June 1," I said. "What about you?"
"I've scheduled a c-section for February 25," she said. "My first since Noah."
"You have a c-section for Noah?" I said. I must have looked panic. Liv gave me a calm smile.
"My blood pressure got all out of whack. Trust me, it wasn't him, it was me."
I bit the inside of my lip. I couldn't imagine being cut open to get a baby out.
---Oh sweetie... Kay will be 0.o a LOT!


"I have a doctor's appointment Monday to find out what the little guys are," Liv added.
"I'm thinking boys," Brooke said.
"Girls," Noah said.
"BABIES!" Landon squealed.
---BABIES! Landon is genius!



"What's it say?" dad asked quietly. He went and sat beside Baylee. Baylee handed the papers to dad. Dad scanned through them.
"It wasn't yours," dad said thickly.
Baylee buried his face in his hands. Mom burst into tears.
I tipped my head up to the sky.
---I pull my hands up too!

YAY for the Stefie story and YAY˛ to the Twitter Account! I'm GaBiBi_Lean! Just added ya!
God Bless you Jen and Good Lucky with schoolwork! We will miss you here!

Author's Response: Where there is drama there always needs to be Landon.. He lightens things up as only a four year old can! :) Thanks for adding me...I'm not very good at Twitter but we'll see what happens :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter 45

I'm glad Kay was right all along. Can't wait to read where this goes.

Yay for a Stefie story, that's gonna be great too. I'm definitely interested in how she'll deal with lupus as a teen. Can't wait for your next update as always.

Author's Response: Kay has her moments :) Glad you're looking forward to Stefie's story...I'm going to need a break from these Carters for awhile before I go back to Peyton!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter 45

I wish many bad things for Clawdia!!
This happened to my bff's brother in real life (like I said before, these two stories are kinda like our own lives!!) Sad thing was the kid was 4 years old, and they all suffered a lot!!!

Kay really needs to wake up from her Perfect Motherhood Daydream!!! lol
And a Stefie story makes me feel excited, even if it's a short one, I won't ask you for much !!! lol

Author's Response: Wow, that is crazy how similar the stories are! :( That is SO sad though....the child really is the one to suffer. Kay does need to wake up, if she doesn't she's going to be in for a RUDE, screaming, puking, awakening. I was going to work Stefie's story into Ally's story but that just ended up looking like a whole mess of complicated so I decided to split it :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 45

ugh cant wait to be done with claudia the bitch.



Author's Response: I think you speak for all of us :)

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 45

 

A WEEK without update of any of ur stories :( oh well but school work does come first :).  Its gr8 yoy doing story for Stefie also got to see how she dealy with her illness.

lol at Landon saying babies that little boy never fails to amazed me :), wonder what the babies are hope both are ok agree with Nick said but i think one of each :)

Claudia days is numbered :) poor Baylee