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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 44

Yeah one big loving dysfunctional family. I hope the baby turns out alright. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 43

Yeah a Carter Halloween is always strange. But full of love. I'm glad Noah seems happy about the baby. However I don't think Kay will make a good mother. However I love this story. I can't wait to see how it all turns out. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Noah has ALWAYS been the 'go with it' kid. I don't know if happy's the right word, but he's ALWAYS along for the ride.

Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 44

aw. Landon and Brenna. That's sure to excite Aj. lol. I love it.

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 44

The Shelby talk was needed.. I just love her, she is so mature, and I understand her so well.. She loves her daughter, but being a teenmom is anything but simple.. She gave Kayleigh a much needed realitycheck :)

And Landon and Brenna are so sweet, I had two of the three year olds at daycare giving eachother the biggest kiss the other day, then they tossed their head's back giggeling, it was the cutest thing ever!

 



Author's Response: Kay's still a little delusional about the whole thing but I'm going to give Shelby credit on talking to them. She's a HUGE resource right now. Your story about the kiddles at daycare made me 'aww' out loud. Kids are awesome :)

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 44

Everyone really was becoming family.

I LOVE THAT LINE.......

Good for Shelby giving them the talk. I hope it sunk in! Yah for Noah and Julliard......god I hope he goes!!! It would be a terrible waste if not~

Author's Response: I know...THE Julliard! I'm still trying to figure out where I'm taking this story in order to wrap it all up so you guys don't complain that I left too much out, lol

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 44

Kay needed to be brought down a peg or 50. I only hope she sees that she has more potential to go to college then she gives herself credit for. It's ok to dream but you have to dream realisticaly. I think she needs another talk with marcie about her potential to get into a good college and prove to herself that she isn't dumb.



Author's Response: I'm gonna go with 50 pegs. If they do move to Florida, she's going to at least need another session or two with Marcie before that happens...

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 09:27 am Title: Chapter 44

Its gr8 that shelby talked to Noah and Kay well mostly Kay i think she needed it more then Noah, hope now she sees its not always gonna be easy

I LOVE LANDON he is soooooo cute



Author's Response: Noah's planted more in reality (aside from a little hammock sex...but that's just the male in him!) Kay so needed that talk!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 44

amazing job so cant waait for more.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 07:38 am Title: Chapter 44

Aw, a very cute ending. Landon is adorable. :) Loved the scene with Brooke's 1st birthday, oh memories...

Author's Response: LoL I want to shrink all the kids back down and start over again, haha

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 06:13 am Title: Chapter 44

LOVE it! what a great family!



Author's Response: A great CRAZY family!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 03:14 am Title: Chapter 44

Lol. Shelby & Mason, now Kayleigh & Noah. Eventually Landon & Brenna. Lmao. They like to keep it within the family - thankfully, not the blood related family. *snickers*

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I really hope Noah & Kayleigh are able to move to NY so Noah can go to Julliard.



Author's Response: Lmao..I was thinking the same thing! If this happened IRL I'd be kind of creeped out. It's like BSB arranged marriages or something. But who knows? Brenna and Landon could end up never seeing each other again...I know I don't see some of MY friends from when I was four and five. :) As for your PS--I hope he goes to Julliard too! We'll have to see...

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 03:04 am Title: Chapter 44

Aw, I miss Shelby and Mason. Squee. And Shelby's right its going to be tough for Kayleigh. Having kids is no picnic in the park but have them when you're still a kid yourself. Sigh. You live, you learn.

Btw I stopped getting email updates. Don't know why. Everything seems ok in my preferences. If you could you should make a twitter account and sent out update tweets.

Author's Response: I miss Shel and Mason too! I'll work on a Twitter option this weekend.. I'm in the homestretch of my semester at school and I've neglected every one of my projects...I might actually disappear from righting for a couple weeks while I catch up. Either that or updates are going to slow way down.

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 02:44 am Title: Chapter 44

OMG! I knew Shel would talk with them, she SHOULD and NEEDED to do that! It was so good that Noah and Kay could listen the reality, because now Shel KNOWS about it! She is a woman now. I'm sooo proud of her and Mas!!
Jasper comment was great! "You were cute. What happened?" HAHAHHAHA

NICK DRUNK..... AND THE GIRAFFES!!!!
OOHH THE PICS!!!
OOHHH NOW SHHHH MY FAVORITE OF THIS CHAPTER!


''There was a pause. Suddenly, everyone burst into peals of laughter.
"BE QUIET!"
I glanced over to the corner. Landon sat up and rubbed his eyes. He petted Brenna's fake ears.
"Doggie's tired," he declared.
I figured it was my hormones, but I swear that it was the cutest thing I had ever seen. Landon curled back up to her.
I wondered if they would end up dating when they got older. It seemed like even though the 'Backstreet' crew was getting bigger, it was getting smaller at the same time.
Everyone really was becoming family.''
I LOVE LANDON!!! SHHHH DOGGIE'S TIRED!!! PROTECTING BREE.. AWWW MY LILL CARTER IS ADORABLE!!!!!!
AWWW KAY..... YOU ARE RIGHT! BSB RULES!

Author's Response: LoL ahhh memories with the scrapbooks. Got to love the giraffes! :) And as always, had to have Landon steal the show, haha

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 02:32 am Title: Chapter 43

MY MCLEANS ARE BACK!!!! OHHHH BREE AND LANDON!!!!
Ohhh Brooke as red hair..... someone always said that prefer a red hair...... YES BOOBOO!
And Kay's big boobs... OHHHH NOAH!
Ooohhhh those kids... love Landon!
Nick just scared me.....

Author's Response: Hmm someone DID mention they like red hair didn't they? haha. I can't ignore these McLeans for long! Ally's story is coming soon...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 44

--"I love you and I'll love this baby. It's just...overwhelming."-- At least Noah knows it won't all be sunshine & roses :)

--Before he could say anything more, Shelby walked up to us. She gave Noah a hug and turned to me.-- Yay! These two def need a talk with someone who's been there :)

--"Do I regret having Brenna? Never. I can't imagine life without her. Do I regret getting pregnant with her at sixteen? Absolutely. I wish Mason and I could have been wasteful with money and traveled and just spent lazy days together without a care in the world before she was born. But, if I had to choose between my own self absorbed desires and Brenna handing me a picture of nonsense scribbles, I'd choose her scribbles any day."-- the perfect ending to a very eye-opening talk... something Kay & Noah both needed

--"Where's Brenners?" Shelby asked.

"With Landon, Brooke, and Jasper," he said. Shelby tipped her head back.

"So we're alone?"

Mason laughed. "If you count being here with fifty other people alone, sure."-- hehehehe

--"Next year at this time we'll have a baby," Noah said. I felt his heart beating through the thin scraps of his zombie outfit.-- god, like Shel said, i wouldn't wish teen parenthood on anyone (not that i actually know firsthand what thats like or anything, but still...)

--"We're in a hammock."

"And our dad's are drunk in the front yard. Your point?"-- hehehehe, damn, NoNo is an adventurous one...

--Livvy tapped a picture of her mom holding Noah. "Remember what Kay did when you showed her Noah?"

They looked at each other.

"Ooooh," they said in unison. I blushed.

"I did not," I said.

"You did," mom said with a laugh.-- o_0 what did she do?

--"Well, look at me," Noah said. "Who could resist that awesome Winnie-the-Pooh diaper?"-- cocky, much? hehehehe

--"Remember the giraffes?" he asked. Dad grinned.

"They ate your pants," dad giggled.

Brooke's eyes widened. "Now I remember why I hate giraffes!"-- hehehehe

--"BE QUIET!"

I glanced over to the corner. Landon sat up and rubbed his eyes. He petted Brenna's fake ears.

"Doggie's tired," he declared.

I figured it was my hormones, but I swear that it was the cutest thing I had ever seen. Landon curled back up to her.-- Nah, it wasn't the hormones... at least not entirely, cuz I thought it was pretty damn cute too :)

--I wondered if they would end up dating when they got older. It seemed like even though the 'Backstreet' crew was getting bigger, it was getting smaller at the same time.

Everyone really was becoming family.-- YAY! I luv it :)

Author's Response: "You did," mom said with a laugh.-- o_0 what did she do? That's a reference to Babies and the Band. At Brooke's first birthday Noah was about two months old. When Liv held him out little Kay crossed her eyes, leaned forward and went 'Oooh.' Fast forward sixteen years later and...well y'know what happened!