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Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 40

Oh snap.. they're all in troubleee!!

And I think Marcie was about to say that the blood test proved Kay's preggos. This is like a really good tv show! I like Baylee's nickname "Mar". It's Spanish for "sea". :) (No, I don't speak fluently Spanish but I'm teaching myself some because I love the language, and I just happen to know that word lol) Imma go to the next chapter quickly!! *runs*



Author's Response: It is Spanish for sea! It's been a long time since my last Spanish classes but I remember that one for some reason :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 39

Ohhh I totally melted at their cute brother-sister moment. I will vote again. One vote for Marcie as a sister-in-law!

Hmm.. I have a feeling the blood test will prove different from the urine test..

Alright.. up to the next chap!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 38

I forgot to reply to this when I read this in Heartbreaker: OMFG. but also... YES!! I wanna vote! Can I vote? Yes? I vote for Baylee and Marcie instead of Baylee and Claw-diator!! 

I will read the next chapter right now. :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 42

Oh she is so screwed up in the head. She thinks life will be simple?? Yeah think again. She can't take care of herself let alone a baby. Her & Noah are too young and she is too immature to handle another life. Keep up the excellent work.
MArguerite

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 42

Awwww Kay is thinking about being Married to Nono. But yeah Life in general isn't easy no matter how you spin it. and even PREGNANCY isn't simple lol (I should know i am 20 weeks and going strong lol). I like that Leigh poked some fun at herself with her daughter, and I'm glad Brian didn't blow up even if it was at the request of his wife lol. I loved watching old Popeye and Olivoil cartoons growing up i wish they re did them for a new generation. can't wait to read more and i think we need an update on the Bay Claw-dia situation there is defineatly something up her sleeve.

Reviewer: Sevily Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 42

Just caught myself up, and even though I knew the events of what was happening already, I was still surprised. I couldn't see Brian reacting badly per se, but I couldn't see him being okay with it either. And Kayleigh seems to think it's all going to be sunshine and roses, that life will be perfect. But I know from experience, she's wrong, but maybe having the support will make it easier...

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 42

i have a feeling you wont let us have it that simply! lol great work, cant wait to read more!!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 42

Kayleigh, having a baby is anything BUT simple.. And I think it's even harder when your still a kid yourself.. There is a big diffrence between Shelby and Kayleigh, Shelby was so much more mature and had a more real view of all how the world works.. Kayleigh is still a child, that lives in her own little Littrellworld :)



Author's Response: You're right...Shelby was more mature. She NEVER thought it was going to be easy...

Reviewer: Notsku Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 07:06 am Title: Chapter 42

I though you said that Shelby was going to be the only backstreet girl to get pregnant at 16???

Author's Response: Well, if I told you guys there was going to be one more then that would have ruined the shock factor, right?

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 05:02 am Title: Chapter 42

Yep, it all seems so simple doesn't it, Kayleigh? Thanks for another chapter.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 03:43 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh, simple it never is Kayleigh. I still sense some more drama headed your way. And I still do NOT trust Claw-dia AT ALL.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. And how can Nicky freak out over baby news, when HIS baby has had a sex tape released!!!! Like father, like daughter. Least, I think Nick had a sex tape....or was that just Paris Hilton alone? Lol.



Author's Response: LoL when it rains it pours. I've heard that Nick and Paris have a sex tape that was never released - soooo....yeah like father, like daughter!

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 03:28 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh Kayleigh darling, life is NEVER that simple. I'm sure she will find that out sooner than later!

P.S. PLEASE do a convo between Nick and Noah. That will be epic!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 42

''I looked over at mom and dad. Mom looked exhausted. Dad looked hungover. I had snuck downstairs last night to see mom and dad huddled together talking. Dad had a bottle of wine in his hand. This morning, that bottle had been empty.''
--Oh Brian.... it's hard.


''Dr. Klein continued to ask me questions that I so didn't want to answer in front of mom and dad. Finally, she put down the clipboard.''
--Now you know the feel....


"Everything looks good," Dr. Klein said She pointed to the screen. "I'd say you're about seven weeks along, Kayleigh."
Mom squeezed my hand. I was mesmerized.
"Can I have a copy of this?" I asked.
"Make that two," dad said thickly. I glanced up.
He had a tear in his eye.''
--Awww is your baby, Littrells!!!


"Surprisingly...they've been fine," I said. "I mean, they're not as thrilled as they were with Baylee, but God works in mysterious ways, y'know."
---Because Bay is older and WERE married... Kay is a kid! God... God is GOOD! He gives what you need, not what you want.


"Kay, do you want to go pick out a costume?" mom asked. I was hunched over my homework trying to give it a good shot.
I didn't want my baby to have a dumb mom.
"I don't need to dress up," I said. Mom sat down beside me.
"Why not?"
I shrugged. Mom tugged at my hair.
"C'mon. At least come laugh at me."
I glanced over at her and smiled. "Well, when you put it that way..."
---well, saying this way..... it should be fun be Leigh and Brian's daughter!


"Okay. Listen, I called Nick today."
I glanced over at the phone. Mom pursed her lips. "And?"
"I did what you asked and I didn't play the blame game."
I glanced at mom in surprise. She had told him not to place blame?
I was impressed.
"And?"
"And nothing. The unimaginable happened. Nick and I are gonna be related," dad drawled.
--because when they must be down to Earth, they are!


''I bit my cheek and smiled. After all these years they really were going to be a family! I pressed my hand against my stomach. I was going to be a mom! I was going to have an adorable little baby to dress up and show off and spoil.''
--After all, Frick and Frack will be Fam.... LIFE!


''I didn't say it aloud, but I was getting excited. This was going to be fun. Noah loved me and we were going to have a little one that needed us. I felt amazingly special.
Maybe this was my career. Maybe I was just destined to be a mom. Just like Livvy was. Maybe Noah and I would have a bazillion kids. He'd come home from the studio and I'd have dinner on the table and tons of blonde kids running around.
I sighed and snuggled into my seat.
Mrs. Kayleigh Carter. It sounded good.
That was going to be my life. It was all so simple.''
---Now, let's talk. Take a seat and relax.... do you want to talk to Shelby and Mayson? I thin it would be handi!
DOWN TO EARTH KAY! Maybe she were born to be mom, just Jen can tell this.
Poor Carters.... NEXT!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 02:06 am Title: Chapter 42

Looking VERY forward to that phone call between Nick and Brian...can't wait!!



Author's Response: Well, you pretty much got the jist of the call in this chapter. I think a face to face at Halloween will be even more interesting...

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh boy..is SHE in for a BIG surprise!  What Kay needs is a nice sit down chat with Shelby.....



Author's Response: She's in for a total reality check! And it's funny you mention Shelby..