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Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 39

I'm glad Baylee's come to his senses about Claudia. Man, this is going to be SO messy. I have a bad feeling about Kay's blood test results...if she isn't pregnant, she could just be late because of stress. She's definitely had her fill of it lately. Don't leave us hanging for too long! ;)

Author's Response: Would I leave you guys hanging for long? Wait, don't answer that....

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 39

Oh lord I hope she isn't pregnant. She couldn't handle that now. As for &&^%$#@!**&^%$ nasty ass cheating ho bag Claudia why not divorce her? She lied to him & I am positive the spawn isn't his. Opinion would be on his side not the whores. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 39

Yay Baylee!!!!! I'm loving him once more! Lol.

I'm glad Kay's not pregnant - so far. Maybe her period's just late 'cause of stress.

Yes Baylee, get with Marcie. Dump Bitch Claw-dia.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Kay's had her fair share of stress lately, hasn't she? :) We all love Baylee now -squee!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 39

oh sweet brother and sister moment :)

honey sorry to tell you but the text come back negative with Liv at first when she was pregnant Noah so dont be to happy just yet



Author's Response: Once she got past the vision of Baylee's white butt there was a nice brother and sister moment in there. LoL poor Kay. haha

Reviewer: musicismylife82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 39

Somhow I have a feeling that although the urine test was negative she indeed is pregnant... lets see how it turns out :).

I think its great that Bay is supportive and he and macie seem to make a cute couple!

Author's Response: Bay and Marcie do make a good couple...but talk about a messy situation...and I don't just mean the desk :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 38

--"At least it's pizza day," Tempie said.-- hehehe, i always luved pizza day at school :)

--My period had been a couple weeks before the trip to L.A. Hadn't it? And it had been almost three weeks since I had gotten back...-- aw, crap-on-a-stick....

--What I learned was cause for hysteria. I stared at WebMD in dismay.

Studies showed that condoms and chlorinated pools weren't a good mix. The pool chemicals did something to the composition of blah, blah, blah.

In short, messing around in a poor put you at a higher risk for pregnancy.-- stupid WebMD... gotta freak my Kay-d Bug out like that....

--"What a nice surprise."

"How can you say that?" I blurted.

"What?" he said in utter bewilderment.

I took a deep breath. I forgot that he wasn't sitting right beside me. I had to backtrack myself a little bit.-- LUV that reaction....

--"Normal people chances or Carter people chances?"-- omg, this line cracked me up!!

--That was a huge mistake. I so should have knocked. I couldn't stop the shriek that escaped from my lips.

Marcie was in her office, but she wasn't eating lunch. And she wasn't alone.

I slammed the door. My eyes burned. I had just seen more of my brother than I had ever wanted to see in my life. I would never be able to look at a desk normally ever again.-- OMG! I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! He's falling for Marcie! Take that, Clawdiator :P

--The whole world was crazy and it all had to do with a little thing called sex.

At the moment, I wasn't such a big fan.

In fact, it was becoming a huge pain in the ass.-- hehehehe, too true :)

Author's Response: LoL Kay realized sex is a pain in the ass a LITTLE too late She was tardy to the party :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 06:38 am Title: Chapter 38

Oh dears, Baylee was a kid at This Is Us Tour, he heard PDA too much. That sticks like a clue..

Intimacy
Fresh from my dreams
A triple x movie scene
I could care less about being seen
A higher self esteem “if you on me?”
Aint that the was its supposed to be
I say baby do you think
Sugar so sweet should rot my teeth
But instead it just rottens me
Yeah, spoiled crazy

Public display of affection
Gotta make em
Point in my direction
Watch em
Public display of affection
Makes them wish they had it this way
Meet me at the club, the resturant, the grocery store, Marcie's office or the movie
Kissin and touchin with my hands all over your booty
Where ever it is, we is, I love it truely
Your PDA hey hey
I want your PDA

From the lobby to the patio
And we so compatiable
The starbucks to the navaho
And we so compatiable
hahahah GO LITTRELL!!! Free your Carter within!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 38

WOW!!!! Sex complicates everything. I guess that's why nuns have it so easy. LOL!

A lot of going on in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Can you imagine Kay as a nun? Never work!

Reviewer: musicismylife82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 12:34 am Title: Chapter 38

I actually feel sorry for Nick lol. That poor guy just had his V-Day, is becoming a Father to twins AND maybe, just maybe even a GRANDFATHER at around the same time LOL... I am not sure if he will go ballistic or pass out the time he gets the news of the possibility :) Oh and the same goes with Brian haha he better be kept away from Nick LOL

Please Jen tell me that if Kay is pregnant please make an exclusive LJ of Nicks thoughts about it... thats gotta be interesting!

Awesome work, great chapter!

Author's Response: Brian and Nick are going to be related one way or another right? :) I'm going to be writing Nick exclusives for ever if I keep this up, lol

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 12:06 am Title: Chapter 38

Roflmao!!!! GO BAYLEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol.

Oye vey Kaylie! You can NOT be pregnant!!!!! It'd be like the Shelby thing ALL over again!!!!!! Though, least Backstreet men are always willing to stick around & stay committed. :)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. Feeding Claudia crackers now, Leighanne? What was wrong with her own damned hands? They finally loose grip on Baylee's balls???



Author's Response: LoL Goo Bayleee it's your birthdayyyy...haha. Our Backstreet men are dedicated to their women aren't they? Kudos for that at least. And rotfl at your P.S.!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 38

IF Kay is preggers, then she will probably be due about the same time Claw-di-nator is...haha! Somehow, I'm with Kay and doubt that kid is a Littrell.  And it would be HIGHSTERICAL if he knocked up Marcie too!  Our dear little Baylee is not the straight and narrow man we thought he was!  Can't wait till Kay processes what she saw...lol.  OOOO and she won't be too far behind Liv either!  So Nick will become a daddy AND a granddaddy withing MONTHS!  Just had a flashback to Nick and Noah's talk..."If you tell me I’m going to be a grandfather, I will kill you. I still deserve at least five more years of teasing AJ before it happens to me.” lmaooooooooo!!!!! Maaaaaaybe...maybe not Nick...hehe...



Author's Response: You just did a lot of math for me. Thanks :) Poor Kay...she doesn't want to EVER think about what she saw. LoL all I can imagine her saying was that there was waaaay too much 'whiteness' LoL. Oh Nick...you sure do want those five years don't you? :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 38

AHHHHH! omgomg cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: CarterFanUs Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 38

You full of surpises int you ;) wow she cant be but she may be wow (my head hurts) if she it will be good to find out how they two handle it and of couse will their parnets play the blame game or oh dear oh dear kind of hoping she not bc going bk to the father son talk Nick and Noah had, Nick is going kill him ok maybe not kill him but hurt him little

and also Baylee sleeping with Marcie did not see that one coming at all WOW.

Author's Response: LoL yeah Noah's in 'kill zone' for the next five years remember? :) And then I did a 360 by adding Baylee into the mix. Glad ya'all enjoyed that turn!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 38

Oh lord I hope she isn't pregnant. She is the last person that needs to be a mother. She needs to straighten herself out before she can consider giving life to someone. And Noah is in no way ready to have a bay. On the brighter side I am very glad to see Baylee is "seeing " Marcie. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 38

Oh my god!!!!
You got me so caght up bitting my nails over Kay's situation and the BAM!!! Baylee and Marcie in the middle of Teenage Wildlife!!!
I suppose he really needed another kind of therapy!, I kinda don't blame him!
Please tell me there will be more today, I don't think I can wait for tomorrow!!!!

Author's Response: Actually I think that's it for this one today. I'm evil, aren't I? :) lol at Baylee's 'other' kind of therapy. You'd think he was a Carter! j/k