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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 37

Yes, the quicker we get back to Noah the better. And the quicker Baylee gets rid of that lying slut of a wife, all will be GOLDEN.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL I haven't heard someone say we'd be golden forever. Thanks for that! :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 04:05 am Title: Chapter 36

How I could miss another chapter?? JESUS, GABRIELE!

Well....

''She flushed. I didn't really consider my brother to have any skills, but it looked like I might have judged wrong.''
---everyone haves, Kay... plus, you haven't idea how your parents are talented themselves... oh in a sick afternoon....



"It's different with Noah," I argued. "He's known me forever. Even when I had self worth. And it's not like I don't have any. It's coming back."
She smiled sadly. "Says the girl who's sure a baby will make her invisible again?"
I blinked in surprise.''
---GOTTA YA! HA! Oh Kay.... you're so mature sometimes...


''We were supposed to be reading Great Expectations. I hadn't even opened the cover of my book. That's what cliff notes were for. While everyone else talked about Pip and Miss Havisham, I thought about Noah and Halloween.
I smiled to myself at the thought that maybe I'd be an angel this year. It would feel good to have my wings back.''
---Awww she haves wings.....
I'm really sad and worried with Baylee and Marcie. Period.

Author's Response: I was on a posting spree yesterday! :) haha Bri and Leigh do have the talent...good thing to or she wouldn't be 'here'! Marcie's good with Kay...she doesn't let things slide...even if she is hurting right now...

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 01:47 am Title: Chapter 37

"You don't have butter on your hands, do you?" Claudia said. I gave her a dirty look.
"I'm clean."
She snickered.''
---Oh boy, this pregnancy will be interesting....



''I felt kind of bad that I couldn't get excited, but deep down I just had a feeling that this was not my niece or nephew.''
--I understand Kay, isn't easy try to feel something that you should but you can't, she will learn things, I'm sure.



"The Littrell empire is expanding," he said. Everyone laughed but me.''
---Don't say that Littrell.... just don't!


"Did I tell you Nick's getting snipped tomorrow?" he asked mom. Her eyes widened.
"No. He's actually going to do it?"
Dad grinned. "Livvy said he'd have to sleep outside if he didn't."
---Aww our Carter Dog... awwww.
Liv would do it.


''Mom laughed. "Lord help her if she has twin boys."
----Ooohhh Leigh, she already have Noah.... AND Landon....



"Carter boys are good," I said out loud without thinking. I took a bite of chicken before I realized dad was looking at me.
"What?" I said.
"Carter boys are dangerous," dad said. Mom smiled.
"Our daughter is dating one," she said lightly.
Dad looked like he was going to cross himself.
"Thank God they live in Florida," he said. "I don't think the force field reaches this far." I smiled.
I hated to tell him, but I was pretty sure it did. Just the thought of Noah made me happy.''
---hahhaha Littrell will pay his mouth and all wrong he might have made in life. It's a Carter thing do the unthinkable. Noah is THAT good.



''I sighed. Now that I was in love, I could tell the difference between real and a sham.
What I was witnessing was a total sham.''
---Awww she is already learning to feel things. this is good.



''Mom and dad knew all about how much I had to fake things in the past few years. I heard mom sigh. I swear I was causing her more facial wrinkles than she could have ever imagined.''
---Well.... she is human!



''Mom wrapped an arm around me. "You have a lot of opportunities other kids don't have. This is a little setback. I'm just sorry that I didn't catch it. I just thought you didn't care about school."
Truthfully, I didn't care about school, but since mom was admitting blame I wasn't about to correct her.''
--Oh Kay, of course you wouldn't miss that opportunity!


''Something told me he was getting wise to my theatrics. He tickled my sides before he opened my door.
"C'mon princess. It's going to be a few years before you get that first Oscar."
I laughed. Mom looked confused.
Some days I still was a daddy's girl.''
--Leigh could be good, but Bri IS a man and a father... he KNOWS things.



"You have plenty of time for a social life," dad said. "You have your whole life for that."
---hahaha we know how Bri is a joker, but sometimes he kills!



"This is going to start next week grumpy. We want you to give it at least a month. If you're doing good, we'll cut back."
---Kay needs a routine, she will be thankful in the future.


''Mom tapped her little schedule that she made. She was a sucker for schedules.''
--I must admit, I'm a schedule sucker myself.



"Plus this is going to keep you so busy that it will be Halloween before you know it."
I smiled at that.
Maybe keeping busy wasn't going to be such a bad thing. Anything that got me back to Noah quicker couldn't be all bad.''
---See how things can be good too. It depends from your point of view.

I'm worried with Baylee... Leigh won't see his unhappiness?

Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 01:06 am Title: Chapter 36

I love Kay.

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 37

But I wanted her to spend more time with Marcie too!! :(

i loved how she said that " now that I'm in love ". It's great she knows she's in love and enjoying it!

Author's Response: I know! One day a week with Marcie sucks :/ I love that she knows she's in love, haha

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 37

I gotta agree with Kayleigh, I don't think the baby is Baylee's. Who knows what Claudia was doing while she was in "Africa". So she's got dyslexia. That sucks. lol That also sucks about the extra help, but that's what it's for. That also kinda sucks that she's getting her sessions with Marcie cut back. And yay! Can't wait for the Carter Halloween! :D

Author's Response: There was a lot of, erm, suckage going on with this review. LoL but at least we have a Carter Halloween to look forward to!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 37

The schedule will do her good. :) On the other hand, I understand where Kay's coming from. I had to have extra classes outside of school for Maths and one year later, when I dropped Math, I had to have extra classes for Economics. Even though I only had those once a week, it wasn't much fun, because it's exactly the thing you think it's the hardest. But it worked, eventually. And so it will also work for Kay. I can't wait for another Kay and Noah gettogether!



Author's Response: Yeah extra classes suck especially considering how frustrated she gets. I think everyone's jonesing for more Kay and Noah! I've spoiled you guys with my extended L.A. coverage :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 37

I think Noah needs to come visit her at home. Amazing job. So can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 37

will there goes my idea for not being a baby in there lol oh well still dont think the baby his his though.  lol oh yes the Carters boys are very good and also dangerous though that why we love them though.  I would be really good if the Carter had twins boys though.  Bet Brian was thinking what Nick had said about it being probably genetic lol

Wow poor Nick hehe are we gonna hav the LJ Exclusive be4 or after it 



Author's Response: Brian was SO thinking about what was said about genetics. Haha. I know, I figured I better put the 'no baby' theory to rest. You'll be getting an LJ exclusive. How could I pass up that opportunity?!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 37

Yeah um Kay maybe you should study more & think about Noah less. HAHAHAHA!! Oh I crack myself up. Like I would be any different than her if I had a boyfriend like Noah. I hope she can find out what dial a skank Claudia is hiding. Keep up the wonderful work.
MArguerite

Author's Response: Oh that IS funny. Like studying's going to happen with Carter on the brain!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 36

Awww. She's getting her wings back. :)

I still do NOT trust Claudia one bit! I think she just wanted to marry Baylee for the soscial status, money, & parties. Bitch!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: She is getting her wings back! :) But Noah wants her to keep her feet on the ground. LoL I think you and everyone else don't trust Claudia one bit! (not that I can really blame ya'all...)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 36

I wonder how this Baylee/Marcie thing will work out? I have a feeling that isn't over. Well, Kayleigh took her dyslexia test...the results are pending... Yes Kayleigh, reclaim your wings. :) Thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: I have no idea how this Baylee/Marcie thing will work out :) Kay's slowly becoming the girl she's wanted to be (albeit for those Clawdia moments of rage).

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 36

Awwww Kay u do have wings. Amazing job. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yes she does. :) And she's finding them again. yay!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 36

aw cute last line!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 36

I can't wait to see what happens on Halloween. I agree with Kaiah on the aspect that Leigh and Bri should have paid more attention, However 9 times out of 10 a homeschooled child does better in academics then a child who has gone to regular school (i'm not saying all kids who go to regular schools aren't smart) However with homeschool you have a more hands on approach to the kids development. Leigh (in this instance) didn't pay any attention to her daughter during the homeschooling and that is where the problem comes from.



Author's Response: I agree that Leigh and Bri needed to pay more attention but I agree with you that homeschooling isn't bad. The homeschool kids come to the libary for testing and they are so polite and well mannered. I'm a fan of both h.s. and traditional school. It's just what works for the family. :)