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Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 31

"Well, it won't work," she said confidently. She closed the bathroom door. I laughed, but at the same time I had a feeling that this whole dilemma was going to mean trouble for Miz Carter.

That about sums things up...LOL

I don't remember dropping my bags, but I did. The next thing I knew I was hugging Noah tightly and crying again.

"I didn't want you to hear it that way," he said. He pressed his lips into my hair.

"It was beautiful," I choked

YAH NOAH!!! LOVE THAT BOY!!!! I'm so glad to see that she wants him as much as he wants her, and not in a sexual way.....well not totally! LOL

Author's Response: LoL yeah Kay summed it up beautifully. She's a wise little thing. :) And rotfl at your comment about Noah and Kay. Not TOTALLY but it's definitely a part of it! haha

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 31

Awesome surprise! Now that Noah is there i hope Trevor keeps his mouth shut. We know what the Carter temper can do.



Author's Response: LoL we know fully well what the Carter temper can do. (I personally think its hot, haha)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 31

WHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABOUT DAMNED TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! I am *SO* super happy ofr her right now!!!!! Noah too!!!!!!!! Awwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sitting here with a huge ass grin on my face - luckily, everyone else is working, so no one is asking me what I'm grinning about - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

We need more Noah & Kayleigh time here! Lol.

~Lenni~



Author's Response: LoL I was feeling like a big meanie having Noah and Kay separated. She deserves some time with him! :) haha I do the stupid grin while I write it drives hubby crazy!

Reviewer: CarterFanUs Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 31

lol Angel is so funny hehe also even more horrable for her to think about. Something tell me Noah is not gonna like the agreement. but they not a agreement yet Trevor has not agreed to anything yet but of something tells me he going to agree to it.

But only away Trev can get Kay on his side if he tell her he sorry or hav something that can bring her wicked sister in law down, hope he does say he sorry. I know he needs to do more then that after what he said still like him though ppl say horrable things in heat of the moment but agin it was wrong for him to say it

still something fishy about Nate NO do not think he another Garrett(well i hope not anyway)

Author's Response: Noah isn't going to like that his sister is being followed by a string of drooling guys, lol. And Trev still owes Kay a SINCERE apology.

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 31

I was so caught in the shopping that I was surprised to see Noah too, lol!!!
Loved the dumbbell mental picture, but sh's so right about the mind games that await Brooke!
It's great to see Kay so happy!

Author's Response: shopping is ALWAYS fun! :) Kay deserves to be happy :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 31

--"Did you clobber him with a dumbbell?" I asked. Internally I was thinking that he was the dumbbell.-- sometimes I luvs my Kay D Bug... okay ALL the time :)

--"He's going to pick the prettiest girl and try to get under your skin. He's trying to play some psychology on you."-- Kay hit the nail on the head with this statement (I think) ( But i still luvs Nate.)

--"Don't mention this to your dad," Angel warned Brooke. "He thinks I have a shoe addiction."-- hahahaha, no way, Angel... a shoe addiction... who'da thunk it? (an' yeah that was sarcasm, btw (: )

--We decided to walk one block East to North Beverly. Angel left us outside Banana Republic to go buy some maternity clothes for Brooke's mom. As she disappeared down the street, Brooke and I turned and headed towards Victoria's Secret. It was great the way our minds coordinated sometimes.-- Victoria's Secrect... uh-oh....

--Angel laughed. "I won't explain your mom's theory. It'll just gross you out. I'll just say it must be something in the male Carter genes...or well, the other thing besides genes."-- hehehe Super-sperm LMAO! w/lil red capes :) yep, pretty sure it'd gross her out

--I loved Angel. She was beautiful, smart, strong, and independent. I couldn't imagine raising a baby alone, but she had done that and continued a successful modeling career.
In my opinion, Angel rocked.-- Totally agree :)

--I stopped. I blinked. I was sure I was delusional.
"NOAH!" Brooke said. She dropped her bags. He stood up and she hugged him tightly.
So I wasn't delusional.-- YAY! Noah showed up! :)

--I don't remember dropping my bags, but I did. The next thing I knew I was hugging Noah tightly and crying again.

"I didn't want you to hear it that way," he said. He pressed his lips into my hair.

"It was beautiful," I choked.

I heard the sound of crinkling bags. Through my watery eyes, I saw Brooke scoot around us and head into the room. I looked up at Noah.

"I've missed you," I said. Until that exact moment, I hadn't realized just how much I had missed him. He smiled.

"You have no idea how bad I've been wanting to see you," he said.-- Aw, i knew she was head-over-heels in love with him since the VERY beginning :)

--He took my hands. I had gotten used to turning them in just a certain way so that I could hide the angry marks, but he turned them the other way. He stared down. Slowly he brought each up to his lips. Then he hugged me again. I pressed my head to his chest. His heart was beating loudly. I knew mine was beating just as fast, if not faster.-- I F****n' luv Noah :) He's so sweet.

--"So does this mean I'm getting closer to boyfriend material?" he whispered. I laughed shakily.

"What would you say if I told you that my whole school knows you already are?" I replied.-- hehehehe luvs it

--He pulled away. Our eyes met. Those beautiful blue eyes had me drowning in seconds.

"I'd say," he said. His head lowered towards mine. "I'm a lucky guy."

His lips met mine.

And for the first time in forever, I was the lucky one.-- I'm so glad they both are finally together :)

Author's Response: LoL I love Kay too...gotta love her dumbbell comment! I also love that you put F*******n' rotflmao...what a happy ending!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 31

Kay right that the only reasons he want to do that,  oh soo sweet of Noah surpising them like hehe maybe the other reasons is to watch Brooke too bc of Trevor and Nate.  either away i am happy he there :)

Brooke should follow her own heart and not follow want other ppl say who to date.  Its go by who makes her really happy all the time and who will go out of they why making her happy if she sad.  yes the guy being hot and well got the packages is gr8 deal but question is who will make her happy.



Author's Response: Brooke will follow her own heart. Noah probably won't like the whole Brooke situation haha

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 30

oh my gooooooodnessssss i cannot wait to read more about kay and noah! also  "Claw-diator" made me lol



Author's Response: LoL I should have the next chapter tomorrow :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 03:45 am Title: Chapter 30

AND OMG THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JESUS!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 03:44 am Title: Chapter 30

''I walked out onto the balcony and leaned over. Dad was terrified of heights but I found a certain thrill looking down at the world below.''
---she haves another dad things...


"It did," I said. It was hard to pretend like I hadn't seen him before. Because I had. I had seen all of him. Even so, I smiled and held out my hand.''
--Oh Jesus...


''Nate smiled at Brooke again. "I can't say that I have." I winked behind his shoulder. I refrained from miming a blowjob. I figured I had teased Brooke enough for one day.''
---haahahahaha I won't comment, just say that Kay's trying to stay quiet!



''Okay, so maybe I hadn't teased her enough for one day. Her eyes practically bugged out of her head. It was hilarious.''
---hahahha Kay.. only you!



"Do you have a favorite restaurant out here?" Nate asked calmly. I smiled. I already liked him.
---Nate is the guy!


''I had been around a lot of guys before, but this guy was good. I walked over to Brooke and grabbed her arm.''
---I see Kay is a Team Nate!


''She was so totally getting de-virginized by him. I could tell.
And if that meant I had to take a step back tonight, well...
So be it.''
--Well... a friend must do the hard work... oh well...



''By the time they got back to the table, Brooke was in a permanent flushed state. They sat close together as they ate. I think I only saw Nate's left hand once the whole evening.
Of course, that didn't mean he was rude or self-absorbed.''
--Of course! He's the gentleman.. always trying to please Brooke.



''Noah warned. I loved how his voice seemed to magically fill the room. Brooke rolled her eyes. I laughed, but at the same time felt a little warm fuzzy feeling in my stomach. It just felt good to hear his voice.''
---Awww I love this feeling.. just the voice can make you go to the Sun and back.... awww.....



''It seemed way too deep for a fifteen year old. But this was Noah. He was mentally (and physically) older than that. And I loved it.''
---Oh yeahh he's deep.



''I tilted my head back and took a breath to keep the sobs at bay. I was suddenly transported back to that night in his arms. I heard his soft voice begging for me to let him in and the way my body responded...
"I love him," I said breathlessly. Before Brooke could say anything, I buried my face in my hands and just let myself go.
Noah was the one that was amazing. He had loved me selflessly forever. He deserved to get that much love back.
I was ready to give it a try.
I was ready to let Noah in.''
--FINALLY! YES!!!!!!!!!! GO CARTER!!!!!!!!!! YES!!! HE WILL COME TO LA!!! PLEASE, SAY YES... SAY IT!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 29

''it around. I sank down to the floor and looked underneath. I took the tip of my nail and pressed it into a teeny little hole under the pad.
Brooke gasped. "Kay, what are you doing?"
I looked up. The stubborn red light flickered to green for just a second. I hurried up and turned the knob. The door opened.
"Sometimes I get bored and watch Modern Marvels. Hotel systems aren't as fool-proof as you think."
---you know that many ppl will try this.... even at a certain BSB event.....



''The duffel bags weren't very interesting. Clothes, shaving cream, a couple books. I shoved some socks aside and grinned. I held up a box of condoms and shook them in Brooke's direction.''
--Kay ALWAYS finds things....


''I grabbed her arm and dove under the bed. She slithered under right behind me. We lay side by side. Brooke started to hit my shoulder. It took everything I had not to start laughing.''
---This is a good friend! She brings fun to Brooke's life.


''My curiosity got the best of me. I pushed up the bedspread a little more. I looked at Brooke and gave her a thumbs up.
Nate was hot. He had a white towel wrapped around him. It hung low on his hips showing that tempting dip towards his nether region. I felt Brooke wiggle a little bit. She peered out. Her eyes darkened; her breathing slowed.
She so had the hots for him.''
---We ALL have this hots for Kevin#2!



''He was impressive. Not Noah impressive, but still not bad. Even so, I looked away. I figured Brookie should get this moment all for herself.''
--1st: I KNEW Kay would say that about Noah, this girl must have fun showering with NoNo's thoughts... 2nd: she was sooooo cool at gaving Brooke the time...


''Minutes passed. The bed creaked. I held my breath. Seconds ticked by. Brooke was wiggling again. She was also sweaty. The girl was giving herself a hot flash.''
--JEN YOU ARE BED!


''I had never seen Brookie like this with another guy. I haven't really 'met' him yet, but something told me those two already had some chemistry going.
I wasn't good at science, but I had a feeling their chemical reaction was explosive.''
---Oh boy.. if you knew.... if you ONLY knew...

Author's Response: haha Kay's new scale is the Noah scale! ::grin: Kay is a good friend...I'd take her along anytime! especially a BSB event, haha. Except technically Brian's her dad so why would she break into his room? darn...

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 30

First things first: YAY FOR KAY! Finallyyyy! I love Just The Way You Are and I love Bruno Mars. :) I like the fact the name of Noah's new song is also the name of this story. I can't wait to read about a Kay-Noah gettogether!

Author's Response: LoL yeah, I had a hard time writing the blurb knowing that Noah's song was also linked to the title. :) Yay for someone else loving that song! I've listened to it like a million times :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 30

About damn time Kay realizes that Noah loves her. And I'm glad she is going to give him a chance. However I hope she doesn't push Brooke to sleep with Nate. He may be hot but I think they are moving too fast. Kay mind your own business and let Brooke be happy with Trevor. He may have broken up with her but at least he didn't sleep with her when she was drunk like Noah did with you. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I have to defend Noah. His heart got the best of him that night. I'm protective of my story 'son' LoL. I know your Team Trevor so you'll be happy to know you're getting your moment here shortly!

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 30

Aww.. She loves him! Just hope she loves him for who he is, not what he did..! I do think they have a future together, they just need to take babysteps..!

Author's Response: She does :) I wouldn't have it any other way. I don't want to break my NoNo's heart. I think she's always had something for him...the song wasn't the end all...just a jumping off place

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 30

I love the song and I really don't want to see Kay and Trev bump into eachother. If they do I hope kay rips him a new one!

Author's Response: LoL that would be an interesting thing to happen!