Date: 10/16/10 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 28
oh wow! i gasped a little here. lots of stuff going on! i cant believe she pulled her hair out! ahh
i cant wait for more!
Author's Response: LoL yeah everything happened all at once. It's a little overwhelming!
Date: 10/16/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 28
Holy shit!!! What a revealing chapter. She really is a crazy bitch. I can't wait to see what's going to happen with her and Baylee. Especially with Kay going to see Brooke.
Author's Response: I didn't realize this chapter was so long until I posted it. I had a lot to get out before she went to L.A.! I guess we'll find out the aftermath after Kay gets back... :)
Date: 10/16/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 28
The part where Kay swore in the presence of her parents was HILARIOUS! Those were two simple lines, yet they made me laugh so much.
But whoa this chapter reveals so many things! Claw-dia's a bitch! (not that we didn't know that but still!)Don't touch Marcie's pretty hair! And whoaaa... BAY AND MAR KISSED!! And Claw-dia walked in on them! Dang! Bay, cut the crap and dump her!
Btw, I didn't know dyslexia also counted for numbers. I've got discalculia (it's like dyslexia but only with numbers and calculating, like the name says) and I mix up 6 and 9 or 8 and 6 or if I have to write down the number 379 from, for example, a pc screen, I can write down 739 or in some other order. It took me really long before I could say what time it was, I still have a hard time counting money, though it's getting better, I still count with my fingers a lot though counting in my head gets better as well. It's too bad discalculia isn't common enough (at least not in Holland) for tests. My math teachers all knew I had discalculia but since there weren't tests for that, they couldn't prove it. Anyway, knowing was good enough for them so I got extra help outside of school anyway.
Anyway, if it's dyslexia what Kay has, and she'll get help, I'm sure things will go a lot easier and she might appreciate school a lot more. :)
Oh whoa.. long review lol!
Author's Response: Kay swearing reminded me of when Baylee said fuck when he was really little in WTB. Yeah we all knew that Claud was a bitch right? Right. My friend has dyslexia and mixes up numbers AND words. She's been able to get help for both but it's frustrating for her. Love the long review btw!
Date: 10/16/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 28
Claudia is a crazy, fake, non- virgin. Lol! I don't care what her story is because she needs to leave.
Author's Response: LoL yeah I don't think Marcie really cared what her story was but she wasn't going to tell Kayleigh she was locking lips with Bay. :)
Date: 10/16/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 28
omg what a crazy ass bitch hehe. baylee so needs to dump her ass. so happy baylee kissed marcie they seem so cute together hehe. amazing job and so cant wait for more. LA here we come hehe
Author's Response: It's SO time to get out of Atlanta right now. Pissed off Claudia, Baylee feeling guilty...Marcie with her hair ripped out..Brian and Leighanne dealing with two kids with problems. Lovely. L.A. here we go!
Date: 10/16/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 28
"Yeah. Dad, I didn't mean it. I guess I was just mad at Claudia for lying about the whole virgin thing. Maybe that was me getting back at her in a way."
Was holding out hope for that whole "man" angle, but that works too!!! Goo Baylee......no so pansy as I thought!
Author's Response: LoL yeah, she wasn't a man. Sorry to disappoint!
Date: 10/16/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 28
Yey!!! Kay sure is making progress, she's thinking about her family too!!! Not only herself! I really like that, even when she's jealous of her brother, she feels for him too!
And I'm just so happy Baylee kissed Marcie!!, take that Claudia!!!
Author's Response: Kay's growing whether she knows it or not. I'm proud of my little wild child. lol Claudia has NO fans, I swear... :)
Date: 10/16/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 28
Yes yes yes. DIng dong the lying ho bag is dead. What? I can wish. HAHA I knew the skanky, crusty whore wasn't a virgin. DUMP HER!!! ANd I knew he liked Marcie. Oh yeah they kissed . MAn would I have loved to seen her ugly face when she saw them kiss. Sweet justice. (in case you haven't figured it out I do not like her) But she attacked Marcie?? Bitch needs to die. Hey put her in a room with Kay and a baseball bat for 10 minutes. I think he should divorce her lying ass for lying to him about being a virgin. She reminds me of a doornob. Everyone has had a turn. And I am glad Kay is getting better and gets to go see Brooke. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
P.S. DEATH TO THE HO BAG!!!
Author's Response: Oh I figured that out quite a few chapters ago Marguerite... lol at the doorknob comment.... Kay is getting better even though she has her moments of self doubt. After THIS chapter she SO needs to go see Brooke. :)
Date: 10/16/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 28
--"My math teacher looks like a turtle," I said. Marcie laughed.-- Awesome comment!
--"Just another thing wrong with me," I mumbled.-- Oh, kayleigh, Kayleigh, kayleigh... there ain't nothing wrong with you
--"I had another appointment today so we've got to cut it short today," she said. She sniffed the air. I frowned.-- stupid Claw-dia... dumb b***h (sorry, but it had to be said)
--"I'm sorry," Marcie said pleasantly. "But her parents have paid for her whole session and I intend to honor that."
Claudia's eyes widened. I looked between them.
"Well, if she doesn't come now, she's going to walk," Claudia said.
"If you had an appointment, why didn't you have someone else bring Kay?" Marcie asked. I smiled. I felt like I had an ally. Claudia bristled.-- WOOHOO!!! Go Marcie!!!
--"Why don't I just take you home Kay?" she asked. I looked at her in surprise.-- WooHoo!!! For those of us keeping score, that's- Marcie- 2,000,000, Claw-dia- Big Fat 0
--"Are you serious?"
She smiled. "About what?"
I pointed towards the door. Marcie sighed. "I promised your parents that I would talk to the three of you as a unit on any issues."
"Is that why you're taking me home?" I asked. "Because I don't know if you've noticed, but Claudia's a huge issue."
I saw a muscle in her jaw tick. "I noticed."-- Okay, now it's: Marcie- 3,000,000, Claw-dia- negative 1,000,000.
--Glad that Marcie talked to Leigh & Brian about the possibility of Kay having dyslexia.
--Mom laughed. "Hostility? That's crazy. She's always been nothing but sweet to Kay."-- yeah, in front of people...
--"Actually," Marcie said. Everyone looked back at her. "We had a small altercation in my office a couple days ago."
My eyes widened. Why didn't she tell me?
"What type of altercation?" dad asked.
"She became uncomfortable with my questioning and went on the defensive."
Marcie brushed back her hair. There were a chunk taken out.-- okay, new score: Marcie 5,000,000... Claw-dia negative 3,000,000
--Motherfucker," I said breathlessly.
"KAYLEIGH!" mom said.
"What?!" I looked at mom and pointed towards Marcie. "Claudia's nuts!"-- YES!!! Luved Kay's reaction!!
--I know I should have headed up the stairs, but instead I veered off towards the stairs leading down to the studio.-- exactly what I would have done :)
"Yeah. Dad, I didn't mean it. I guess I was just mad at Claudia for lying about the whole virgin thing. Maybe that was me getting back at her in a way."
My eyes widened. I clamped my hand over my mouth.
So Baylee had gotten a little surprise on his wedding night. That didn't surprise me. But what had Claudia walked in on?-- I knew she wasn't no virgin
--Baylee had kissed Marcie! And Claudia had walked in! Oh boy!-- to quote Lenni "Oy vey in a half shell :)
Author's Response: Total oy vey in a half shell! :) I love that you gave Marcie like a billion points...she kinda deserved those this chapter!
Date: 10/16/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 28
bk to u answer about heartbreaker i am over it :);p
WOW Baylee kiss her wow that just shocking cant wait to find out more. Claudia perfect little world is coming not so perfect.
Do worry Kay u go spend time with Brooke with NO uncle Nick there.
Date: 10/16/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 27
Claudia is such a bitch. I can't believe she said those comments right in front of people. Baylee shouldn't be ok with that. And I was wondering if maybe Kay was dyslexic!
Author's Response: You're right...Baylee SHOULDN'T be okay with that. I wonder why he is...hmmm.... and yeah, I'm sensing a little dyslexia with Ms. Kayleigh...
Date: 10/16/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh my god Claw-dia is so fake and the way she talks to Kay? I don't like it. She has no idea of what Kay has gone through and she's one of the reasons why she did it. Stupid Claw-dia. And yay for Kay willing to give Noah a chance they are so cute together. As for trying to hook Bay up wth Marcie we'll have to see how that goes.
And the Claw-diator? That's freaking hilarious!
Author's Response: LoL well Noah WAS The first boy she thought of for her boyfriend 'lie' :) And she's dreaming big about getting the Clawdiator to disappear (I still love that name, haha)
Date: 10/16/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 27
Oye vey. Are you trying to drive your sister to the brink of insanity Baylee??? Not even *I* would want to spend an HOUR with miss Claw-dia!!!!! I'd be sure to go all Backstreet Bitch on her!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I was SO waiting for the pointy sticks! I know you put them away for awhile but I was sure that would prompt a reappearance :)
Date: 10/16/10 04:25 am Title: Chapter 27
Aw, at Kay for saying Noah is her boyfriend but I think its going to bite her in the ass. Hopefully not. Ew Claudia is back.
Am I the only one who pictures Luke Ford (from The Mummy: Tomb of The Dragon Emperor) as Baylee? LOL
Author's Response: I had to look up Luke Ford, but you're not far off. I'm thinking a little more Brian in that boy and it's totally close to my picture, haha.
Date: 10/16/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 27
Claw-dia is a rude annoying twit. I can't believe she made those comments about Kay almost being a hand model. She doesn't sound like a very Christian woman. What does Baylee see in her. Poor Kay if she has to spend time alone with her.
Author's Response: If Kay has to spend time alone with her that will be her worst nightmare come alive...lol
