Date: 10/16/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter 27
''For the rest of the lunch period, I was grilled about Noah. By the time the bell rang, I had merged a whole bunch of truth and lies together.''
---It's hard... OLD HABITS DIE HARD!
''Mom and dad seemed to be keeping up with the going-ons of my life lately. I had an inkling that if I skipped the school was going to let them know.
I wasn't ready to slip up yet.''
--Oh Kay...
''Claudia didn't look like she had just been in the jungles of Africa. Her nails were still perfectly manicured. There wasn't a speck of dirt on her. Bay reached over and took her hand.''
--Well, you don't have to look trash... but... Claw was really in Africa? Keep up reading....
"Will you have a scar from where you mutilated yourself?" she asked. A couple people looked at me. I stared down at the floor and counted to three just to calm myself down.
"I don't know," I said icily.
"Pity," she said. Out of the corner of my eye I saw her look at Baylee with fake sympathy written all over her face. "She had fairly decent looking wrists. She you could have been a jewelry model of something."
Had. Could. Like I had died after all.
I was glad I hadn't died. It would have made her all too happy.''
--- Freaking! Bay can hear??? Because LOOK AT THOSE COMMENTS!!!! SHE IS.... ohhhh....
P.S.: I TOLD ABOUT THE DYSLEXIA!
Author's Response: Ah, I love how angry everyone got over Claudia's 'pity' comment. She is harsh!!
Date: 10/16/10 03:35 am Title: Chapter 26
Kay's dyslexic? I sooo can see one far away...
And the lie... oh Boy... day 1... okay.
“I snorted. "Is mom planning the party?"
Bay laughed. "It's what she lives for Kay."
---Oh Boy, EVEN Bay? lol
"She has nice hair," I added. "It's a pretty, natural color. It's like...like..."
"Caramel," Baylee said. I grinned. He had noticed her hair!’’
---Oh Bay isn’t blind, Kay…. Work that and your mind too!
“Baylee looked at me and smiled. Then he looked back at Marcie. I swear he checked her out again. "Sure."
---SEE IT! He can SEE!
“There was someone so much better out there for him.
In fact, he was talking to her right now.”
---Well, Mer is a good woman, that`s for sure and Bay really deserves a better person…. Let`s see the future that Jen holds…
Author's Response: Ooh good catch on the dyslexia! :) haha yes, lets see the future Jen holds!
Date: 10/16/10 02:24 am Title: Chapter 27
LMAO at the ending! Go Kay! I wonder how Marcie's meeting with Claudia is going to go? She'll probably put on a front for her. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LoL we'll see if a train psychologist can spot it...
Date: 10/16/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 27
oh she said Noah thinking someone starting to see the light lol
Baylee is another Littrell should start to see the light Claudia is bad bad person
Date: 10/16/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 27
How in the HELL could Baylee let her say that to Kay? WOW!
Author's Response: I know that was pretty bad...
Date: 10/15/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 27
Baylee's a Wimp, Claudia's a Skank, and Kayleigh needs to become a warrior and lay into Claudia or she's going to explode. It's high time that snake get HER comeuppance. She better!
Author's Response: That was a nice summary there :)
Date: 10/15/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
Kay punch that bitch n da face!
Author's Response: LoL
Date: 10/15/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
Ugh seriously, Claw-dia can just go to hell! (And marry Satan, like Kay said) Oh my goood.. she can't spend more time with Kay! I already felt cranky and moody only when I read all the stupid comments Claw-dia made! Seriously.. someone should throw that woman back to the deep jungles of Africa while Baylee and Marcie can talk some more! I wonder what Marcie's impression will be of the Claw-diator (major thumbs up for that name btw!).
Author's Response: I was quite proud of my creation of Claw-diator. I tend to think of things at the weirdest, most random times. I know, I was cranky the moment I wrote the Kay stopped smiling. Things were going so well until that point. ::sigh::
Date: 10/15/10 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 27
* looks to lenni* Do you have any more pointy sticks maybe some tipped with poison? *cracks her knuckles* If only Leighanne were there i wonder if Claw-dia would have said anything. I would not have stood up for that comment i would have slapped her!
Author's Response: Claw-dia wouldn't want to upset her mommy-in-law now would she? Kay's going to have to be counting WAY past three after this is all said and done.
Date: 10/15/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
LoL oh you are horrible, you know that? hahahaha
LOVE IT!!!! :) So much fun~
Date: 10/15/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 27
Now that is a very nasty way to end the week with dial a skanky ho coming back. Yeah that bitch was not in Africa. More likely in a nail salon or getting plowed by some other guy. Nasty ho. Oh hell no now Claudia the scabby prostitute wants alone time with her?? Um no. And why didn't Bailey say anything to her about the elevator remark? Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
P.S. Death to the skanky, crusty, filthy, maggot ridden ho bag. BTW I meant Claudia.
Date: 10/15/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
" "Will you have a scar from where you mutilated yourself?" she asked. A couple people looked at me. I stared down at the floor and counted to three just to calm myself down."
Okay Baylee, this is where you raise your voice and stand up for your sister!! God..
And wrist model? Really? I think Kay have bigger issues to worry about that worrying about missing that chance.. I would make a great wrist model though, maybe when the "Landons" at my daycare have pushed my to the edge, I will start looking into that :)
Author's Response: I THINK you know who wears the pants in the family...and its not Baylee. Which is a little bit of a problem huh? Yeah the wrist model comment burns me...I love writing evil characters. mwhahaha
Date: 10/15/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
I've been in love with Dane cook since.. lol i think you wrote that by accident.
and ugh did baylee hear claudias comment about the jewlery modeling?
Author's Response: Thanks! I was debating Cook or Reisdorf and then I remembered the comedian's name was Cook. Actually, Claudia directed that comment TO Baylee. But to a guy's ears it probably didn't sound so bad...or he's just oblivious...which is a word I use an awful lot, huh?
Date: 10/15/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 27
Hehe amazing job can't wait for more.
