Date: 10/07/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 18
This is killing me!!!
I want to hug her so bad!! Please let Noah make Brooke stop what she's about to do!!! I think Kay realized what she was doing after all, so much so that she doesn't even blame Brooke for how she feels.
Date: 10/07/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oye vey in a half shell. Trevor doesn't even KNOW her! How DARE he judge her like that! And Brooke needs to grow up a little!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: haha and we were saying in the beginning how mature Brooke is...see what happens when we're almost fifty chapters into it? tsk tsk
Date: 10/07/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ok, got caught up, poor Kay!, Noah is awesome, he knows something is up and ants to help. However i do like Trevor but he shouldn't judge before getting to know someone , He should have kept his mouth shut and made judgment when he knows the whole story. I really hope Kay doesn't go down the supper dark road.
Author's Response: Glad to see you caught up! Lots of drama in the last few chapters. Trevor SHOULD have kept his mouth shut. I mean the Carters don't judge him based on his family. argh..
Date: 10/07/10 07:43 am Title: Chapter 17
poor Kay. She's so gonna end up loving Noah.
Date: 10/06/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow that is hot Kay n Noah, tell you something she better not be playing with his heart bc Brooke maybe be sweet and caring after all her last name is Carter and she anything like her father u would not want to get in her bad side (Just ask Noah lol) do not think she well let anyone mess with her siblings hearts even her best friend.
She is good for Noah hope she sees it be4 it is to late
Author's Response: haha you guessed it before I posted the next chapter of American Honye. Good for you. :) Kay and Noah had a little, shall, I say electricity...but let's hope the boy doesn't get electrocuted in the process
Date: 10/06/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 17
Kayleigh, you DO deserve Noah! You do! I wish she could see that. Can't wait for the aftermath of this chapter.
Date: 10/06/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
Aww Kay.. :( I feel so sorry for her, she really needs to open up. Noah is the best person to tell everything to first. Throughout this whole chapter I kept forgetting Noah is actually Brooke's bro.. but for some reason it doesn't seem weird or anything. Kay and NoNo are meant to be, me thinks. (:
Author's Response: haha it was weird for me. He's technically my imaginary story child ::lmao:: Kay does need to open up...but we'll see exactly when or if
Date: 10/06/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've red this chapter in a overloaded bus, people everywhere, this really hot guy next to me and I was thinking: I hope they can't read the words on my screen haha....
But wow what a chapter, finally Noah and Kay, what a great couple..now if only Kay would understand that she is worth it.
Author's Response: I've been commenting at work so haha I know how you feel! :) I so love Noah. have I mentioned that before?
Date: 10/06/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 17
I can put my money that she will get into a club, go party hard to forget all about Noah... then she is there with some stupid man and she can't do it, because Noah's plying at his mind.
Oh boy...
Author's Response: hmm, that's a probable scenario. Just wait and see! :)
Date: 10/06/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
''And I wanted him selfishly.''
--All us girls at this point Kay... I'm sure she will have to fight over him. Ooohhh they will Tour together!!!
''It was like I had hit some type of magic Carter button. The pants fell to the ground, but before I could do anything else, I was in Noah's arms. He had lifted me off the freakin ground without even breaking our kiss.''
--Dad would be proud..
"You're not a virgin?"
He smile deepened to a full on grin.''
--Oh that Carter grin makes us go.... DOWN! hahaha
"Oh," I gasped. Sometime in the course of my inner monologue, he had slipped my panties off. I felt his warm fingers as they pressed against me just right.''
--she wasn't waiting for that...
''Maybe this was what dad meant when he had mentioned something about Carter charm because Noah was currently oozing it. And I seemed to be lapping it up like a thirsty puppy.''
--Carter's ALL about that... hehe
''My scale had just been tossed out the window.''
--I KNEW IT! HA! Take it! Well.. she did...
''When his eyes finally opened again, I shivered.
They were almost black.''
-- Oh boy.. I'm a Mclean girl... I'm a Mclean girl....
''I closed my eyes. I tried to wipe every thought out of my body except for him. He was all about me. This wasn't just pleasure for him; he was doing this for me. My hands wrapped around his arms. His warm lips pressed against mine. I felt an animalistic scream rise from my throat. Not from fear, but from passion.
Passion I had never felt before. Passion that brought tears to my eyes even as we released together. Passion that made him hold me tight and cry into his chest as I realized that I was too much of a skank to even deserve what just happened.
"It's okay," he promised.
I wanted it to be okay. I wanted to be like a normal girl and have a boyfriend.
But I had lost my normal. This was as close as I was going to ever get. But it couldn't happen again.
My tears soaked into his chest. I felt completely off-kilter. He made me feel safe. But it wasn't his responsibility to take care of me.
I wasn't going to drag Noah down with me. Some nicer, purer girl deserved his love.
All I had was tonight.''
-- OH NO!!! OH LORD!! That was hot and sad... oh boy!! Noah is good... he IS a Carter damn it! Kay ia a good girl, she just need to open up with someone, and I'm sure she will do that with Noah. She needs to forgive herself and let Noah in. She felt how love is.
OH LORD!!!
Author's Response: haha you're a McLean girl but you know you liked his dark eyes! :) I wrote this chapter VERY early this morning and I think it's ranking up there with some of my other favorite chapters. I've been dying to write it for weeks and I'm happy how it turned out.
Date: 10/06/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh this made me cry. She does deserve Noah she just needs to tell people what happened to her with Josh. She isn't a skank she is a young lady that is in a lot of pain. Oh I hope this turns out well for her, Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yeah it's the pain and the hurt keeping her at bay. I'm going to join the rest of you that just want to give Kay-d bug a hug right now!
Date: 10/06/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit Kay you do not want to do this. It might destroy your friendship with Brooke. I can see why Trevor doesn't like her. I feel for her. I think what happened with Josh messed her up more than she knows or will acknowledge. PLease update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 10/06/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 17
that was beautiful and just so heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Ugh that was my intent while writing it. I feel even worse for Kay now though...
Date: 10/06/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ah, this is what I wanted to see (not the sex haha) but the Kayleigh that was hiding behind the wanderer :) hope she starts to find ways to cope now that she knows what she's missing!
Author's Response: haha...no I think that's what everyone wants to see. A less hardened Kay. I guess time will tell if that lasts...
Date: 10/06/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd love a Team Noah shirt right now. :) I'm feeling the love!
ME TOO!
