Date: 10/06/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 15
How cute is Landon and uh oh,Kay and her drinking and at least the fun begins now.lol
Author's Response: Landon's adorbz. Kay with a drink = trouble. Actually her middle name SHOULD be trouble!
Date: 10/06/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter 16
Brooke will KILL her best friend for toying with her brother's affections. This will tear them apart if it goes badly.....I just hope Noah had noticed the alcohol on her breath and does the right thing.....
Author's Response: Brooke IS very protective of her NoNo. On to the next chapter...
Date: 10/06/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 16
oh no. this is just going to go so badly.
Author's Response: ::whistles::
Date: 10/06/10 02:46 am Title: Chapter 16
Holy fuck!!! Kay's toying with his emotions!! How DARE she!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: ::zips mouth and just posts another chapter::
Date: 10/06/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 16
I smell trouble.....What will NoNo do? I hope nothing happens between Kay and Noah. He is so in love with her and if she uses him, he will be devistated. I really want them together because they love each other, not because she wants to get laid.
Author's Response: I told you to smell trouble!!! :) that's all I'll say for tonight, haha
Date: 10/06/10 01:43 am Title: Chapter 16
FREAKING MOMENT! DON'T YOU DARE TO DO THAT TO ME JEN!!! I NEED AN UPDATE!!! TWO... IN FACT!
Date: 10/06/10 01:35 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh Kayleigh...are Brooke and Kayleigh gonna bump into each other going to their respective rooms? ;) Can't wait to find out more!
Author's Response: haha anything could happen...I'm not gonna tell...my lips are sealed until I write the next chapters. because now I've caught up on what I worked on when I didn't have Internet. :)
Date: 10/06/10 01:32 am Title: Chapter 16
OH FREAKING HOLLOW WOWO MOMENT!
She will go thinking she will make it like the other times, but she will feel for him... or he will stop...... ooohhh she will feel something knew. Well, she already does, but she aren't aware of it.. oohhh LORD!!!!
NEXT!!!!! Oooohhh he will be 10!!!! He IS a Carter, damn it!
Author's Response: rotfl...I was feeling very 'cliff-hangeresque' tonight. I don't know if I'll have a morning update either. Very tired this week. :/ We'll have to see what happens behind closed doors!
Date: 10/06/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 16
o_o
Don't get me wrong, but I'm not liking Noah's situation right now!! But it's because he has so much hope! I'm kinda scared of what's coming next!!!
The rest... Well, it's Kay we're talking about, so I was expecting her feeling neglected! Makes me wanna strangle Leigh, but that's me!!!
Author's Response: I don't think anyone's liking Noah's situation right now! You're right..he has a LOT of hope. Kay runs hot and cold..and that only gets worse when she drinks. Why do you think she sent Brooke off? She was going to just wallow in her sorry self state :S
Date: 10/06/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 16
This is NOT the way I wanted the whole Noah thing to go.......Booo hisss lol I wanted them to have something meaningful!!!! Dang it Kaleigh!!!! LOL
Great chapter Jen!
Author's Response: haha I love how you're all irate and yet still say it's a great chapter. But I think you're directing your anger more to Kay then me, haha. So, thanks and you're welcome for the chapter!
Date: 10/05/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
yes! let the fun begin!!
Date: 10/05/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
same here, Jen. Yes, Joe's so AJ... Dan is perfect for it!
Howie.. oh HOWARD!
Date: 10/05/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg I smell trouble. Amazing job can't wait for more.
Date: 10/05/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 15
It was like a scene out of 1001 Nights. The ceiling was covered with a mesh netting that had little twinkle lights looped through it. The bar was covered with white draping. The head table looked like it was from medieval times. There were hired actors performing little scenes from Shakespeare. And of course, the doves were in a huge cage waiting for Baylee and 'Claud' to let them go.''
--OH BOY! 0.o
I racked my brain to remember how old he was. I was pretty sure he was fourteen. As I watched his mannerisms, I was hit with the suspicion that he was either very feminine or on his way to coming out of the closet in the next couple years.''
-- You've made him gay?? A Richardson?? You have balls, Jen!
"It will get better after dinner," she promised. I swear she had a Pollyanna complex. It would have been totally aggravating if I didn't love her so much.''
--oh what a friendship does to you...
''Champagne started to flow. No one said anything when the waiter filled my glass with the same gold bubbly that everyone else got in their flutes. I glanced around and took a sip.
It was amazing.''
--FEAR!
''I was sure Baylee was more than ready to get the hell up to a hotel room by now. Of course, I was still hoping for the whole 'Claudia is a man' thing.''
--fingers crossed! lol
''After dinner, I sat in the darkened room. Baylee and Claudia shared their first dance. Then Claudia danced with her dad (both cried...shocker, I know). Baylee led mom out on the floor for a dance. Dad got really teary-eyed over that.'''
--I would cry... shhh
Good see the Doroughs here... James is THE MAN! Thank God he wasn't there... oh Kay... and Howie.. yes, he's the one that ages better, must admit this...
And Dan is gay!
Author's Response: Like AJ, I love my gays. I have no problem with making a Backstreet child gay. It was going to be Joe early on, but he developed into a foul mouth lovable cretin, haha. I think we all agree that Howie's like wine...gets better with age!
Date: 10/05/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
I love Kay's humor. lol I did "awww" at Baylee dancing with Leighanne. :) Wow at Daniel possibly being gay, but he is in musical theater...just sayin'. Of course Claudia had to have her name in there, I can't WAIT for the drama between her and Kay, it's gonna be good, you won't disappoint. lol Yes Kay, now the fun begins...and I just want to add that at some point Kayleigh is going to have to be responsible for her actions, I won't blame Brooke if she doesn't "baby-sit" her the whole night or if at all. I forgot to add that to my last American Honey review. I wonder how long Kay will be able keep up her innocent act? Maybe the reception is the start of her showing her true colors? Can't wait for more from the reception!
Author's Response: Yeah I think Bay dancing with Leighanne got an 'aww' out of me too. That's her little boy... Actually, yeah from Shelby's story you can def. tell that Daniel's not like Mason. No football posters for him. But his musical theater background means he's going to take after his dead. I'm sensing success on Broadway. :) As for Brooke baby-sitting, whether or not Kay will throw down with Claudia tonight or later on, and whether her 'act' will be discovered...stay tuned!
