Date: 11/22/10 02:12 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh Mclean is THE opponent... Jesus.. D, you MUST be THE man to handle all these guys. EVEN BRIAN??? C'mon! My poor Mclean.. he's injured! Oh Rhoda... Idk if you're worth of all this.....
NEXT!
Date: 11/21/10 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
awesome story so far my 2 fave writers you guys always make your stories so real...
I love it when Howie gets all mad lol cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: LoL Howie cracks me up when he gets mad...I know that's not supposed to be the desired effect, but still...
Date: 11/21/10 04:26 am Title: Chapter 7
OH. MY. GOD.
PERFECT! I'm laughing and wanting Mclean at the same time.. poor 21st century Marlboro man, he isn't prepared for run! And his knee!
Oh Rhoda.... she CAN'T be THIS 'what' person! she is a woman... touching Carter's balls and asking if he was fine??
Oh Carter no pain, no game? Isn't!
"AJ was right beside her, hobbling slightly and holding his ass. I didn't have any trouble reading the look on his face.
It screamed murder.''
--Oh Mclean can do that!
'Rhoda is a goddess. She is just unfortunately a goddess who runs like the fucking wind. When my lungs collapsed - and then my pants ripped - I fell to the tar like a rock and hit my knee - YES the knee I've busted like twelve times now - and laid on the sidewalk. I was dying. I was convinced of it. "Ohhhh God," I moaned, "Jesus Christ almighty. Oh my God." I writhed.''
--Poor Mclean. I'm on his side!!! I can help!
''Rhoda's eyes widened, "Oh poor baby!" she whimpered. She got up and moved around Nick and knelt in front of the curb. "C'mere, let me see."
I sat on the curb and quickly rolled up my pant legs. Nick struggled to sit up and stretch his neck to see what she was doing. My knee was already all purple. Rhoda's eyes widened. "Oh my gosh, that looks like it hurts so much," she gasped.
"It does," I whispered, "But I'm man enough to take the pain."
"OHHH you're soooo brave," Rhoda breathed. "Let me help you back to the bus."
--- poor baby.... Mclean is going for the kill... and he won't be lying! He messed up his knee...
''Nick's eyes were wide like melons.
But I had Rhoda's melons all to myself.
That's right, Nick... Real men win every time.''
--- isn't the end....
NEXT PLEASE!!!
Date: 11/21/10 04:12 am Title: Chapter 7
Poor AJ and his knee! Man, this like watching a game of tug-of-war, back and forth...can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I totally felt bad for AJ and his knee...and the back of his pants. He had a rough time ..Nick's just a good faker :p
Date: 11/20/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Uh....Oh....sounds like Rhoda has something up her sleev...errrr..sports bra!!!
Author's Response: lmao... According to Nicky and AJ shes got alot up the bra! lol
Date: 11/20/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 6
Omg they are going to die on the jog hehe amazing job but so can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LoL we'll have to see :)
Date: 11/20/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 6
Those Boys and those boobs! God! :p This jogging should be fun...
Date: 11/19/10 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hmph. Rhoda seems like she enjoys teasing Nick lol. I LOL when Nick choked on the cereal and when he whimpered. The "I need to jog" comment....I died. Amazing funny chapter. Thanks ladies!
Date: 11/19/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooohh I had to come back, I'm having so much fun with Mclean and Dee:
''What the hell are you two chuckleheads doing?" she demanded, glaring specifically at me. I couldn't believe she was still pissed at me because of the whole towel incident. Very uncool. Grudge holding bitch. "Why don't you guys grow up?" she demanded, looking between Rhoda and us.''
--Very uncool! hahhaha
Date: 11/19/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
''I was Julius-fuckin-Ceasar, and Nick was Brutus.
Oh. Random fun fact. In Greek, et tu basically meant fuck you. And this is what Shakespeare, the brilliant man he was, basically made Ceasar's last words to his murderer - his back- stabbing, ex-best buddy - be.
If the shoe fits...
"Et tu, Bruti!" I shouted as I bulleted around the corner of the bus.''
--I sooooooo said this this week!!!! Ohhh!!!!
Oh Rhoda... you are evil, Lady! Doing that for Nick?? She will do something for Jay... mmmhhmmm.. let's wait and see...
Oh this jog will be so fun. I sense something about Dee... Idk why, I think she likes Mclean.
Idk...
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Date: 11/19/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey ladies, this is an awesome start. I'm hooked already. I love how each of you brings out each boys personality. This is gonna be a good one. I was crackin up on card swipe and Brian having an attack over boobs. lmao!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We're writing through the two dirtiest minded guys ever, lol
Date: 11/19/10 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
hahahaah Brian is just like me... just shhhh.. hahaha
Why you saw D naked? Why D was showering with Deanna? Did Leigh knows? hahahahhaha Jesus... I will have a thing here!
Oh this new chick... I think she have something over Carter indeed. I would TOTALLY suck over Mclean, but....
Yep.. don't fall for Nick's sweet talk...
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Date: 11/19/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMAO at AJ and Brian's convo! I have a feeling Nick's not giving up that easy either, AJ...great update.
Date: 11/19/10 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMFAO! Oh Brian. :) I think Nick is just faking. He thinks AJ will let it go, so he has a better chance to go and hump Rhoda. But AJ is smarter than that. I wonder what crazy situation they'll get into next!
Author's Response: Nick fake? Would Carter ever fake anything? :)
