Date: 01/05/11 03:34 am Title: Chapter 18
i wanted to cry. i really hope nick wakes up with the short time he has left.
Date: 01/05/11 03:29 am Title: Chapter 18
oh, my gosh... i swear, i almost cried.. i think i've said it before but u write Nick so well... it physically hurts to realize how real Nick seems in ur story... ure incredible!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! - Jen
Date: 01/05/11 03:27 am Title: Chapter 18
aww...nick came up on camera thats so sweet ( thats a ghost hunters reference in fanfiction if i've ever heard one!!)
great chapter!!!
Author's Response: Man, I LOVE Ghosthunters. Steve is REALLY cute, lol
Date: 01/05/11 03:25 am Title: Chapter 18
Aw Kevin took him to swim with the sharks. Lol at Nick wanting to pet them! Very sweet chapter! Loving it
Author's Response: Nick's a sucker for pointy teeth I guess. :)
Date: 01/05/11 01:01 am Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that Kristin and Becky believe him! The most people helping, better! Excellent chapter :)
Date: 01/05/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 17
KISS BECKY!!!! HOLY FUCK DO I HAFTA SPELL IT OUT SOME MORE!?!?!?!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: What did you say? I don't think I heard you. Haha - Jen
Date: 01/04/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 17
YAY!!! now becky knows....
so what is she doing just standing there...what if she is THE ONE???
Author's Response: She better get a'kissing, right?! - Jen
Date: 01/04/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
eeek yeah i knew it was nurse becky all along! i loved this chapter the hand holding up with them was really sweet!
Date: 01/04/11 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that Kristin believes him.
Date: 01/04/11 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
There ya go, Kev! Piece it together! Tell Becky so she'll kiss him!
Date: 01/04/11 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 17
I KNEW IT! Nurse busty is his love. Sad about Lauren but if Nick loves busty woman (see no matter what story he is in he loves boobs) then all she has to do is kiss him. This was good.
Marguerite
Author's Response: LoL Nick and Boobs go together like Peanut Butter and Jelly! - Jen
Date: 01/04/11 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg I freaking love this story,I am glad Nurse Betty believed him and Kris too. I hope he can wake up,18 hours is not alot of time. Keep up the great work,can't wait for more.
Author's Response: 18 hours ISN'T a lot of time. The race is on. At least Kevin doesn't have to worry about looking crazy around Becky and Kris now. :)
Date: 01/04/11 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow wow wow! I knew Becky would believe him! I hope they can do something soon, 18 hours is cutting it close...
Author's Response: The clock is ticking...will it be too late? Oh, wouldn't you all hate us if we did that. haha - Jen
Date: 01/04/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
I knew Lauren wasn't going to be the one but it kind of made me sad when it didn't happen. I think Kevin is doing the right thing telling nurse Becky, somehow I see her as the key to waking Nick...not sure why. Awesome chapter!
Date: 01/04/11 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aw I thought Lauren might be the one. But now I'm thinking Becky could be. However if Bob does pull the plug I will step into a virtual world and kick his ass. then I will strangle him & Jane the bitch. Keep up the awesome work.
MArguerite
