Date: 05/13/11 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 22
Nick just doesn't want Brian to have what is currently his. He's just being a selfish jackass, not caring who the fuck he ends up hurting in the damned process. Shame on you Carter!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. I expect to see LOTS of updates when I get back from my weekend away-lol.
Author's Response: LoL Carter's greedy...he wants it all (wait, shouldn't that be AJ? - oh, that's HAVE it all) As for your P.S. - yes, yes, you probably WILL have lots of updates to get back to! Enjoy your weekend. :) ~ Jen ~
Date: 05/13/11 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 22
I don't care if she cries. I still don't like Lauren. Lol!
Date: 05/13/11 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm calling SO much BS on Nick right now. The way he said those things to Lauren made it sound like he's trying to convince himself that he loves Heather and all that. Like that he says he loves Heather enough to marry her, then it's true, but I don't think it is. I still hate that Nick is keeping Heather in the dark about Brian's true feelings for her, I can't wait for her to find out about the real letter.
Author's Response: Y'know I read this story for my one English class this semester where this mom kept this love letter away from her daughter. And what happened? Daughter found out, went psycho, killed her mom, and strapped her to the rocking chair by her skull. You've got to love required college reading!
Not that Heather or Brian would do that...or would they? :) - Jen
Date: 05/13/11 03:32 am Title: Chapter 21
Nick is a huge selfish asshole. I can't wait to shove my pointy sticks up his rear. Just you wait. And watch, Lauren will SO be back to being his fuck-buddy a.s.a.p. I just know it. How DARE you keep Heather from finding true happiness with Brian! I can't stand you right now, CArter, NO matter how hot you are!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 05/13/11 03:29 am Title: Chapter 21
awww, poor Brian! I hope she wakes up before it's too late. Great Chapter!
Date: 05/13/11 02:03 am Title: Chapter 21
Nick has some major sucking up to do! I hope he can really quit seeing Lauren...but I'm not banking on it!
Author's Response: You don't give Nicky credit! (but then again...does he deserve credit?) - Jen
Date: 05/13/11 02:00 am Title: Chapter 20
Way to play that game Nick! And I can totally seeing Nick and Donnie going for the hottie of NKOTBSB competition!
Author's Response: Donnie doesn't stand a chance. Nick's got this one (hands down)
Date: 05/13/11 01:54 am Title: Chapter 19
lol...now that is a total Donnie remark! Poor Heather, what is she gonna do??
Date: 05/13/11 01:51 am Title: Chapter 18
Nick needs to figure out what the hell he wants and quit leading both of these girls on!!!
Date: 05/12/11 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 21
Sigh...Heather just needs to get with Brian already. No more funny business. Nick's an asshole, Brian's awesome, the end.
Date: 05/12/11 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 20
OMFG, are you guys serious? Really? You've made Brian and Heather really stupid and gullible, I'm actually really irritated at that. I know the story's far from over, but COME ON. Ugh. I'm still gonna keep reading. lol
Author's Response: We only think they're stupid and gullible because we know EVERYTHING that's going on. If you seperated each of these three people's stories and only read it from their POV I think you could see SOME vulnerability, yeah, but then again...do you KNOW how many times I've done things and looked back and realized (in the words of the immortal Homer Simpson) DOH?!
Date: 05/12/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 20
FUCK YOU CARTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M COMING AFTER YOU WITH MY POINTY STICKS!!!! YOU DESERVE TO HAVE THEM RAMMED UP YOUR NO-GOOD SORRY ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Keep 'em a-coming!
Date: 05/12/11 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 20
Lordy, lordy, lordy...Nick seems to be getting himself into a tangled mess! I bet it wil come back and bite him in the butt! For some reason, I have a feeling Lauren is not out of the picture yet.
I feel so terrible for Brian. It is depressing to read about him being heartbroken! Please write more soon. (:
Author's Response: LoL well his butt-bite wound will match the stitches in front, won't they? :) - Jen
Date: 05/12/11 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
Nicks a douche bag. What the fuck man? He doesn't want to lose Heather just because he saw he slept with her first?! Ugh. I know this fan fic but i cuss at his picture on my ipad because of this story! Lmao
Date: 05/12/11 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 20
Nick is such a sneaky shit. Even though he's hot, he's completely irritating me. Great story, can't wait for more!
