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Reviewer: Joanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/11 03:56 am Title: Chapter 18

OMG. That was such a hot chapter. Holy shit, Donnie's so sexy. And it's true, you get turned on with the snap of a finger just by looking @ him. Haha. Oh man, this was a good chapter. There's like nothing else to say. Can't wait for an update!!

Author's Response:

thanks so much.  More coming soon!!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/11 03:29 am Title: Chapter 18

They can't stay away from each other. I don't blame her, lol. They are a hot couple. Awesome as always.

Author's Response:

thanks!!  hot does wonders for the soul!!  :D

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/11 02:54 am Title: Chapter 18

hot chapter cant wait for more amazing



Author's Response:

thanks.  More coming tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Joanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 17

Uh oh, Donnie's definitely jealous! They are so cute it is sick. But I love it! Can't wait to see how Cyn and Nick's story unfolds. I love how much Dez appreciates Donnie and what he does. I'm sure it's one of the best things for him, to have someone as humble as Dez. Can't wait for more! I hope you put in some Nick flirting. I need both my fixes, haha!

Author's Response:

oh you'll get your fixes. BELIEVE ME!  :D

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 17

Okay my favorite line in this chapter:

She says,"Yeah, yeah, fine, whatever, rub it in that you've got a hot man in your bed while I've got a hot vibrator."

Some of the things that you come up with are hilarious!

Can't wait for more, as always!



Author's Response:

I like that line too.  LOL 

Reviewer: Just_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 17

I love how in love they are!  I also love Cynthia's banter with both of them, it keeps things interesting.



Author's Response:

Cynthia does make life fun.  Let's see what happens with Kaos in the picture.  ;) 

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 17

omg i loved it amazing chapter cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

thank you so much.  More tonight!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 03:26 am Title: Chapter 17

Donnie and Dez are so perfect for each other. I hope things work out for Cynthia. She needs a good man. I love that Dez gets along with the BSB, too.

Author's Response:

Dez loves Donnie more than anything.  I think she'd get along with her worst enemy to make him happy.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sarahg91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 16

It's fun to see BSB in the story! But I hope everything stays okay with Dez and the baby. They deserve to be happy. And I know I said I liked Cynthia and AJ, but I'm not opposed to some Cynthia and Nick action either LOL. Great work.

Author's Response:

oh, Cynthia would be good with either.  But surprises are coming. :)

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 11:19 am Title: Chapter 16

Ooooh Donnie's getting jealous!! Love them teasing Destiny!

I wanna know whats bothing Donnie!! MORE haha



Author's Response:

Donnie's got issues...what issues, I'll never tell.  More coming tonight!

Reviewer: Joanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 03:51 am Title: Chapter 16

Ahh, man, the whole Nick conversation is going to get to her head! I hope she doesn't start doubting anything. And I can't wait to see what Donnie has to talk to her about! Oh and I love Cyn's character!

Author's Response:

:)  More tomorrow.  Stay tuned.  :D  and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Joanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 03:44 am Title: Chapter 15

Ohhh shit. Nick's broken up. Now I see how this goes. This was a good chapter, I was gone for a day and you have two updates, lol. Oh man, I can't wait to see what happens between Nick and Cyn and Dez. I have a feeling he might get w/Cyn to be closer to Dez...? Nick and Donnie are my faves, this is fueling my obsession with both! Gonna go read the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed it.  More coming tomorrow!! :) 

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 02:46 am Title: Chapter 16

It seems like Donnie is jumping to conclusions about Nick's friendliness and is a tad bit jealous. I'm sure their convesatio will be interesting. Love it, Love it, Love it.

Author's Response:

thanks so much.  apparently Mr. Carter has a rep for being naughty!  ;)

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 02:34 am Title: Chapter 16

Uh oh...trouble in paradise already!  Donnie is jealous that Destiny was talking to Nick....oh Donnie, jealousy gets you nowhere!



Author's Response:

gets you no where fast.  esp. with a hormonal pregnant woman!  LMAO

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 02:33 am Title: Chapter 16

ooooo donnie doesnt like her talking to nick. amazing job. i loved it cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

thanks!  jealousy is in the air!