Date: 08/04/11 12:03 am Title: Chapter 11
Why do I have to feeling that before they are rescued their are going to be a few more deaths.
Author's Response:
Hmm, there might be! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 08/03/11 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh man.... Jordan is gonna kick the bucket soon from his head wound... or perhaps something more along the line of what Rose and Julie would do ;) Can't wait to see what more awaits them.
Author's Response:
Oh I have plans for them all *laughs evilly* Thanks for reading Lore
Date: 07/31/11 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
They must be exhausted but if it were me, I wouldn't get much sleep in the jungle.
I have a feeling that those search parties won't be there as quick as they think....could take some while ;)
Author's Response:
Don't think I'd be able to sleep in the jungle either, I hardly slept in a tent in a field, lol. The search parties won't find them yet, that wouldn't be much fun :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/11 02:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Poor Jordan, he pretty much has no will to go on. Which I can't blame him. He just lost everyone, though he lucky to be alive. Hopefully nothing gets them while they're sleeping! I was happy to see this updated :)
Author's Response:
I might let them have a night of peace, lol. Thanks for reading Rose :)
Date: 07/31/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 10
Yay, I was just wondering when you were going to update this again, but then I remembered you've been gone camping. Hopefully you got some inspiration while you were sleeping outside! LOL I hadn't thought much about the phone situation until now, but that was really smart of you to put them on a reality show, where they wouldn't be allowed phones. I wonder if they'll get attacked by any jungle critters at some point; they've sure been worrying about it enough. Maybe Jordan will get eaten by a leopard! *crosses fingers* LOL I'm still loving this story; hope the updates keep coming! :)
Author's Response:
Sleeping outdoors and hearing night creatures did give me a few ideas. Aww poor Jordan, I'm sure that head injury is going to give him a bit of trouble along the way, maybe getting eaten by a leopard would be too cruel, lol, but I have plenty of gore planned for them soon :) Thanks for reading Julie.
Date: 07/30/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
*cringes* Yes the bugs and snakes and other things. Yikes.
Sorry Nick, I don't think help is coming yet.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'd be crying like a baby if any of those jungle critters crawled over me in my sleep *shudders*
Date: 07/30/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Did you use your camping adventure as inspiration for this chapter, Steph? Great job! I like how everyone seems to be stepping up to help out. The visual of Brian cutting down logs into firewood made me smile and poor Howie! He must be in so much pain! Thanks for the update! :O)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Mare. The noises at night part was something I heard while camping, something ran over the top of my tent and I was laying there scared, lol. I quite like the image of Brian chopping logs too.
Date: 07/30/11 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter. I would be scared sleeping in the jungle. I hope they get rescued but I'm sure it will be a while before it happens.
Author's Response:
I was scared enough sleeping in a tent for 2 nights with the night time noises, so there is no way I'd sleep in the jungle, lol. Thanks for reading Rachel :)
Date: 07/21/11 05:02 am Title: Chapter 9
:( Not sure if this is the best idea! But at the same time, they will definitely be forced to deal with the animals attracted to the corpses if they don't. Plus, this story isn't nearly as fun if they don't lol. Hopefully the note survives till the plane is found!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Once again, I love this story. I'm excited to see where it leads with our Boys.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Rose. I couldn't let them see their friends being eaten by animals, lol.
Date: 07/21/11 01:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Ooh, I dunno if that's a smart decision, leaving the plane, but it wouldn't be nearly as interesting if they didn't, so you go, Backstreet Boys! At least they left a note, in case anyone finds the plane, which could take awhile in the middle of the jungle. I can't wait to see what dangers they encounter next! Loving all the updates on this, Steph; hope you keep them coming! :)
Author's Response:
No, staying by the plane would be a bit boring. Not sure the note will survive, but they had to do something like that. Thanks for reading Julie!
Date: 07/20/11 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter, Steph. You don't need action in every chapter. This was a nice filler one and gave us all a chance to take a breath and say goodbye to the dead people. Poor Jordan, losing his entire band has to be hard. And I love how Nick with machete in hand goes to find something to help Howie walk. I have to admit the visual of that is pretty nice! lmao keep up the great work and stay on this updating trend!!
Author's Response:
I had a lovely image of Nick bare-chested, sweaty and looking sexy with that machete, lol. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/20/11 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so great! Is so different from the others stories I've ever read! Hopefuly they find them soon...
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it so far, thanks for reading.
Date: 07/20/11 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
if the plane crash wasn't enough, now the adventure begins!
Author's Response:
I know, poor guys! Thanks for reading Lore :)
Date: 07/20/11 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
I hope that they get found, but I'm sure you have a lot planned before that happens. I love this story.
Author's Response:
Plenty more planned :) Thanks for reading Rachel!
Date: 07/19/11 07:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Okay I love this chapter. I love the descriptions of the bodies of Jon, Joey, and Danny! It's vivid and horrific and realistic. Just the way it should be. I adored the bit about their insides hanging out and blood on the floor all around them. And Eduardo being all over the place in pieces? EPIC!
At least they tried to cover up Donnie. That was pretty sweet. And I actually feel bad for Jordan, he's probably got a concussion, and wakes up to find he's the only surviving NK. That can't be easy.
Once again, I am loving this story!
Author's Response:
I did write it with more detail originally but edited it because I wondered if I'd got a bit too much gore in it, lol. There will be more unpleasantness lined up for them though *evil laugh*
I know, I do feel sorry for Jordan. He's lost his brother and the rest of the band in one go. That must be awful :(
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
