Date: 07/19/11 07:56 am Title: Chapter 8
Ooh, jungle animals; I didn't even think of that, but that's a good point! I bet the predators will be attracted to the smell of blood... bwahaha!!! I loved your description of the New Kids impaled on stuff with their insides hanging out... hehe. I appreciate the gore. This is so different from anything I've seen you write; you've wowed me! Keep up the awesome work; I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Julie, glad you are enjoying it so far. This is very different to what I usually write, although I did a bit of horror in the story Games. I must admit that I like writing this kind of thing, it's fun torturing the characters for a change.
Date: 07/19/11 07:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Poor Howie! AJ and Nick playing doctor is a very scary thought. Almost scarier than them being lost in the middle of the jungle where no one can find them lmao. I'd be freaking out if I was Nick too. I forgot to say this last chapter but I love that you injured Howie! No one ever injures forgotten Howie :(.
Author's Response:
Poor Howie, he usually is neglected in stories so I thought I'd make him stand out and give him an injury, lol.
Thanks for reading Rose.
Date: 07/19/11 05:07 am Title: Chapter 8
oh now I feel a bit sad for Jordan :(
Smart thinking to get out of the clothes.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I thought they should get out of them so they don't attract unwanted guests. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/18/11 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow! That would have to be so hard. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
It would be terrible wouldn't it. Thanks for reading Rachel :)
Date: 07/18/11 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yuck! I am not a fan of the gory scenes, but I guess that's why I tend to stick to fluffy romances LOL I guess it's a good sign if you can gross me out! And yes Jordan and Jonathan are brothers. I used to be a New Kids fan back in the day when I was like 6 LOL
Author's Response:
My friend was a huge fan of them back in the day and said I had to pick a favourite, so even though I didn't like them, I chose Jonathan, lol. Sorry if I grossed you out with the gore, but glad it came across OK. After reading this it's probably hard to believe that I like fluffy romance too. Thanks for reading Mel :)
Date: 07/18/11 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yikes, glad I finished my lunch before reading this chapter lol I had no idea Jordan had a brother in the New Kids. I guess I never made the connection that 2 of them shared the same last name. Again great job with the descriptions and just thinking about wild animals sniffing out blood is a gruesome thought. I think you found your calling because you rock at the horror/gore scenes Steph! LOL Excellent job!
Author's Response:
I hope they are brothers or I'll look stupid, lol, I don't know much about any of them to be honest! It was a bit gory, this is toned down a bit to what I originally wrote. I must admit to liking writing horror, such a big step away from my romances! Thanks for reading and reviewing Mare :)
Date: 07/17/11 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
Glad they were able to get Howie. I can't wait to see what the next obstacle they will have to face.
Author's Response:
There will be more obstacles along the way :) Thanks for reading Rachel
Date: 07/17/11 05:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, Howie... he is in for so much suffering. I am imagining the plane had a skull and crossbones painted on the wing... they should know better! At least the critters will be eating well on the... well, most of the NKOTB. Gah. Grim, girl. And I am loving it. More! (Oh, and need I mention, Kevin would have been so perfect in this story! Ah, well.)
Author's Response:
Kevin would've been perfect for this, I was even thinking of setting it back then, but reality TV wasn't so big then was it. Damn Kevin for leaving, lol. Poor NK's, lol. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/16/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
Go Nick and AJ! I am so glad that someone thought to make a tourniquet out of a t-shirt, but something tells me that How ie is not out of the woods (err jungle) quite yet. He still needs medical attention fast!
Author's Response:
I know, poor Howie, he really needs a hospital or even just a proper medical kit and a doctor, but it's not going to happen...yet! Thanks for reading Mel :)
Date: 07/16/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter Stpeh! I love how Nick has stepped up to be the hero. We're so used to seeing him be the one that always needs the rescuing so it was a refreshing change. You did a great job with the descriptions and all of Nick's internal thoughts as well as Howie being nice and brave and saying do what you have to do. I can see him saying something like that. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I always read about him being the one who needs help so thought I'd do something different. He might not always make sensible decisions though, lol. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/16/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh god, Nick and AJ playing doctor to Howie was truly terrifying! I'm glad they managed to get him out of the plan and that he didn't bleed out when they pulled out the rod. Now they're lost in the jungle... excellent! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
I thought it would be too cruel to kill Howie off, lol. Lost in the jungle though, I don't fancy that much! Thanks for reading Julie :)
Date: 07/16/11 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh no poor Howie. I hope he manages to make it through the story and get the help he needs.
Author's Response:
I hope so too, but we'll see! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/16/11 05:56 am Title: Chapter 6
kill them NKOTB!!!!! yes yes!!! lol. I love it. I can't wait to find out what could go wrong next.
Author's Response:
Aww poor NK's, lol. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/16/11 05:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Love it. I would never do that. heights and falling from them, not anything I'd EVER do. :) I know I said this but the flow is really nice.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't do it either, not for anything!
Date: 07/16/11 05:46 am Title: Chapter 2
I like how this is written from Nick's perspective. You have an easy flow in this style.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad it seems to be flowing OK and that you're enjoying it.
