Date: 04/23/12 03:56 am Title: Chapter 9
How much longer until Sarah and Nick break up? I can't see them staying together.
Author's Response: It won't be long. Things with them haven't been good lately.
Date: 04/23/12 03:53 am Title: Chapter 8
Hmmm did things change between Nick and Sarah when Eden came in the picture? I believe so
Author's Response: I'm sure things changed between Nick and Sarah. I just don't think Nick realized it.
Date: 04/23/12 03:49 am Title: Chapter 7
I liked the end convo between Eden and Nick. Nice part to take seriously but not too much
Author's Response: Nick and Eden have some good conversations. They have a good friendship.
Date: 04/23/12 03:45 am Title: Chapter 6
Eden is a complete brat and a tease. not sure if I like her or not, curious to see how this plays out though
Author's Response: In that chapter she is. Eden really just wants Nick to notice that she's not a little girl. She may have taken it a little to far....lol
Date: 04/23/12 03:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Blegh Nick was being beyond frusting. Good job with the chapter
Author's Response: He was wasn't he. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/23/12 03:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice chapter, it made me laugh and I like how wise nick is;)
Author's Response: It's shocking to see Nick be the wise and mature one....lol.
Date: 04/23/12 03:35 am Title: Chapter 3
I noticed a couple of tiny mistakes, one at the end of the chapter but I liked it over all good job.
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes even when I edit a mistake or two pop up. I will go back and fix those.
Date: 04/23/12 03:32 am Title: Chapter 2
AJ and his wife are annoying. Talk about sufforcating the poor girl! Sheesh
Author's Response: At this point AJ and Leah are annoying. Eden just wants to grow up, poor girl.
Date: 04/23/12 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Good first chapter, liked how the story started. Is Kevin the dad? Have to read on to find out
Author's Response: Thanks. Kevin isn't that dad.
Date: 04/23/12 03:24 am Title: Chapter 90
ooohh WTH that fucking bitch!!! can't wait to see what Eden is gonna do?
Author's Response: Leah is a nasty person. I can't believe she would do that to AJ. Eden is up to something that's for sure. Thanks for reading.
Date: 04/22/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 90
Oooooo it is getting very interesting. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: It certainly is. Thanks for reading!
Date: 04/22/12 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 90
I have a really bad feeling about what is coming next,I hope nothing bad happens to eden or the baby and I also hope that whatever she has in her head to nail Leah doesn't backfire on her and cause more harm than good.
Anyway,Great chapter!Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I hope nothing happens either. I think that is what Nick is worried about. Thanks for reading.
Date: 04/20/12 03:15 am Title: Chapter 89
Hehe so hot.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/20/12 03:10 am Title: Chapter 89
Nick and Eden are so good together.
God I hope they get something on Leah! I'd hate for her to get those children. Even married, she used them as leverage against AJ. I can only imagine what she's got up her sleeve now.
Author's Response: I love Nick and Eden together. Karma is a bitch....Leah better watch out. She's due for her turn.
Date: 04/20/12 03:00 am Title: Chapter 89
The more I hear about Leah,The more I hate her.She is such a hypocrit to be mad about Lila and A.J. when she can't keep her pants on.Atleast A.J. and Lila seem to have developed a relationship,I am positive that isnt the case with Leah and the roadies.I really hope that A.J. gets custody of the kids because Leah doesn't deserve them.
And on a brighter note,I love how Eden told Nick not to move from his pose on the bed when she went to call Lila and she comes back and he is naked LOL.
I could so see him doing that!Anyway, Great Chapter!Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I don't anyone likes Leah. She is a manipulative witch and I hope she doesn't get custody. I think AJ and Lila really like each other. Yes, Nick was adorably hot when he did that. I love him and Eden together.