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Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 03:53 am Title: Chapter 80

AJ's really a good guy, despite his temper and his cheating... I just feel bad that he's married to Leah. I think that he'll definitely come around and accept Nick and the baby over time, just like Eden said... I can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: AJ's is a good guy even though he's not perfect. Things with Leah are hard right now. In time, I see him accepting Nick and Eden being together. Plus I think he's going to be a great granddaddy.

Reviewer: CelestriaStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/12 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1

So sorry I haven't reviewed in so long!  I have been reading and I'm loving it!  Is it bad to say I kind of like AJ and Lila together!?  Maybe because I'm hating on Leah so much!  Still loving Eden and Nick too :) hope you keep them happy!  Please update soon!



Author's Response: I totally understand. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. There's something between AJ and Lila that makes them good for each other. I don't think anyone likes Leah, including herself. I hope Nick and Eden stay happy. They are good together.

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/12 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 79

Oh My God!Leah is such a gianormous bitch!I hope things will be ok but if Eden catches A.J. with Lila,I have a bad feeling that things are gonna real ugly real fast for awhole lot of people.Good job!Great Chapter!

Author's Response: Leah is my most hated character....lol. I don't think one person likes her. I'm sure there is a lot of drama brewing for the McLean family. None of them are perfect and they are making a lot of choices that may lead them to some trouble.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/12 11:27 am Title: Chapter 79

Why do I get the feeling she's gonna find Daddy with Lila? I'm just glad Eden finally told Leah to bite it.:)

Author's Response: Hmmm....Eden may or may not find AJ with Lila. I can't tell....lol. It made me happy that she stood up to Leah!

Reviewer: bsbgurl_1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/12 02:09 am Title: Chapter 79

great update. i bet when nick goes to talk to lila about announcing the pregnancy that he find her and aj together. but maybe im wrong.

Author's Response: Hmmm...who knows...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/12 01:54 am Title: Chapter 79

Famous last words or innocent optimism? I feel like only time will tell. I know I've said it a million times, but Leah is such a bitch and Eden doesn't deserve to be treated that way. I just hope that Eden can stay sane enough to keep her and the baby safe. I'm hoping that Nick continues to insist on certain precautions, too. Even though Eden might find it annoying and overprotective, I feel like he's just already showing what a great dad and provider he's going to be. :) I can't wait for more, as always. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, Leah is a bitch...lol. It has to be hard on Eden dealing with Leah as a mother. Nick's going to make a great daddy and future husband for Eden. I think he would go to the end of the Earth to protect Eden and his baby.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/12 01:29 am Title: Chapter 79

So happy she told her mom off. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: Way to go Eden. It's about time she told her mom.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/12 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 78

Nice move AJ! Good example youre setting there!

Author's Response: Yep, he's not the best example out there. Maybe it will be a one time thing or not. No matter what I'm sure it's not going to end well.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/12 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 78

oooooooo i smell more drama on the way. cant wait for more amazing job.



Author's Response: This tour is going to be full of drama! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/12 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 78

Wow!I can't believe he actually went through with it,I mean I don't blame him for being angry and hurt but to actually go and cheat on his wife...This is not gonna end well for him because Leah is gonna lose her mind when/if she finds out about it.And is it just me or Is eden kind of picking up on what is going on between Lila and A.J.?That could be almost as bad as Leah finding out.Well,however this comes out it's not gonna be good.Anyway,Great chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah, he did it. I think AJ feels like he can escape from everything that is going on in his life when he's with Lila. I'm sure it will get ugly when Leah finds out. It's going to be a rough tour. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/12 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 78

Wow!! I never expected AJ to go through with that! I don't blame him considering how things are going in his life, but that's not making it any easier. I can't imagine how Leah is going to react to this news. To be honest, I imagine that she's going to end up fighting fire with fire and cheating on AJ... The question is... With whom? I'm anxious to see what happens next. I just hope that throughout all of this mess, Nick and Eden's true love can make it! Great chapter. Update soon!! :)

Author's Response: I think AJ had a moment of weakness. Things with Leah have been rough. I think he's looking for someone to give him so love and attention. No doubt Leah will be pissed when she finds out. I'm sure she'll seek revenge. I think Nick and Eden's love is strong enough to handle whatever comes their way. Not that it will be wasy for them, because I'm sure they will have lots of challenges to deal with. Together I think they can weather any storm. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 77

Bad AJ! I know Leah's a bitch but really? As for Nick, I'm glad hes got somebody on his side.

Author's Response: AJ's having a rough time at the moment. His world is crashing down on him. I'm glad Nick has Brian to support him and Eden.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 07:34 am Title: Chapter 77

Oh wow... I was kind of expecting it, but I feel like AJ's the "good guy" in his marriage and even if Leah is a terrible person, he's not going to fuck up his family like that... But I don't know! lol. Don't make us wait too long for another chapter! I'm still hooked on this... :)

Author's Response: AJ's so hurt at the moment. Nothing seems to be going right in his life.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 06:40 am Title: Chapter 77

Oooooo it's getting very interesting.  Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: Yes, more drama is on it's way.

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 05:22 am Title: Chapter 77

I really hope that nothing bad happens to Eden or the baby,I think it would kill Nick and I also think that it would kill A.J. because no matter how upset he is with the situation,I don't think he wants bad things to happen to her.
And This is what I meant when I said I hope A.J. doesnt do something he is gonna regret later.I get that he is upset but trashing the makeup room and hooking up with Lila is probably not the best way to handle things,I am not a fan of Leah and I do feel like whatever she gets she brought on herself but I think it would be a huge mistake for A.J. to cheat on her.Great Chapter!Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I think if anything happened to Eden or the baby it would devistate Nick and AJ. Yeah, AJ probably isn't making the best choice right now. He's hurt and mad.