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Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/11 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 37

They're not making much progress....and Leah is still a bi-atch.

Author's Response: Yes, the parents don't want to see what is really there. Hopefully they will come around. Leah needs to get over herself.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/11 06:50 am Title: Chapter 37

Omg I so hate her mom such a bitch. Can't wait for more amazing job. 



Author's Response: Leah is not well liked. She really is being a bitch to Nick. Thanks!

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 37

Oh man! Leah is SUCH a huge bitch! Great chapter, though! I seriously cannot wait to read more... I feel like Nick and Eden are more mature and loving than AJ and Leah could ever be. Weird how that works! Great work!!

Author's Response: Yes, Eden and Nick definitely seem more mature. I think AJ and Leah are letting their emotions get the best of them.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/11 06:28 am Title: Chapter 37

Lord! I hated Leah before but she is a royal bitch. Definitely jealous no matter how much she denies it. As for Eden finding out, yikes!

Author's Response: It's not going to be pretty when Eden finds out. LOL!

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 09:12 am Title: Chapter 36

Yay! Here comes the father and daughter talk... Why do I have a feeling that AJ would understand and Leah won't? I thought I understood Leah on her own story but I guess not... she's a bitch! LOL

Author's Response: I think AJ is a little more easy going compared to Leah. She's having a hard time dealing with Eden growing up. Plus I think that fact that Leah's been with Nick makes her angrier than if it were someone else.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 06:13 am Title: Chapter 36

I hope that her dad will talk to her to better understand what she's feeling and start to believe that their love is real and not just some sick game Nick is playing. I'm loving this! :) Update soon!

Author's Response: I hope the AJ will understand or at least attempt to understand. Nick would never intentionally hurt the people he cares about. I'm glad you are loving it.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 36

Ooooo can't wait to see how the talk goes. Loved it. 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sure it will be an interesting talk.

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 02:35 am Title: Chapter 36

uhoh..here comes the part where some one spills the beans about nick an leah..oh dear jesus..hmm i agree with aj i think leah is jealous..she really is a bitch i dont care for her. i understand being angry with your daughter but truly not caring about their happiness. and i realize like nick said nt everything gets solved as quickly as tv shows but i think aj is already regretting the way he stormed theplace..i mean yes right now he is very much pissed off but i think deep down he knew how they felt and he just wants Eden to always be his little girl and never be heart and it will change things for them they are no longer friends they are now like inlaw..lol but i think leah is upset for a whole different reason all together..personally i dont see what aj brian or nick ever saw in her...and nick was stupid for vbeing withher even more stupid for not mentioning it to eden ...great chapter i so hope and wish for a happy ending ..loved it great as always update soon!



Author's Response: Leah has always been this way. I don't think she will change. AJ is the only one who seems to get her, but right now he's not even liking her. Brian was just lonely and looking for love anywhere he could get it. Nick only wanted her in his bed....lol. I think AJ realizes that they should have handled things different. I don't know if the talk will change his mind or not. Nick and Eden are strong.. They will make it through.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 01:34 am Title: Chapter 36

I really think AJ wants to understand their relationship but being as it's his little girl, he can't. I hope he and Eden work it out.

Author's Response: AJ is in a tough place. Eden is his little girl and Nick's one of his best friends. He just can't get past that. I hope the talk helps, too.

Reviewer: bsbgurl_1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 35

i know i already reviewed but i wonder how eden will find out about nick and leah being together and what eden's reaction will be .

Author's Response: Eden finding about Nick and her mom will happen soon. I don't want to give details, but it's very shocking.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 35

I am not liking Leah right now. Great chapter!



Author's Response: Leah isn't very likable at the moment. She's not very understanding and doesn't want to listen.

Reviewer: freezenik001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/11 04:08 am Title: Chapter 35

Leah could be such a bitch. She needs to understand that her daughter is a grown woman. She could make the decisions herself. I hope Leah get a rude awakening.



Author's Response: Leah is a bitch....lol. I agree she needs to ease up a little bit on Eden.

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/11 04:08 am Title: Chapter 35

Oh wow. Intense! I knew it was going to be bad when the doorbell rang interrupting them. I can only hope that Nick and Eden stay strong throughout this difficult time with her parents and stick up for their love. Great chapter! :)

Author's Response: It can never be good when they doorbell rings early in the morning and your loving on your significant other. I think Nick and Eden will stay strong, but I'm sure they will have some other issuses to deal with.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/11 12:37 am Title: Chapter 35

Omg her mom is such a bitch. So can't wait to see what else is going to happen now. 



Author's Response: Leah is the poster girl for bitch....lol

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/11 12:22 am Title: Chapter 35

holy fuck..i reallly think aj overreacted but damn i cant stand leah..fuck..she just god ice queen couldnt have come up with something better..they love each other who are those to crazy folks to decide whats right or wrong look how fucked up there shit it...damn im beginning to think leah is jealous because nick didnt pick her the way she is acting...



Author's Response: Yes, AJ did overreact, but I guess that would happen if you found out your best friend was having sex with your daughter. Hopefully AJ will calm down. Leah is a piece of work. Leah has no right to judge. She broke Brian's heart to be with AJ. Hmmm....Leah and jealousy....could always be a possibility.