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Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 04:35 am Title: Chapter 23

yay..i love it..such a great chapter..they are so in love and i want them to be happy forever..i want everyone to know and just get over it an accept that they are in love that age is only a friggin number and that should be it..but when people find out its going to complicate things for them because people are ignorant.. i just hope they are strong enough as a couple by that point to withstand any negativity that comes there way..great chapter cant wait for more your awesome!



Author's Response: I agree age is only a number. I'm sure mom and dad aren't going to be thrilled. I think Nick and Eden's relationship will be tested a bit, but if their love is strong they will make it through.

Reviewer: Just_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

So loving, they are such a perfect fit.  I can't help but worry about when the world crashes in on them.



Author's Response: They are perfect for each other, despite the age difference. I'm sure their relationship will be tested, but hopefully the stand strong together.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 23

Smoking hot as usual. I really hope these two make it. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I hope they make it, too. I think they are going to become a strong couple when it's all said and done.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 05:12 am Title: Chapter 23

I read this at work and couldn't review!  DAMN WOMAN I wanna feed him cheesecake!  LOL  Great job!



Author's Response: Me, too. Any dessert would be fun with him...lol.

Reviewer: freezenik001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 03:27 am Title: Chapter 23

Oooh that was hot great story.



Author's Response: Thanks. I love the chemistry they have.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 03:08 am Title: Chapter 23

Omg so hot.  Waiting for more.  Loved it



Author's Response: It was very hot. :-)

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 02:34 am Title: Chapter 23

Absolutely beautiful. Don't see Nick this way often enough. Nice job!

Author's Response: I wanted them to have a special moment.

Author's Response: I wanted them to have a special moment.

Reviewer: Eugenie1505 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 02:31 am Title: Chapter 23

That was lovingly sexy and I didn't read anything about a condom here in this chapter. Uh oh the living room... I truly hope no one comes walking in or sees them through a window or something..

Author's Response: They deserved a special night. Yes, I hope the neighbors don't see. They would be shocked.

Reviewer: Eugenie1505 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 22

Why do I have this feeling since reading the last three chapters that Eden is going to get pregnant at this special love making night, just as their relationship has reached a whole new level?

Author's Response: Hmmm....that is an interesting idea, but I'm not telling what is going to happen....lol. I'm being evil...hee hee. You'll have to wait and see what I have planned. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 22

Why was I waiting for AJ to interrupt that very sexy and hot moment? lol good chapter, Rachel! makes me want to be Eden for a night.... :)

Author's Response: I thought I would give Nick and Eden withouth AJ interrupting them. They deserve it. I think we all want to be Eden for one night. I know I do...lol.

Reviewer: Simple Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 04:40 am Title: Chapter 22

The emotions. That kiss........wow!

Author's Response: Yes, they really truly love each other. To be kiss that way....I'm jealous of my characters, lol.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 01:40 am Title: Chapter 22

I would have had DINNER in bed, but that's just me!!  LOVE IT!!! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response: I would have skipped dinner and devoured him, over and over and over again.

Reviewer: Just_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 12:41 am Title: Chapter 22

They are so good together!  They're also pretty sexy!



Author's Response: Nick and Eden have a special chemistry. Yes, they are definitely sexy. There's more sexiness coming soon.

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 12:34 am Title: Chapter 22

Awesome!!! Oh man I love it theyr so great together

Author's Response: Thanks. They do have a special relationship.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh that was a nice surprise. They should enjoy it because I have a feeling the shit will fly soon. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Yes, it was time for some romance and take their relationship to a new level. Yes, the drama is going to start very soon.