Date: 10/30/11 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 20
I would rip Leah a new asshole for snooping. She has no right to, If Eden wants her to know about her life she will tell her. Otherwise but out. Excellent work as always. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You're right. Leah had no right to be snooping around Nick's house. She's just going to put a bigger distance between her and Eden.
Date: 10/28/11 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh, Alexander James, your comments made me laugh so hard. It will all back fire to you when you found out who this special woman who sounds fucking amazing on bed is. LOL
Author's Response: Yes, AJ comments were funny. He will regret what he said when he realizes he was talking about his daughter. LOL
Date: 10/28/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 19
What I forgot to say, Eden has that flaw of being immature at times from her dad. He should know after all those years when it's time to stop teasing Nick. And Nick should watch himself as well but given the situation where he's in I get that he's annoyed. Like I said, I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Yes, Eden is a lot like her dad, lol. Nick and AJ still act like they are teenagers. It might not turned out good.
Date: 10/28/11 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Their own seperate fights with Leah and AJ are only driving them in each others arms even more. Can't hardly wait for that bomb to explode between them and Eden's parents. Update soon please, you know thay I'm addicted to this story of yours! ;)
Author's Response: AJ and Leah have know clue that they are bringing them closer. I'm glad you are enjoying the stories. Your reviews mean a lot. : -)
Date: 10/28/11 04:42 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh man! if AJ only knew he was talking about his daughter like that. nice job!
Author's Response: I know...lol. Just wait until he finds out.
Date: 10/28/11 12:28 am Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks! More coming soon.
Date: 10/27/11 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh I knew it would turn out bad. Now fore her parents to find out. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite.
Author's Response: Yes, things are going to be rough for a little while. It's coming soon and you will be surprised. Thanks!
Date: 10/27/11 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
Uff!
I guess we're in for some drama!
What I don't like about Eden is her attitude towards her family. She can't forget her mom was once with Nick, but she doesn't give Him grief over it?
You can clearly see her inmature side when she's around her family!
Author's Response: Yes, some drama will be starting. Eden's had issues with her parents since she was a teenager. The whole Leah, Brian, AJ situation started the issues with her parents. Eden doesn't know about her mom and Nick yet, but will soon. Yes, Eden is still very much a 19 year old and act like the teenager she is. Thanks for reading. I love when people get annoyed with my characters because I feel bad for the McLean's and wish they could fix it.
Date: 10/26/11 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 18
ohhh can't WAIT for Leah to show up!! Great job!
Author's Response: I smell trouble, or at least some drama....lol.
Date: 10/26/11 10:11 am Title: Chapter 18
Is it a good thing that Her mom would be hanging out with her while Nick is not around? Mothers can always read their children like an open book... excited to know if Leah would find anything about Nick and Eden. :)
Author's Response: Leah still is trying to figure out why Eden really came to Tennessee. She loves her daughter but doesn't understand her.
Date: 10/26/11 09:03 am Title: Chapter 18
Now why do I think Eden's mom is coming to spy on her? Then she does miss her daughter too. I hope they can repair their relationship. Especially before she finds out about Eden Nick. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Leah definitely checking up on Eden, lol. She does miss Eden.
Date: 10/26/11 03:53 am Title: Chapter 18
Amazing job can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/26/11 02:27 am Title: Chapter 18
They are so cute together but me thinks eden& mom are about to strain their relationship even more
Author's Response: It is going to be interesting having Eden and her mom alone together.
Date: 10/26/11 02:26 am Title: Chapter 18
aww its sad that she doesn't get along well with her mom..my mom is my bestfriend..she is like my mom and my dad actually! I have a feeling this is when she will find out about her mom and nick .oh man the shit is gonna hit the fan...please update soon as always was a great chapter cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Eden's relationship with her mom has been strained for quite a while. Eden is not going to happy when she finds out about her mom and Nick. I'm glad you have a great relationship with you mom. My mom is my best friend, too. :-)
Date: 10/24/11 05:25 am Title: Chapter 17
Ok, I don't know if it's wrong of me, but I get just as frustrated as Eden everytime AJ calls! lol!
he shouldn't react that way!
And I'd really love it if Eden was the one to tell her parents, just for the reaction!
-“Holy shit, she sounds hot. With those sexy noises she’s making, she must be good in bed.” - I don't know why, but I found this so funny! lol!
Author's Response: I agree, I would be frustrated, too. LMAO. AJ's comment was so him. Just think about when he realizes who Nick was in bed with, then he won't think it was so hot. Thanks for reading.
