Date: 10/10/11 02:38 am Title: Chapter 13
WOW!!!! That was sexy. And drunk or not Nick seemed to know what he was doing. I just hope they don't regret it in the morning. Excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I'm sure Nick knows what he's doing even when he is drunk. He has the skills in that department...lmao. Actually he's drunk, but not shit-faced. The alochol made him feel good. LOL!
Date: 10/10/11 02:32 am Title: Chapter 13
BRAVO!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/10/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter 12
okay I need a cold shower & you have even got the good stuff yet. I think he may pass out once they get to his place
Author's Response: Cold shower definitely comes to my mind when reading...lol. They definitely have a chemistry. The next part is coming soon.
Date: 10/09/11 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Very hot. I can see why she would be in a rush but I'm wondering how she will feel when Nick regrets it in the morning when he sobers up. Although to be honest if I was in her position I would do the exact same thing she is doing. Evil cliffhanger. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I know this story is making me evil. It seems to have lots of cliffhangers....lol. I think I would do the same thing if I were in Eden's position. I wonder how Nick will react in the morning. It will probably be hard on Eden, too.
Date: 10/09/11 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great update cant wait for you to continue this story where u left off. It very hot I hope it get steamy once u update the next chapters. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! It is going to get steamy in the next chapter.
Date: 10/09/11 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'd race all the way to his house too! AWESOME job Lady! :)
Author's Response: Me, too. The speeding ticket would be worth it. Thanks!
Date: 10/09/11 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awesome chapter I wonder if Eden will go through with it ......lol I would please update
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know about Eden, but if I was her I would...lol
Date: 10/08/11 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg...such an awesome chapter! i love it..first off anybody that is stupid enough to call nick carter old..fuck that ..he may be getting older age wise but he just keeps getting better with age..he's aging like fine wine..oh man i do hope nick makes it clear to eden she is not now nor will she ever be just aj's daughter, or the rebound girl..he's so in love with her..i hope and pray he remembers..and oh dear lord i'd have died and gone to heaven if he licked me...lol i cant wait for the car scene!!!update soon please!!
Author's Response: I agree that Nick is like fine wine.. He definitely gets hotter as he ages. I hope Nick tells Eden how he feels because he has feelings for her, but he's a guy so it might take a while. It's only going to get hotter.
Date: 10/08/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh it's gonna be a long night alright ;)
Author's Response: It sure is and it's only gett hotter. LOL!
Date: 10/08/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for trying to update for me today! I'm trying to outline a story with Scrivener for the Nanowrimo contest. It will be in Dutch though.. Did you ever consider to take part in Nanowrimo? Love, Pauline.
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't update yesterday. My internet was acting up. What is Nanowrimo? You got me curious.
Date: 10/08/11 11:49 am Title: Chapter 11
Great story can't wait to read more please update soon. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it.
Date: 10/08/11 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Nick needs to be clear with Eden, she's already thinking that she is just the rebound girl to him. Glad that I made you smile. I'm so hoping for another update today!
Author's Response: He will definitely be clear with her in the next chapter or so. I will try to have an update for you today.
Date: 10/08/11 05:40 am Title: Chapter 11
that kiss. omg! he may be drunk but he wont forget
Author's Response: Yes, I think thay kiss will be forever remembered by him. He's drunk, but he's still partially aware of everything tgat is happening.
Date: 10/08/11 05:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh man what I would give to be in her shoes. Yum him in that car oh the fun I could have. Excellent work as always. Post more you left a cliffhanger.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Wouldn't we all. I''' admit it I'm jealous of Eden. I have some ideas for the car. The next chapter will be hotter....I promise. I'm evil with the cliffhanger....lmao.
Date: 10/07/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh, too sad Sarah left him. I'm hoping for more :)
Author's Response: Sarah just had enough. The chemistry was gone. Thanks for reading.
