Date: 11/12/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Finally got around to reading this. There's something weird about Justin and Tessa....and I think Nick is still alive cause you listed him as a character ;) just an observation. All of this is very intriguing and I like it :) great job so far, Lore!!!
Author's Response:
everyone thinks there is something weird with them.. LOL... they are just new volunteers! LOL. Justin is just shy. LOL. Brian is listed as a character too but he's not been in the story either. ;) thanks for the review Tracy.
Date: 11/11/11 06:28 am Title: Chapter 8
hmm the two new travelers are suspicious I need more
Author's Response:
those two travelers are a bit off... thanks for the review Patti
Date: 11/11/11 06:25 am Title: Chapter 7
omg I missed this update!!! I hope they find out what steph injected Julie with.
Author's Response:
we shall see if they figure out what she was injected with. Thanks for the review Patti.
Date: 11/10/11 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hope Howie has some answers now!
Looking forward to more Lore, loving this :)
Author's Response:
I hope Howie can figure out something too. It would be nice if he could figure it out and then she could stop jumping and continue on with her happy existence with Kevin ;) LOL Thanks for the review Steph! :D
Date: 11/10/11 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
I wonder what she was injected with too, especially if she thought she was only gone a little while but really it's been two weeks. Wonder what Steph did to her?
Author's Response:
curiouser and curiouser... :) Thanks for the review Steph
Date: 11/10/11 07:13 am Title: Chapter 8
I can't help but feel there's something off about Justin and Tessa... future rogues, maybe??
Yeah, how DO they have money to spend? lol
I was honestly sitting on the edge of my seat, expecting her to just vanish into thin air at any point during the meal...
Author's Response:
I don't know you are suspicious of them because they are new characters?? money... lol... Charles is a smart man and has lots of patents and inventions and yah businesses giving him research grants... fun times. LOL you never know when she might/if she might vanish again. Thanks for the review Karin. :-D
Date: 11/07/11 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
I wanted to tell Julie that' what she got to pay for being stubborn and impulsive, but then againshe just wanted to help everyone by capturing Steph. Hope Howie would able to figure out what Steph injected to Julie. Nice twists you're having there, Lore, but I'm still waiting for Nick to appear. :)
Author's Response:
Why does everyone think Nick is still alive? geeah... lol. Yes, Julie needs to learn to look before she leaps. I don't think she ever stopped to consider the information she was given by Kyle... hrm... Thanks for the review Ritz.
Date: 11/07/11 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
WTF? Julie is one stubborn girl.... Hope the information she got was worth letting Kyle go.
Author's Response:
yah she is. She gets it in her head about something and won't let it go. She is after Steph in a bad way and won't let anything stand in her way, even common sense! LOL. Thanks for the review Ritz.
Date: 11/06/11 08:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Damn that sounds awful. Must've taken all her strength. What the heck did Steph do to her, what if she keeps jumping. Crap!!!
Aw Kevin is such a softie!
Author's Response:
Steph is pretty evil... we shall see, we shall see... Is Kevin a softie wrong? I think he probably could be
Date: 11/03/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh no!!!! you can't leave it like this!!! update!
Author's Response:
I can leave it and I did :p LOL... thanks for the review :)
Date: 11/03/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
Julie really should've waited for Kevin! I'm glad she was giving Steph a good beating, just a shame Steph had to catch her by surprise with the needle. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
She should have waited, but I knwo I wouldn't want to always depend on someone to get something done. Maybe she thought Steph would view her as weak if she needed Kevin to be there with her? Thanks for the reivew Steph!
Date: 11/03/11 09:49 am Title: Chapter 6
See Julie that's what happens when you don't listen. Ugh. Steph got smart thsi time and she was already waiting for her. NOW WHAT?!?!?!?
Author's Response:
yes, not listening and going off on your own BAD!! Was she smart or is there something more to Steph being there.. hrmmmmm... We shall see where this leads. Thanks for the review Erika.
Date: 11/03/11 09:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Ya know, Julie is looking for trouble. Does she not remember what happene dthe last time she decided to go off on her own. Seriously! Well le'ts hope that Kyle doesn't beat her to the punch and gives Steph a heads up.
Kevin and Jessica are gonna be hella pissed.
Author's Response:
I know right, it's like she doesn't learn from past mistakes she's made!! LOL... that and she likes to do things on her own, stubborn lil... Oh yes Kevin will not react well to this I wouldn't think. Maybe she thinks because Nick is dead she's safe? Thanks for the review Erika.
Date: 11/02/11 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Julie really shouldn't go off on her own. Nothing good ever comes of going solo! But I wonder whether Kyle gave her the right information to lead her to Steph, it could be a trap or something.
Author's Response:
You would think she'd learn from the first time around not to pursue people on her own but she's a stubborn one... Thanks for the review Steph.
Date: 11/01/11 06:16 am Title: Chapter 5
I just love how strong willed she is... Good job!
Author's Response:
lol... I don't even remember what this chapter was at this point. :( Thanks for the review Karin
