Date: 10/29/11 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh no... what if Kyle beats her to steph? she going to be prepared for her!!! eeek bad Julie! ok I need more!
Author's Response:
she's a tad obsessed with finding Steph! It could be the ruin of her. Thanks for the reivew.
Date: 10/26/11 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh great now they took Charles. I still think Nick is behind all this. There has to be a reason she keeps having all these nightmares. So weird.
I love that Kevin is always there to comfort her.
Author's Response:
Yup, Charles is MIA. He might be, he might not be. I don't know how a ghost could be involved though! Nightmares are FUN!!! I had to have something to break the perfectness of her life with Kevin now.. geez. I love that he is too, I want him to comfort me *sigh* I think he'd be better at it then ooooh let's say the man I married. LOL.
Date: 10/26/11 05:39 am Title: Chapter 4
oh no charles is missing!!! I am now sure nick is alive!!! I need more
Author's Response:
Yup Charles has been taken. Or has disappeared, maybe he wanted a break?LOL Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/25/11 11:34 am Title: Chapter 4
oh that dream... I think it was happened when Julie followed Nick in the camp; those were his exact words. I hope nothing bad would happen to Charles... so Erika and AJ do their mission together now too... I am sooooo jealous. lol
Author's Response:
Oh you noticed the exact word thing huh? ;) I hope nothing bad happens to Charles too, he's an importan guy for the project. Yes Erika and AJ going on missions together don't be jealous it's only fiction :-D Thanks for the review Ritz.
Date: 10/25/11 09:53 am Title: Chapter 4
Easy access to Kev, mmm!
I have a feeling that Nick is the one behind it all and not Steph, she's probably his little helper though. I wonder what all these dreams mean? Are they premonitions or are they things that could've happened? Interesting stuff. Wonder who took Charles and what will happen to him.
Looking forward to more Lore. I never would've known that kilts weren't actually Scottish.
Author's Response:
Yes who wouldn't want easy access to Kevin! LOL. I don't know, you have to remember the hell Nick put her through, stabbing her and shooting Kevin. Traumatic experiences, perhaps it's just nightmares? My beta had to ask if kilts were even around in ancient Egypt so I thought I would add that note since when people hear kilt they think of the scottish plaid ones ;) thanks for the review Steph.
Date: 10/24/11 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
I knew it! Deep down inside Julie understood what Nick was fighting for... too bad we couldn't change history.
Author's Response:
I think Julie has always known deep down what Nick stood for, but if you noticed Kevin does too. It's not so much that Nick is wrong wanting to fix things, it's that history will be changed, lives will be altered or non-existent if things were done differently. I know one thing in my personal history I would change and I don't think it would alter much but you can never tell ;) Thanks for the re-review Ritz. :)
Date: 10/23/11 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love all the history knowledge I'm gaining from reading this Lore. I wonder if someone wants them in that time period for a reason, or am I just reading too much into it? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying the historical information in this... though I will warn you some bits in this story won't be real but I will make note of it at the end :) I don't know ... perhaps they were meant to be there.. hrmmmmm thanks for your review Steph.
Date: 10/23/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
If Kyle isn't going to talk, they should just erase his memories and transfer him away, lol.
Oooh ancient Egypt is somewhere I'd go too if I could travel through time.
Author's Response: They really should just get rid of him.... heh... but they won't ;) ancient egypt would be cool to see. Thanks for the review Steph
Date: 10/22/11 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hehe I love that those two get to go on missions together.
Jessica is a trip to me, she's so blunt. Hmmm...I'm thinking something is going to happen...very soon. eeek! Good job Lore!
Author's Response:
yes going on missions together quite fun for them. I am thinking Kevin has some pull about who he goes with... he never used to go with anyone soooo. ;) I like Jessica too, she's great fun so far. I hope my muse sees fit to continue to use her for this story. I don't know... perhaps this story is all about chasing down rogues... what makes you think something is going to happen. ;) Thanks for the review Erika.
Date: 10/22/11 06:23 am Title: Chapter 3
I love your history detail! I would love to go back to egypt.. sigh. btw kevin and julie are so cute together.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I love adding the history parts. When it was first suggested for me to use this time I mentally slapped myself for not thinking of it myself (my Beta rocks) so I set to research it. I was saddened by all the reports stating that the library wasn't burned when Caesar attacked the harbor since that is intially what I intended to write. Well blah, poetic license I used it anyway but added the note at the end :)
I think they are cute together too, and I can't believe I am actually capable of writing a "cute" couple. HEH Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/22/11 05:38 am Title: Chapter 2
OK, I must say that Nick is alive. Yup...yup.
I love Kevin and Julie's little relationship, they are cute together. That Kyle dude is a pain in the arse and gross, but then again Julie and the rest look like bad guys to him. More soon. Sorry I'm all late!
Author's Response:
why do you think Nick is alive just because she is having dreams about him being pure evil to her? yes to Kyle the project are the bad guys. It would be interesting to see the stories from their POV don't you think? hrmmmmm.. .Thanks for the review Erika.. it's never to late to get one from you ;)
Date: 10/21/11 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't know but Kyle's attitude is understandable... well, for me. I just hope they find steph because she might be replacing Nick as these rogue's leader.
Author's Response:
his attitude is understandable, here he is trying to do something that will benefit mankind and he gets captured might possibly lose his memories and she wants information on Steph! LOL. I might have the same reaction. She very well might be the new leader, I'm sure they need one now that Nick is dead. Thanks for the review Ritz.
Date: 10/21/11 02:54 am Title: Chapter 2
i dont know maybe i'm wrong but i have a gut feeling Nick is alive!! eek this starting out good Lore keep the chaps coming...
Author's Response:
thanks girl... you will just have to keep reading to see if Nick lives! LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me.
Date: 10/20/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! a sequel... why does Julie always have problems with shoes? lol I love the team effort! honestly, I was on Kyle's side when I read why he wanted to change history, but changed my mind when I read what would happen to the people who should be dead but survived because of altering the history. That was so brilliant, Lore!
Author's Response:
Julie and her shoes I know! But really, running in high heels.. I think I'd have issues too. Yes, the rogues, it's hard to think they are wrong with what they are doing. Thanks for the review Ritz.
Date: 10/20/11 10:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Exciting stuff Lore! What a cliffhanger to leave it on, I wonder if she's dreaming or is he really back? Kind of reminds me a little of Heroes, the way they are collecting people and putting them in the glass cells, I LOVE Heroes!!
Author's Response:
Yes the glass cells, I've seen it used in several things where they round up people to lock them up. LOL. But yes I did watch Heroes. Thanks for the review Steph!
