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Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/11 06:19 am Title: Chapter 15

huh! howie its howie!!! oh man this is getting good

Author's Response:

you just like that Nick is back and kissing Julie again!! lol. Thanks for the review Patti

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh crap!! *Sings* Who could it be now?



Author's Response:

well now that song is in my head but yay you are caught up!!!! thanks for the review Erika

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 14

 “Once you've had Carter, the rest will have to try harder.” OMG that cracked me up!!!

Wow, this just got really interesting, cause there is so much (good) confusion. Why is Nick being so nice? Why did he pick her? Lord, Julie dont' fall for his nice guy game. I think he has a trick up his sleeve. Although, he had me at "hello" hahaha! I can't wait to find out what happens and no he didn't just kiss her!



Author's Response:

LOL I love that line so much I am glad you found it funny too!!!  confusion, what would a Chronos story be without confusion? LOL.  Oh yes, he DID just kiss her. LOL.  What a putz. thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh crap the poor thing peed herself. I would too. I think. I'm still sketchy about that being Nick...Nick. And why is he being so nice to her??? I'm glad she's not falling for it, but at the same time I want her to hear him out. DAmn you Carter for making me weak!

That Steph! Clobbering her again...sheesh.



Author's Response:

double review!!!! LOL

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh crap the poor thing peed herself. I would too. I think. I'm still sketchy about that being Nick...Nick. And why is he being so nice to her??? I'm glad she's not falling for it, but at the same time I want her to hear him out. DAmn you Carter for making me weak!

That Steph! Clobbering her again...sheesh.



Author's Response:

Yes, weak... he makes many people weak.  LOL. I would probably pee myself too if I was going to be burned alive.  Yes, I think Steph enjoys hurting Julie, what do you think?

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 11:58 am Title: Chapter 15

oh no!!! this is not good.... who could they be? Justin? Tessa?.... post the next chapter now, Lore! :)

Author's Response:

I know, but this was the plot that as I got close to the end of the first one I thought would be cool to use for a sequel so I started it and went with it... if I can get a good plot for a third I have an underlying story that could lead to one. LOL.  Thanks for the review Ritz.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 11:53 am Title: Chapter 12

Oh hell no!! That totally sucks, after such a nice time with Kevin she gets stuck in the era when killing crimals in public was fun! I hope she jumps or something happens before her time!

UGH!



Author's Response:

Yes I know, from some lovin to jail!! LOL I am evil! Thanks for the review Erika

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 11:45 am Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad she was able to confide in someone other than her honey! lol.

Some alone time...isn't she on one with Kevy Kev. Hell I would be too.



Author's Response:

Yes confiding in someone else is nice! It's good to have a friend, and she feels such a bond with Tessa ... reminds her of Edith. LOL Thanks for the review Erika.

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 11:43 am Title: Chapter 10

I'm thinking that Nick is lurking around and she can sense it. It must've been horrible to be in the middle of that protesting mix. Howie has some explaining to do. Finally able to review!



Author's Response:

yay for being able to review, I've missed your reviews!! Nick lurking??? what??? never!! LOL.  yah Kent State would have been horrible to be in the middle of since 3 of the four students that died and quite a few injured weren't even involved WITH the protest, they were just students walking to and from classes.   thanks for the review Erika

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 11:08 am Title: Chapter 15

Aw and once again I've got a soft spot for Nick, damn him!  I wonder who the traitor is though?  I don't think it would be Kevin, but who?  Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Nick is such a tard in my story.. jerk one minute, nice the next. Choose an attitude and stick with it boy!!! LOL. Thanks for the review Steph.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 14

0.o uhm yeah Nick why Julie?!? I need more!

Author's Response:

yah why Julie, that is a good question! LOL.  Thanks for the review, so glad you were able to review. :)

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 06:29 am Title: Chapter 13

ha! Nick is alive!! damn it Julie you should have listened to Nick not that i like him yet he's stll evil for now!

Author's Response:

she freaked out when she saw him.. remember all those other times she saw him and then to find out he's alive.  Pshaw... memories of kevin being shot and herself being stabbed... I'd run too .. Thanks for the review Patti.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/11 06:21 am Title: Chapter 12

ok yay i can review! oh I hope she does jump!!! I know Nick is alive!!!! alive I tell you!!!

Author's Response:

why can I see you standing over a boiling pot of somethig with lighting flashing in the background as you yell that?? LOL.  Thanks for the review Patti

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/11 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 14

“Once you've had Carter, the rest will have to try harder.”

Author's Response:

I know, dorky line right? I HAD to do something like that... he's such a dork I just had to. LOL. Thanks for the review Ritz! :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/11 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

I wonder who helped Nick in the future?  A Kevin look alike, hmm...I have a few ideas but I could be wrong.

I can understand Julie being attracted to Nick, he is a charmer, but I just hope she isn't going to get into something she can't handle.  So that's why she kept seeing Nick everywhere she jumped, because he was there!

Great chapter Lore, can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I don't know who helped Nick in the future, just some guy. LOL.   Nick needs her help, of course he will be charming. LOL.  Glad you enjoyed Steph, thanks for the review.